May i take a dump here?

[Hammi]

I drew it on low picture resolution and i didnt notice. Then i made it big after noticing it. So theres nothing much i can do except for posting the original small one.

[Sinitron]

post the small one then asshole god dammit

or redo it or WHATEVER

[Hammi]

fffffffff

fine. Rollin da dice.

[Fuzz]

Fuzz Like

[MRat]

you're gettin better

[Hammi]

Fuzz Like

Hammi pleased

you're gettin better

Thanks El-Ratto. I still need to figure out how to improve that hand. So ugly.

[adamant]

you should try working with colors now that your style has melded a more solid state of itself

[Hammi]

you should try working with colors now that your style has melded a more solid state of itself

Yeah i feel like that too. I just dunno where to start when coloring. I mean, i dont wanna make the drawing look flat or anything so yeah. Still need to practice with the shadings, i dont have any full control over it yet.

[FG_SPace]

its easier, in my opinion, to shade in b&w before color, which i can see you've done a little but its prolly an easier transition than jumping right into color

[Hammi]

Yeah, youre right. Shading practices first, only then ill be able to move on to coloring. This is why im not even trying to color now. So yeah agreed.

[Hammi]

Shading and front view practices. Plus a random doodle of a scooby-doo-esque cartoon dog right next to it. Right now the whole thing looks pretty awkward to me. My guess would be their faces. Their shapes. And the way the eyes are placed. And err i know, the shadings suck dick.

And please look away from the obvious point in this image that this guy is me posing shirtless. I like to extend the anatomic possibilities and i go on adding the details for the hell of it just to keep the image occupied as much as possible.

Anyways i need haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaalpp!!

[rtil]

guy on top right - missing huge chunk of his upper skull . try drawing the shape of the skull before putting hair on.

guy in the middle -  facial features get smaller as we travel down the face. i also think the eye shapes you are using in general are very generic anime style and they're not really fitting with your style. i would recommend experimenting with different eye shapes. use real life for reference as your style is more geared towards realism imo.

guy on bottom left - the strongest of the group. i'd avoid using a solid line for the nose , but since you didn't do any tones i'll forgive it. the eyes still are the weakest part here as well.

the dog - looks like scooby doo or something.

overall, i would recommend to get reference pictures of skulls. either draw on top of them or re-draw the skulls , add a layer, lighten the skull layer and draw head shapes over them with flesh features. i think it will help you with facial and head structure a lot.

[adamant]

looks more like scrappy doo to me

[Hammi]

guy on top right - missing huge chunk of his upper skull . try drawing the shape of the skull before putting hair on.

Haha yeah i know. I was drawing really sloppy here so i didnt make a round guideline. I was just checkin if i still had the hang of the side view perspective.

guy in the middle -  facial features get smaller as we travel down the face. i also think the eye shapes you are using in general are very generic anime style and they're not really fitting with your style. i would recommend experimenting with different eye shapes. use real life for reference as your style is more geared towards realism imo.

Holy shit youre right. I dont think i even realized that myself. I need to get rid of the anime-esque style. So alright ill spend some more time on studying realism. Its been quite a while ago.

guy on bottom left - the strongest of the group. i'd avoid using a solid line for the nose , but since you didn't do any tones i'll forgive it. the eyes still are the weakest part here as well.

Yeah im still quite unsure of how the human nose is carefully built up so i cant really tell where to add tones/shading and eventually lines. Same with hands. Also i thought too that the eyes was fucked up.

the dog - looks like scooby doo or something.

Only more crappier yeah.

overall, i would recommend to get reference pictures of skulls. either draw on top of them or re-draw the skulls , add a layer, lighten the skull layer and draw head shapes over them with flesh features. i think it will help you with facial and head structure a lot.

Yeah im gonna work harder on those details. Still clueless like a numbskull about layers though. All i know is that you paste stuffs up on each others and the top one has the authority to remove/add lines where ever it wants even if the lines dont belong to that layer.

Thanks for a constructive review

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looks more like scrappy doo to me

Scrappy: UNCLE SCOOBY? HI! IM SCRAPPY DOO!!

Scooby: SCRAPPY DOO?? EHEHEHEHEH!!

[Fuzz]

I don't like the way you do your eyes. Sorry...

[Hammi]

Oh well. I regularly switch from one style to another back and forwards anyway (from realism to toon then unknown, then realism again etc). For some reason...

[Hammi]

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[f0d]

the eyes on your characters are always way too far up on the head, move them down to about the halfway point

[MRat]

the eyes on your characters are always way too far up on the head, move them down to about the halfway point

What th

[Hammi]

the eyes on your characters are always way too far up on the head, move them down to about the halfway point

Ill keep an extra eye on the eyes positions, even though i dont have a big/long forehead. At least i try not to make it look that way.