If I'm fucking up, stop me now

[YungJazz]

I'm concocting a new flash (pending title is Devil's Advocates, but at this point it's still subject to my ADD), and this is the first I've EVER done using brush animation. If I'm fucking up ANYWHERE, make sure to tell me early so I can fix it. I only plan to be working on this for a month or so.

I working on two scenes at the same time, so there's more to be added to that little commercial thing at the beginning.

[SnawsBall]

Holy shit, fucking NICE !!! Don't stop dude, you're so fucking good. Can't wait to see more.

[rtil]

the cities are cool
keep working on it
and don't use your ADD as an excuse for anything

[Michelle]

i have no idea what is going on in the first part. i can't tell where they are or who's doing what. i suggest not letting the arm pop out of thin air so i know it's the lady doing it, and to show the girl actually grabbing the flower. you said there's more to be added so i'll just stop getting all frustrated

i like the news voice lol
and nice city design, how come there are buildings inside them?

[psi43]

ever since you started using the brush you improved a lot

I like it

[FG_SPace]

yea same as michelle, no idea whats going on in the first part. make the voice a little clearer. everything else looks really good though. personally i don't like that the little robot guy doesn't have an outline like the humans do cause he blends into the background a little, but i guess its a style thing and isn't a huge deal if its consistent.

[Crabarms]

Keep going!

[Sonni]

I think it looks pretty promising. Don't stop.

[Daveb0t]

The gradient on the robot looks out of place.  May I suggest expirimenting with the soften edge fills under Modify-Shape

[notorious]

ok well first one to complain, it reminded me a little too much of freetown after the talking part. The futuristic freetown looking cities were no big deal, the shot of the feet hanging over the edge like in the beginning of Metropolis Circuit was a little too much. Also it was pretty good.

[ZekeySpaceyLizard]

that song in the first part

what is it

i know it from something but i'm too tired/drunk/smelly to remember what

[YungJazz]

Thx for the advice, Zekey, first song is http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/100395

ok well first one to complain, it reminded me a little too much of freetown after the talking part. The futuristic freetown looking cities were no big deal, the shot of the feet hanging over the edge like in the beginning of Metropolis Circuit was a little too much. Also it was pretty good.

I do see some of the resemblance, but I began this series in Spring 2006 (Long before Metropolis Circuit came out, because I wasn't aware rtil existed before that), and it was always futuristic. Yeah rtil's inspired me alot, but his stuff HEAVILY influenced by Jet Grind Radio too. I can't see you taking away points for feet kicking.

[sQueef]

i can take away points for feet kicking watch


points taken away for feet kicking

opwned

[Michelle]

Thx for the advice, Zekey, first song is http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/100395

whoaa i thought it would be from some bad boy musician coz i was digging it too

[f0d]

the city backgrounds remind me of zekey

[Daveb0t]

Thx for the advice, Zekey, first song is http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/100395

whoaa i thought it would be from some bad boy musician coz i was digging it too

Wait what is that supposed to mean?

[Michelle]

as in i thought it was by a pop artist

then again apparently he used samples

[adamant]

the city backgrounds remind me of zekey

i can see that, at least when it comes to old school zekey
the windows are too liney to be zekey though