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[Fuzz]

It's really hard to focus on whatever I'm trying to look at. Kinda like looking at one of those pictures where you have to let your eyes go out of focus to see the picture.

[SHADOWFOX2]

I agree it's like one of those drawings that could look like something else if you switch up on how you view it.

[YungJazz]

I think you should invest time into making your girls sexier

This is extremely important since theres no such thing as ugly or semi attractive women in the real world

Pwn't! Cuz I was being completely and utterly serious  

[GRINACE]

^lol yj

[GRINACE]

Hey guys can you please critque my work? it will be much appreciated.

[FG_SPace]

they are only sketches. nice sketches but not much to critique

[GRINACE]

random girl

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[GRINACE]

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[FG_SPace]

dina looks great, color it. second one needs some cleaning up. third one what?

[shura]

jesus christ. grinace what happened?? these 3 pics are so anatomically broken, i don't even know where to start

first pic: the girl's right leg that's supporting her is waaaaay too skinny. it looks like a twig compared to her left leg (the one that's raised up). The calf of the raised leg is way too narrow near the bottom. there's no way her ankle would be that tiny.
also, her left hand looks kinda fucked up.

second pic: torso is too long, and the way it's bent just looks extremely unnatural

third pic: her upper arms look so distorted and thin, and her elbow joint just juts out so unnaturally. it's like someone just sucked out all her bone, muscle, and fat tissue out of her arm leaving her normal forearm attached to a swinging tube of skin. her shoulders are non-existant and her face is just bad. her left eye is too elevated and her chin needs work. it looks like you were caught between two different perspectives and didn't know which one to go with. Also, her legs are different widths.

i know you say that you can't understand drawing simple drawings in simple perspectives, but i really think you're biting off more than you can chew. try something easier. you really need to work on making your characters symmetrical. each limb is a different size, and just wrong.

[Ukinojoe]

I hate to say this but

I can't look at that last one without thinking her arm is a dick

[Fuzz]

I hate to say this but

I can't look at that last one without thinking her arm is a dick

I thought that at first too...

[GRINACE]

jesus christ. grinace what happened?? these 3 pics are so anatomically broken, i don't even know where to start

first pic: the girl's right leg that's supporting her is waaaaay too skinny. it looks like a twig compared to her left leg (the one that's raised up). The calf of the raised leg is way too narrow near the bottom. there's no way her ankle would be that tiny.
also, her left hand looks kinda fucked up.

second pic: torso is too long, and the way it's bent just looks extremely unnatural

third pic: her upper arms look so distorted and thin, and her elbow joint just juts out so unnaturally. it's like someone just sucked out all her bone, muscle, and fat tissue out of her arm leaving her normal forearm attached to a swinging tube of skin. her shoulders are non-existant and her face is just bad. her left eye is too elevated and her chin needs work. it looks like you were caught between two different perspectives and didn't know which one to go with. Also, her legs are different widths.

i know you say that you can't understand drawing simple drawings in simple perspectives, but i really think you're biting off more than you can chew. try something easier. you really need to work on making your characters symmetrical. each limb is a different size, and just wrong.

Finally some criquite!  (lol i totaly didnt do these like that on purpose )
thanx, ill remake these later on when im at home.

[GRINACE]

Tryed something new that I know im not used to.



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[rtil]

i know you said simple stuff is too complicated but you really need to get over it and go back to the basics . there are a couple good things about this painting but the issues with it overshadow them. the eye, the nose and the lips are all on different planes then the face, the head is disproportioned, and the style of the hair doesn't match the textures of the rest of the painting. this all stems from a weak sketch that lacks fundamentals, in where you end up with the phrase 'polishing a turd'. don't get me wrong - you have come a long way. but don't start skipping parts of the process. you should do studies and sketches of people and understand the anatomy before you start painting them.

[GRINACE]

ill get onto it right away.

[Wasim]

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[GRINACE]

One of the most simplest poses I can think of lol.

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[GRINACE]

Somthing I sketched up b4 the realistc one

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[lenko]

head looks like one of the new transformers

the perspective on the left glove looks really off! try and think in 3D shapez

pretty cool design though