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[rtil]

wont be posting this anywhere else until tomorrow cuz i had some issues with the timelapse video that goes along with it. but i figure i post it here since it is done

[cipher]

[G3no]

This is going to kick ass when you color it

Yep.

I really like that you added those ships back there and the bridge on top

[BluPhoenix]

i wonder how much space cash it took to build it all

[Sheepy]

This is going to kick ass when you color it

Yep.

I really like that you added those ships back there and the bridge on top

ALL OF IT IS PERFECT

[rtil]

thanks near the end i felt like the sky was so empty and i didnt want to paint clouds so i started messing around. and i ended up liking it. and here is the timelapse video for anyone interested:
lets go to my house - timelapse painting by rtil

[ZennyPLUS]

Holy crowded cities, batman. I noticed you used some different designs in terms of architecture for your buildings, probably cause this isn't a super futuristic piece I imagine. I like sir.

EDIT: Fuck, you added ships. IMO, the sky looked perfect without ships, I feel it was more balanced without. Still good picture nonetheless.

[naturally]

i love how much life you gave it comparatively to the lineart. i especially like the vehicle near the orange haired girl's right foot.

[rtil]

personally i thought the sky was too boring being empty like that. the little vehicle was from an older sketch of mine.

[rtil]

4 down, 1 to go 
[swf]http://www.thebackalleys.com/dump/files/1/9934qB_rin-container.swf[/swf]

[dilly]

it was so glorious i pooped my pants

[ZennyPLUS]

Godspeed Rin, and good flight.

[rtil]

ok guys, i'd like some feedback on this one. this is the animatic for ks lilly's good and neutral ending (she doesn't have a bad ending). if you haven't played them and want to, don't watch this because these are spoilers.
[swf]http://thebackalleys.com/dump/files/1/4514Ws_lilly-container.swf[/swf]
if you haven't seen the ending , but aren't going to play it , read the spoilers below and tell me if the connection was clear
[spoiler]good ending: lilly is leaving for scotland forever, but you decide to chase after her. however, your heart acts up and you fail to catch her even though you see her at the airport, and you think you are going to die at the airport. but you wake up in the hospital, and the music box you gave her starts playing, and she's at the door.

in my version i am doing a recreation of cowboy bebop episode 5 ballad of fallen angels 'green bird' segment, where hisao is seeing flashbacks of his life starting from iwanako's letter through all of lilly's route. he doesn't fall out the window in the game... but i wanted it to be just like spike being thrown out the cathedral window by vicious.

neutral ending: you lie to her too much, causing her to make her decision to leave final.[/spoiler]

[Evelynn]

Omg, yes! I love the cowboy bebop feel and ending. I can't really think of any constructive input for this one, imo you hit it pretty well.

[rtil]

alright, thanks!

[cipher]

I certainly enjoyed it as well, even though it made no sense to me

[CVG]

I like that you ripped a line from Aladdin hahaha that's my fav part! Also I never saw cowboy bebop so obviously I couldn't relate to the fact it's a homage to it. But out of all the ones you've done that happy ending was the most intense and at the end made me go "awww she's right there at the door... how sweet and sappy" *hacks blood* (in a positive kind-of-way heh).

[harrison2142]

Hah, I really enjoyed the ending, looking forward to the finished animation.

[Flash]

i don't know the slightest thing about katawa shoujo but that cowboy bebop thing was cool (best ending to an anime i've seen so of course i would like it)
nice feels

[rtil]

works for me i've finished the animation up to the first part of hisao falling out the window, which is probably the hardest part of it all.