Wip

[rtil]

you should do a couple bounces instead of just one. it's too rough as well, and the timing is too even. remember, more time in the air and less time on the ground.

[mishkamash]

grin have you looked at my bouncing ball thing?
make it look something like that but instead of bouncing everywhere make it slow down and bounce less to a stop
look up tutorials if you need to

[GRINACE]

someone asked me to make grinachi a girl and I failed.

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[99]

ouch

[GRINACE]

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[mishkamash]

the second one is a lot more anime-ish than id expect
they look good though

[GRINACE]

any more critique guyz?

[tmk]

on that first pic the positioning of the arms and the leg in front look pretty unnatural

did you sketch the underlying body before drawing the wings? if not, make sure you do next time

[shura]

well, i think it's admirable that you're trying to draw people from all these weird angles in really complicated postures, but i think they just come out looking really weird or unnatural a lot of times. i think you should keep practicing simple stuff so that you can be more successful with the crazy shit

[GRINACE]

on that first pic the positioning of the arms and the leg in front look pretty unnatural

did you sketch the underlying body before drawing the wings? if not, make sure you do next time

Yeah I did but I failed at it lol

i think you should keep practicing simple stuff so that you can be more successful with the crazy shit

I dont understand simple stuff, its too complicated for me.

[rtil]

I dont understand simple stuff, its too complicated for me.

[CoolDrMoney]

I think you should invest time into making your girls sexier

This is extremely important since theres no such thing as ugly or semi attractive women in the real world

[GRINACE]

I dont understand simple stuff, its too complicated for me.

Its intended as a joke but serously speaking. I Find it harder to draw something straightforward rather than with perspective, Idk why.

I think you should invest time into making your girls sexier

This is extremely important since theres no such thing as ugly or semi attractive women in the real world

Lmfao.

[GRINACE]

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[Fuzz]

That hurts to look at...

[GRINACE]

uhh, why?

[SHADOWFOX2]

Come to think of it, Fuzz's kinda right...
I can tell what it is, but it all seems unnatural
This was in Flash right?

[GRINACE]

yes

[rtil]

outlines should get thinner/lighter as you get further into the horizon
it's a decent sketch but if you ever cleaned it up and colored it keep that in mind

[Mightydein]

uhh, why?

Because pure black outlines with unchanged thickness settings tend to look very harsh on more complex drawings.