A Better dump

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GhostingFish

Indeed so v.v . I never knew it was so goddamn hard to find a decent sharpener that didn't eat pencils. To wound an artist, take away his sharpener xD

If I don't end up f*cking procrastinating once more, I should be working on proportions etc very soon.

GhostingFish

A vague work in progress:

I'm using a 6H to start then fill in later on after I get the sketch in order. I think it's a good idea to stay active if I post wip's like this now and again before a finished work.


bd648

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ZennyPLUS

please continue, i want to see the end result of this one.

GhostingFish

Quote from: ZennyPLUS on December 12, 2012 05:03 AM
please continue, i want to see the end result of this one.

You will soon enough. I've been getting back-tracked for a while but i'm catching back up to where I feel that I need to be.

Heres an update of it though that I forgot to post:



Concept for one of my stories/novels:



Something a little more down-to-earth.
"Singing a sad song"



Work in progress "Dreams within a Music Box"
http://www.thebackalleys.com/dump/files/1762/800e7Q_020313.mp3



Tardigrade

Concerning the first one you posted of these sketches, I'd say the pose of the figure in the first one seems to look quite unbalanced, perhaps as if they're about to fall backwards. In particular, I feel this is implied with the allocation of the abdomen in contrast with the bent legs. Still, given this is in early stages, I'd imagine this'll probably be meliorated as you progress.


GhostingFish

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Quote from: Tardigrade on February  4, 2013 11:54 AM
Concerning the first one you posted of these sketches, I'd say the pose of the figure in the first one seems to look quite unbalanced, perhaps as if they're about to fall backwards. In particular, I feel this is implied with the allocation of the abdomen in contrast with the bent legs. Still, given this is in early stages, I'd imagine this'll probably be meliorated as you progress.
It will all be fixed as I progress. In general, I will be working on more poses and such, so don't you all worry! ;)

In other news, It's the first time I picked up my drawing tablet in about 8 or so months, and this is the outcome of it so far (though I have like no exp in colouring anything  O_O ) :

(nsfw) "Feara Concept rework 2013 Color WIP" (for a story lol)
find this on dA as well: http://ghostingfish.deviantart.com/#/d5u3qj0
[spoiler]for some reason putting an [  img ] in a spoiler doesnt work  O_O [/spoiler]
As I said, i'm no pro, but don't let that stop ya' from telling me what you think. Hammer me down if you must! xD

rtil

i think it looked better without color.. also her breasts would not be pointing down at the viewer from that angle, we'd be seeing more of an "underboob" perspective.. google image that and you'll see what i mean

bd648

Such relaxing music. Feels like being on a long drive at night as a kid through the city.
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GhostingFish

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Quote from: bd648 on February  7, 2013 03:10 PM
Such relaxing music. Feels like being on a long drive at night as a kid through the city.

Haha, I'm glad that you like it :)

Sorry for the slowness in my responses everyone. Just trying to get my life situated. If you ever want to talk to me though, you know where to find me ;) .

More sketches of sorts: (EDIT For some reason, It wont show the image when placing the image url in the [img ] tag)

"Demda of the Sky" rework 1
http://ghostingfish.deviantart.com/art/Demda-of-the-sky-Concept-360392705

"Demda of the Sky" rework 2
http://ghostingfish.deviantart.com/art/Demda-of-the-sky-Concept-2-361034380


rtil

while i do like the exaggerated proportions of the suits they are in, make sure you watch the body proprtions. like the girls' butt int he 2nd one seems to be absolutely enormous. i mean.. it's ok if you're in to that, but it just feels off.

other than that you are improving quite a bit. you should go over some of these a 2nd time and try your hand at clean lineart for color.

GhostingFish

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Quote from: rtil on April  7, 2013 07:28 AM
while i do like the exaggerated proportions of the suits they are in, make sure you watch the body proprtions. like the girls' butt int he 2nd one seems to be absolutely enormous. i mean.. it's ok if you're in to that, but it just feels off.

other than that you are improving quite a bit. you should go over some of these a 2nd time and try your hand at clean lineart for color.

I kinda spazzed out on the second one with her ass, since I really never drew a side-view of a person before ^^; . I'll go over these two tonight and see what I can do. Maybe i'll fix the ass in the second one. Thanks for your input :)

(EDIT) also, is there any reason why the images wont work with the img tag? It worked with all the other images that i post here before, and I didn't do anything different since then.


ALSO!

New Remix:

I've been working on this the past few weeks here and there since I am in a bit of a music-making slump. This is not finished, but I was able to put a TON of work into it. It aint easy working on an older computer, but I do my best. Please let m know what you think! :D

Delerium - "Silence" (GhostingFish Remix) DEMO
http://www.thebackalleys.com/dump/files/1762/327o7Z_Silence%20%28GhostingFish%20Remix%29.mp3

bd648

the most musically inclined fish i know
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GhostingFish

Quote from: bd648 on April  7, 2013 07:26 PM
the most musically inclined fish i know

Thanks! :D
msg sometime lol

GhostingFish

Hey everyone! I have some more music for ya to listen to. Let me know what you think as always, and advice is always a handy thing. ^^
(due to problems with the tba filedump uploader, the songs will be provided via dropbox)




"Sensorium" (a project that I was working on for Halloween, but then dropped due to computer problems.)
https://www.dropbox.com/s/9rpzpt0sv9urhlw/Sensorium.mp3

"Flux" (did I show you all this one before?)
https://www.dropbox.com/s/lr89pjhzo0u749h/Flux.mp3

"For the love of all things pure"
https://www.dropbox.com/s/3wti1le7vdrdvsl/For%20the%20Love%20of%20all%20things%20Pure%20%28UNOFFICAL%29.mp3

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