A Better dump

[Phoenix In Flames]

Hi, back in my old dump, I was stupid and I sucked. Now I am better and I am trying again.


Tetris! (the Dream Of Moscow)

http://www.thebackalleys.com/dump/files/1667/526m5O_TETRIS%21%20%28The%20Dream%20of%20old%20Russia%29.mp3

Cassandra [TLM Mix]
http://www.thebackalleys.com/dump/files/1667/275O7p_02%20-%20Cassandra%20%5BTLM%20Mix%5D.mp3

[Phoenix In Flames]

[Hnilmik]

Pretty nifty~ I didn't really recognize the Tetris tune 'til near the end of the first listen, but I kinda hear it now that I'm playing it again!

[shura]

some glaring anatomical errors here. for one, her left arm is shorter than her right arm. even the longer right arm is a tad too short to be anatomically correct. her breasts are very uneven, and it looks like her thighs attach to each other at the top instead of attaching to a pelvis. the knees are too skinny as well

[Phoenix In Flames]

Pretty nifty~ I didn't really recognize the Tetris tune 'til near the end of the first listen, but I kinda hear it now that I'm playing it again!

I was going more tword the old Russion folk song "The Korobeiniki", in which the tetris song came from.

Example:
[!--quoteo(post=0:date=:name=The Korobeiniki)--][div class=\'quotetop\']QUOTE(The Korobeiniki)[/div][div class=\'quotemain\'][!--quotec--]http://www.thebackalleys.com/dump/files/1667/8279kP_Korobeniki.mp3
http://www.thebackalleys.com/dump/files/1667/764tT4_korobeiniki%201.mp3[/quote]

I'm not Russion but I feel like I am Russion.

[Hnilmik]

As for the drawing, Shura put it best.

[Phoenix In Flames]

I know. The flaws are less conspicuous if the scan wasn't 8 times bigger then the original drawing.

[rtil]

i was kinda waiting for something in the tetris song to happen. i think you could expand on it

[Phoenix In Flames]

i was kinda waiting for something in the tetris song to happen. i think you could expand on it

Like I said on NG,

"This wont be my only Tetris song. It was a test with the beat and tone samples. If you can see, It is not off-beat."

[Phoenix In Flames]

This is much better.
Tetris!!  
http://www.thebackalleys.com/dump/files/1667/277lS6_Tetris%20%5BTLM%20mix%5D.mp3

[rtil]

Like I said on NG,

"This wont be my only Tetris song. It was a test with the beat and tone samples. If you can see, It is not off-beat."

implying i go to newgrounds

[Phoenix In Flames]

Is that a question or a statment?

[ZekeySpaceyLizard]

Stick to music.

[ViolaDude]

This is much better.
Tetris!!  
http://www.thebackalleys.com/dump/files/1667/277lS6_Tetris%20%5BTLM%20mix%5D.mp3

thats a pretty Sick beat bro

[MarcK]

the knees are too skinny as well

what knees

[Phoenix In Flames]

Check this out

Some Freaky Song
http://www.thebackalleys.com/dump/files/1667/849nT6_Some%20Freaky%20Song.mp3

[emanhattan]

I have to admit that,despite all of the errors mentioned by sashura, I kinda like that character on your first post and it seems to me youve improved a bit since your last art thread.

try to practice more anatomy and drawing in general s you can loosen up from some of your bad drawing habits.

[Phoenix In Flames]

thanks

[slantedskarekrow]

eman is right the character in this threat is bettet then the other stuff you posted, I don't think i have much advice i could ad but keep practicing.

[Phoenix In Flames]

TBA promo demo!!
This one is called "Monsters". I didn't give it that name. Its a remake. Its flawed but its almost compleat.  

[UPDATE] http://www.thebackalleys.com/dump/files/1667/293If3_GLM%20PROMO%20-%20%5BTLM%5D%20-%20Monsters%20%20%5BTLM%20Mix%5D.mp3
And for the art...

I lost my pencel so I used a gel pen. Then I found it. The Robot Girl needs a name. Any Ideas?