Wip

[rtil]

don't use those three shades of skin tones like you're doing now. use one color for the light, one for the dark. if you want to add variation later, save it for only if you're doing soft shading. and in 99% of lighting situations, the darkest tone would actually be next to the the lightest tone, not away from it. this is what i'm talking about: http://njw61.deviantart.com/art/A-study-in...adow-2-87079224

notice where the darkest skin colors are. it doesn't make sense at first but that is how light works and it's something you never notice unless you start painting and really look

[squffin]

great job!

fuck u plz

[lenko]

try some more interesting tones for shadin', rather than greys

try blues and purples and oranges and like totally everything man i think it'll make your art look buzzin

[GRINACE]

although her arms are too thin, they need more muscle mass

Yeah I was trying not to make it to big.

don't use those three shades of skin tones like you're doing now. use one color for the light, one for the dark. if you want to add variation later, save it for only if you're doing soft shading. and in 99% of lighting situations, the darkest tone would actually be next to the the lightest tone, not away from it. this is what i'm talking about: http://njw61.deviantart.com/art/A-study-in...adow-2-87079224

notice where the darkest skin colors are. it doesn't make sense at first but that is how light works and it's something you never notice unless you start painting and really look

hey thanks, the referance really helps. I just keep on thinking that there is only one light and thats my problem.

try some more interesting tones for shadin', rather than greys

try blues and purples and oranges and like totally everything man i think it'll make your art look buzzin

hey thanks for the tip! I totally forgot about that to use different colros than gray for shading.

[GRINACE]

[size=]Would like critique on this.[/size]

idk where the hand should be here.
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another Sz character.
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random character.
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need 2 finish the backround
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[99]

Love the face on the the third dude!

[rtil]

hand on the first looks good to me. girl in the 2nd pic feels a little 'noodley' if you know what i mean, i think she needs more structure to her.third guy has some proportion issues with his arms and legs.  either that or his pants are falling off. i would suggest trying that pose (get a bat), take a pic of yourself. it's a very awkward pose, i don't think anyone would stand like that. fourth is suffering from that static texture issue again and i think you could pick better colors. i think a washed out pallete suits you more

[anigen]

i'd go practice figure drawing women

your guys are looking a lot better tho

[GRINACE]

go practice figure drawing women

im tryin,

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[shura]

i think you should make the legs longer

[GRINACE]

for both?

[creamcorn]

i honestly think the legs are fine, but because they have baggy clothes you cant tell the proportions right.
i mean look at where the hips are, if he makes his legs any longer hell look awkward

IMO!

but the girl barely has shoulders:(

[GRINACE]

praticing my freehand, i defnatly need to work on faces...

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another one

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[99]

I would put a wee bit more crown on the head of her head.  Other than that she looks like on spunky sonuvabitch!

[GRINACE]

crown?

[shura]

i honestly think the legs are fine, but because they have baggy clothes you cant tell the proportions right.

ah okay, yeah the baggy pants threw me off

I would put a wee bit more crown on the head of her head.

i think you mean put a wee bit more hair on the crown of her head?

[GRINACE]

Another freehand sketch

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dont ask lol.

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[GRINACE]

another freehanded pic that came out beter than I hoped. il color it later.

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[GRINACE]

One of yungjazz's characters.

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[rtil]

sharpen your pencil more often