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Started by MRat, July 4, 2008 03:20 AM

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MRat

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http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/447253
I was gone, FOR SO LONG

Michelle

ok, i didn't really get it at first
and then sonic came up. ugghghghzsgb

i don't know how much good it will do to say anything positive about this so i think i'll just stop.

Sonni

I'll pass this one.
Quote from: Squeefhollywood just thought itd be cool to make goku an adult who uses uzis and drives ferraris

Thor

rename this to "how NOT to do a walk cycle" and you're golden

rtil

a good warning sign that this is bad is some of the first words in the description "thanks to Chakra-X"


Gerkinman

My review got deleted :(



QuoteThis message is to inform you that the following review, which you left for Xenorealms Intro on 7/4/08 at 3:32:59 AM, has been deleted:

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Score: 2 / 10
Summary: Blergh
Review: This looks about as generic as things get.

The art style has been done to death, im not just talking about anime, but the use of tweens like that and character models with thick black lines, it just looks ugly, theres nothing pleasant about it in the slightest. I like the fact you decided to do your own art rather then use sprites, but even still, whats the point if the art looks horrible.

Then theres the fact your working on your own original series, if thats the case, whats the point of this? Your testing yourself as creators? If you were REALLY testing yourself you would do something original to begin with, making something based on established franchises is hardly a test.

The animation was also all over the place, some parts were mediocre, and other parts, the front on walk cycles for example were absolutely horrible. You would be better off learning the basics of animation at the very least before you start a project of this magnitude.

Now onto my final complaint, your attitude, id like to bring your reply to Hans's comments. In your comment it says constructive criticism is welcome, yet here you are bashing someone after they have given you some. Seems more like your only interested in ass kissing to me. But lets look into this, you say your not interested in what Hans has to say because he is only 18. The fact that he is 18 and has accomplished as much as he has and hes as talented as he is has no bearing on what you think, only the fact that hes 18, and therefor must not be worth paying attention too.

So lets apply this logic of yours to yourself. You claim to be 29, and writing this series with your 25 year old brother. So we can naturally assume then that if you really are 29 and making garbage like this based around video games that you are morbidly obese, living in your mums basement masturbating over naruto hentai because your still a virgin. Hell, your brother is probaby there jacking off with you. Your 29, you should be out working a job trying to support your family without time for crap like megman sonic fanfiction.

Thats how you look when you use your own short minded view of things from the outside.

But hell, why should you listen to me, im only 21, i only work in animation as a living, what do i know.
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Please review the review guidelines in the FAQ to ensure that you're following the rules and to prevent any further action being taken against other reviews you make.

Unfortunately since its been deleted i no longer have his reply, but it was quite amusing.


rtil

now that i'm oh-so-familiar with the review rules, what they got you on is this part:

QuoteNow onto my final complaint, your attitude, id like to bring your reply to Hans's comments. ...

even though you're not really doing it at all, they'll complain you "reviewed someone else's review" and didn't review the flash, or something along those lines. it's complete BS but enough for them to merit a deletion of your critical review. but by all means if you reviewed 10 it's here to stay folks

Gerkinman

Quoteeven though you're not really doing it at all, they'll complain you "reviewed someone else's review" and didn't review the flash, or something along those lines. it's complete BS but enough for them to merit a deletion of your critical review. but by all means if you reviewed 10 it's here to stay folks

Thats some mighty lame shit right there.

Sinitron

they should make me review boss masta i would delete reviews by any user with a number in their name

that includes you, chrome

so if your name was naruto435463 you would get fucked but narutoXsasukeGAY would pass

Thor

heh. One of these days I should try doing what some judges do at speech and debate tournaments, which is a series of incoherent praises and then a low score with absolutely no criticism:

-Good Facial Expressions
-Nice Characters
-Nice Shoes
-I like your tie

1/10


Or should I just go with the tried-and-proven old fashioned harsh review?

MRat

Here's the way to write a review guys. Write a fucking review. Learn some paragraph format, break down your analysis, and write a goddamn review. If you need to, read some pro reviews to understand how it's done, and write one.

If it's deleted, just repost it. Keep doing it.

Write a motherfucking review.
I was gone, FOR SO LONG

wps

only faggots write long reviews explaning why they hate something
Quote from: KingDavidWPS you are really immature, RTIL is a nice normal guy and i'm not kissing his ass either - he's earned his title, and that's my opinion. Why the fuck would you join RTIL's forum if you had a problem with him and his society? I thought you left besides, yes you have talent but that doesn't give you the right to be an arrogant prick - i don't even care if you're joking.
Quote from: deadSTARI'm allowed to be a hypocrite, I'm better than you wps.
Quote from: taylorseriously wps and sinister are the most annoying people on the forums next to like yungjazz and mindchamber

every post by wps is elitist shit in all caps and telling people that they suck
Quote from: f0dwps and sinister are gay with all their hateful shit
Quote from: naruto102get the fuck out of here wps we don't like you
QuotePigletsMemories says:
Your art may be good, but you're still a complete, senseless asshole.

Thor

WPS it's totally legal in Massachusetts, honey.

Kaishu

I didn't read the description and headed straight to the movie. Japanese music?...eh? Oh well I can't tell who this blue guy is. Seems familiar. What! Sonic!  

Animation wise, it was okay...

MRat

Quote from: KaishuI didn't read the description and headed straight to the movie. Japanese music?...eh? Oh well I can't tell who this blue guy is. Seems familiar. What! Sonic!  

Animation wise, it was okay...

If by ok you mean horrendous fucking eyesocket rape.
I was gone, FOR SO LONG

wps

Quote from: ThorWPS it's totally legal in Massachusetts, honey.
EVERYTHING DOES IS LEGAL

STANDS ABOVE DA LAW
Quote from: KingDavidWPS you are really immature, RTIL is a nice normal guy and i'm not kissing his ass either - he's earned his title, and that's my opinion. Why the fuck would you join RTIL's forum if you had a problem with him and his society? I thought you left besides, yes you have talent but that doesn't give you the right to be an arrogant prick - i don't even care if you're joking.
Quote from: deadSTARI'm allowed to be a hypocrite, I'm better than you wps.
Quote from: taylorseriously wps and sinister are the most annoying people on the forums next to like yungjazz and mindchamber

every post by wps is elitist shit in all caps and telling people that they suck
Quote from: f0dwps and sinister are gay with all their hateful shit
Quote from: naruto102get the fuck out of here wps we don't like you
QuotePigletsMemories says:
Your art may be good, but you're still a complete, senseless asshole.

Fuzz

Well I believe that that was the best gosh darn animation I've seen a LONG time! That walk cycle was amazing and the music was superb!

sQueef

MRat if you want to write good passing reviews then simply copy+paste a review from the highest scoring movie of the week

asshole
Oh, wretched ephemeral race ... why do you compel me to tell you what it would be most expedient for you not to hear? What is best of all is utterly beyond your reach: not to be born, not to be, to be nothing. But the second best for you is—to die soon.