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Started by GRINACE, January 3, 2009 07:34 AM

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shitturtle

that's great, but the eyes make it look like a bad oc

GRINACE

^Eh it happens.^



Tryed some perspective with Tba's Least respected character, GRIN!



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jjjjjjjjjj

Pretty goddamn neat yeah!
Lookin real good now


rtil

you kiddin me grin's got his own damn smiley what more could you want in this world

FrozenSheep

Haha, these are nice.

GRINACE

Quote from: rtilyou kiddin me grin's got his own damn smiley what more could you want in this world


This time I was using Sarcasm .

GRINACE

Wip
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I dont find myself great at coloring.

rtil

i think you're more suited to cel shading or at least mostly cel shading

stevenr4

Pretty cool!
I define people by what they do,
not what they say they do.

GRINACE

Quote from: rtili think you're more suited to cel shading or at least mostly cel shading


Yeah, its because I been doing cel shading since I got here. Im way more used to it than soft shading, I mean if I had to shade this on paper, black and white. It would be much better. My personal problem is that I honestly don't understand how to do a similar shading that I do on paper on photoshop. you know what im trying to say?

rtil

yeah, and i think it's important to not treat photoshop like paper. naturally the brushes are all very air-brushy and that's almost always bad. if you want to use soft shading, try doing cel shading first, then blending where there aren't hard edges later.

GRINACE

ways to imporve this? (dont worry about the shading)

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rtil

the face doesn't match the head. the angle is off. i'd erase it and try again. her arms are also radically different sizes. i'd re-consider how you outline the breasts as well

SnawsBall

I wasn't digging the face too much on that last one, but prety neat stuff

Fuzz

The face is definitely off. I didn't notice the arms much...
Some of her hair is shaded that doesn't look like it should be... or there is some that isn't shaded that should be...
Also her hair doesn't seem to cast a shadow on her shoulders.

f0d

legs are fine, everything else could use some touching up
I have more of a life writing this review at 1145 pm than you guys do making these movies. . .

GRINACE

Wip
#36
For Shadow fox, Ill color it eventually.
fixed it a bit.

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rtil

those cables sticking out of the turntable should be using the same point-of-view as the thing they're coming out of. which would just make them circles, but why not? they're distracting and give the focus away from the point of the picture, which i'm pretty sure is shadowfox

shura

i love the pic of shadowfox. no criticism there.

the picture of the girl is good, but her left arm looks waaaaaaay longer than her right arm

GRINACE

outa boredom, drw in a more cartoony style.

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