Rat's vomit.

MRat · January 21, 2008 08:11 PM

Yeah I'm going to go ahead and post all my eyerape drawings in here. A couple to start, many more to come this week probably.

Hitman guy thing:

Carr, a character from a comic I'm penciling:

rtil · January 21, 2008 08:17 PM

on the 2nd drawing his clothes (especially his shirt) are folding in strange places, and his sleeves seem to be defying the laws of gravity. i suggest you do some cloth studies. you have the right idea, but they're in the wrong places

MRat · January 21, 2008 08:21 PM

Quote from: rtilon the 2nd drawing his clothes (especially his shirt) are folding in strange places, and his sleeves seem to be defying the laws of gravity. i suggest you do some cloth studies. you have the right idea, but they're in the wrong places

well the folds on the front of the shirt are intentionall strange and flipped up like that. As for the sleaves, I see your point.

zomfgbie · January 21, 2008 08:22 PM

the shading and designs are awesome. could be a lil bolder

MRat · January 21, 2008 08:24 PM

Quote from: FreekCthe shading and designs are awesome. could be a lil bolder

I'm sort of trademarked by my very bland poses and bored looking characters. Everyone I draw, save from the characters in Spider, tend to be totally apathetic or just really bored. And they're posture reflects it I guess haha.

But it's true, I need to get far away from that habbit.

THANKS! either way

psi43 · January 21, 2008 08:25 PM

I like the shading, the left leg of the guy in the second drawing is by far thinner than his right leg though.

Can you post bigger versions?

MRat · January 21, 2008 08:30 PM

Quote from: ΨPsi43I like the shading, the left leg of the guy in the second drawing is by far thinner than his right leg though.

Can you post bigger versions?

haha, so it is! I'll watch for that next time.

As for bigger ones, I'll link, but they're huge and I don't want to kill the forum with the image.

carr: http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs22/f/2008/021...MonsieurRat.jpg

hitman: http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs19/i/2007/305...MonsieurRat.jpg

Nadroj0711 · January 21, 2008 11:16 PM

Quote from: rtili suggest you do some cloth studies.

what a coincidence
i'm majoring in cloth studies

MRat · January 22, 2008 09:32 PM

LOTS OF SHIT! Most of these are horrifying and disgusting. I like a couple. Anyway, comment and critique away. I've probably noticed half the things you mention, but there are so many things wrong anyway that I won't bother listing what I already know.

http://monsieurrat.deviantart.com/gallery/ got there for the Hi-Res ones.

Crabarms · January 22, 2008 09:59 PM

Your first one bothers me just because of how the arms are positioned
but you purposely made the body longer then the legs so maybe the arms
are supposed to be that way.
But the other ones down look pretty good.

zomfgbie · January 22, 2008 10:00 PM

great presprective on the top one

prespective/perspective (?)

MRat · January 22, 2008 11:09 PM

Yeah the arms are intentionally weird. But the drawing sucks anyway, because the arms are supposed to be WAY longer. It's the same character I drew in the front and back views, but his arms are totally different and lame and bad and terrible.

And thanks FreekC! Good to know I have a fan, haha.

trent bortknob · January 23, 2008 03:08 AM

yeah im sure the shitty parts are intentional

MRat · January 23, 2008 03:13 AM

Quote from: tayloryeah im sure the shitty parts are intentional

you're sure wrong then!

adamant · January 23, 2008 04:04 AM

Quote from: MRat
Quote from: tayloryeah im sure the shitty parts are intentional

you're sure wrong then!

"Thanks. I focus mostly on having a strange style, than any particular art fundamentals. I just goof off and try to make things look interesting."

MRat · January 23, 2008 04:15 AM

Quote from: unconditionallyguarANTeed
Quote from: MRat
Quote from: tayloryeah im sure the shitty parts are intentional

you're sure wrong then!

"Thanks. I focus mostly on having a strange style, than any particular art fundamentals. I just goof off and try to make things look interesting."

Your point being what, exactly?

Crabarms · January 23, 2008 04:35 AM

Still cool looking.

MRat · January 23, 2008 04:43 AM

Quote from: crabarmsStill cool looking.

Thanks!

Hammi · January 24, 2008 02:01 AM

I think they all look good. At least better than my crap that float around here like chunks in a sewer. The 2nd pic, i think theres something with that arm. That elbow looks kinda dodgy even though hes wearing a shirt. And a bit longer than the other arm. Rtil is right about the gravity though, i think you need to let those sleeves hang, just like any textiles normally do. But hell, you do better than me. And you definitely dont suck at shading like i do. Im not even into clothing studies that much. I like the comical feel in your drawings, the style.

You got almost everything anatomically correct, you just gotta learn how to put the perspectives steadier and more concentrated. The drawings do hit the spots indeed. Much more detailed than mine xP

MRat · January 24, 2008 02:24 AM

Quote from: HammiYou got almost everything anatomically correct, you just gotta learn how to put the perspectives steadier and more concentrated.

I don't speak Norwegian, could you translate that to English please?

Thanks for the comments though. And yeah those sleaves are hella fucked. HELLA! His left arm is longer than his right because for some reason I thought that was cool. He's "the left hand of God" anyway. It's all in the comic. His left hand is also bigger, if you'll look at that. I'm not sure what you're getting at with the elbow, but thanks for pointing it out. I'll give it a close look for sure.

And yes, I most certainly need to do some cloth studies. Like really badly.

Anyway, I'm glad you like them