A Better dump

Started by Phoenix In Flames, August 25, 2010 04:12 PM

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cipher

i like this one. I think Lost Painting is actually probably my favorite song from that game

GhostingFish

Quote from: cipheri like this one. I think Lost Painting is actually probably my favorite song from that game

thanks bro. My fave is "Wondering Ghosts".

GhostingFish

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"Atlina"




btw the real drawing is like 5 in. tall so its small =n=

Sinitron

you really need to clean up your fucking lines

GhostingFish

Quote from: Tron Sawyeryou really need to clean up your fucking lines

sorry :c wysiwyg

rtil

are these drawings tiny or do you just not sharpen your pencil?

GhostingFish

Quote from: rtilare these drawings tiny or do you just not sharpen your pencil?

ha! always asking that lol. Its a small drawing. I know that im not supposed to be drawing small. Bigger stuff soon xD

GhostingFish

blueshift and proxxi sketch

hes her head is jacked up.. im redrawing it tonight..


Sinitron

the problem isn't necessarily that you can't draw

your lines just look like ass and never get better

GhostingFish

So i made a wallpaper to match my fuckin windows XP and its "blue royal" theme.


"LifeLine"


Sinitron

not a fan of the colors also the aliased text sticks out like a sore thumb

go for something that goes well with green, or well with blue

the two of them together kinda looks like ass imo

cipher

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for the first 6 months or so I was on this forum, I read your name as 'GhostFishing'


the more you know


edit: and for something constructive, I have an opinion in regards to the text. The fonts looks a little pixely. I feel like a smooth font would compliment something like that background a bit better. The font you have now is fine, but would look better smoothed out [as I just said].

I also agree with Sin about the bottom text. I would say to lose it completely but I doubt you want to do that as explained earlier in this thread. I'm trying to think of what could be done to make it look better, but nothing is really coming to mind, so I can't complain. I would suggest making the bottom text a little smaller, but I'm not sure if that would help.

iinnkk

This guy doesn't really take much criticism of any kind ¯\_(◕‿◕)_/¯ what a rebel



GhostingFish

[via DSi]

you both are right and im happy that i saved the project beforehand. Never rush things! i rushed with this and look at all these flaws.. the colour choice maches my desktop theme xD thats why its ass. (hint windows is ass) ill put more into this. maybe ill use my tablet for once..

Also everyone fucks up this name. You can call me Tom k or Terry (thanks to j-seed i have that name xD ). If you want to know what "GhostigFish" means, let me know anytime. thanks for the input too. It really helps me and my works grow to become better. Reguardless my shit is the best in my school so sometimes i dont get a since of getting any better with my works. Next i will be working on realism and hopefully figuredrawing! one more year of highschool so i should make the of my time i can so i can go to a great art collage. your input is helpful and now it is time to get real and serious. Do what you can to make the most impact on my works. offend me if you have to! It is what i need to improve. Thankyou tba. you have been a big help and will be a help in the following year.

I will be posting my album "Bridge" part one soon.
I have Google+ invites! want one? P.M. me.
that is all for now.. i think i should do updates like this more..

naturally

you really do make excuses too much.

Sinitron

the problem is that we already have a ghost (hlg/happyleetgost/gost) and a fish (tom, fishtank guy) so calling you either is out of the question, while gf can be confused with girlfriend or if massive nerdage is involved possibly also good fight

Quote from: iinnkkThis guy doesn't really take much criticism of any kind ¯\_(◕‿◕)_/¯ what a rebel
sharpen pencil? fuck nah its part of my STYLE... anime

naturally

Quote from: Tron Sawyeranime

GhostingFish


GhostingFish

BluShift update.


rtil

pose looks a little strange, like she's about to fall on her ass. you might want to consider changing the legs at least.

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