my first animation project

[keepwalking]

well here it is my flash movie project XeNt

http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/423984

there is a second one, but first want to know if you like this one

Hope you enjoy

[zomfgbie]

the titles and all were very niec. personally i hate flashes with tiny screens but, hey whatever

all the animation and graphics were great it just... didnt make sense. it was some guy using telekenisis on rocks or something

overall it impressed me visually but it wasnt entertaining

[keepwalking]

the titles and all were very niec. personally i hate flashes with tiny screens but, hey whatever

all the animation and graphics were great it just... didnt make sense. it was some guy using telekenisis on rocks or something

overall it impressed me visually but it wasnt entertaining

thanks.!

Yea, mabye its a bit confusing. Its a 4 movie project based on feelings: Anger, Sadness, Happiness and Love.
I have a verry particular way to direct my movies, and sometimes the story doesnt fit well with the animation.

anyway thanks for the coment!

[psi43]

It was well made but really boring in my opinion. The preloader and the intro looked nice but the rest seemed to be mainly tweened back and forth.

[keepwalking]

It was well made but really boring in my opinion. The preloader and the intro looked nice but the rest seemed to be mainly tweened back and forth.

oh crap everyone feels bored,...lol I spuose ill have to get better ideas to make my flash movies, scince everyone tels me they bored with them. At this point that flash movie was the second one Ive ever made, so I supose many mistakes like those will come to light

thanks for your opinion!

[Hammi]

spuose

Spouse.

[psi43]

spuose

Spouse.

Making fun of other people's English isn't cool. If I'd correct you everytime you'd say something wrong you'd feel like an idiot, too. You can tell him what's wrong but doing shit like that is low.

[Hammi]

spuose

Spouse.

Making fun of other people's English isn't cool. If I'd correct you everytime you'd say something wrong you'd feel like an idiot, too. You can tell him what's wrong but doing shit like that is low.

Oh wait, i didnt know he was from Argentina  I didnt see that. Now that i know, sorry fella. Really, i am. I thought you were from the US like many others. They usually have spelling errors all over (not all of them).

AGAIN SORRY (yeah i feel like an idiot already)

[keepwalking]

spuose

Spouse.

Making fun of other people's English isn't cool. If I'd correct you everytime you'd say something wrong you'd feel like an idiot, too. You can tell him what's wrong but doing shit like that is low.

Oh wait, i didnt know he was from Argentina  I didnt see that. Now that i know, sorry fella. Really, i am. I thought you were from the US like many others. They usually have spelling errors all over (not all of them).

AGAIN SORRY (yeah i feel like an idiot already)

Its ok, Ive been studying your language since 1st grade, and sometimes its really hard to learn all of it, specially phrasal verbs and a few frequently used phrases like "rolf" or "imao"...[wich I still dont know what they mean...] but Ill try to do my best, and write correctlly.

[Hammi]

Its ok, Ive been studying your language since 1st grade, and sometimes its really hard to learn all of it, specially phrasal verbs and a few frequently used phrases like "rolf" or "imao"...[wich I still dont know what they mean...] but Ill try to do my best, and write correctlly.

Lol

well matter in fact, youve spelled the phrases wrong im afraid. Its "rofl" and not "rolf". And its "lmao", not "imao".

Rofl= rolling on floor laughing
Lmao= laughing my ass off

Other phrases:

Lmfao= laughing my fucking ass off
Roflmao= rolling on floor laughing my ass off (add the F in it for "fucking")
Lollerskates= when you laugh at someone (a different elevation  from "lol")
Lawl= when laughing sarcastically (a different variant of the standard "lol")
Omg= Oh my god
Omfg= Oh my fucking god... >
Zomfg= a spiced up variant of omg
Btw= by the way
Tbh= to be honest
Wtf= what the fuck
Stfu= Shut the fuck up (who uses that now anyway?)
N00b(noob)= someone being a total idiot at something... pfft i never use that lol.

Eh, thats it for now.

[psi43]

"lmao" is the only thing you should use though. All the others will make you seem like some weird kid.

[Hammi]

"lmao" is the only thing you should use though. All the others will make you seem like some weird kid.

Agreed.

[keepwalking]

Its ok, Ive been studying your language since 1st grade, and sometimes its really hard to learn all of it, specially phrasal verbs and a few frequently used phrases like "rolf" or "imao"...[wich I still dont know what they mean...] but Ill try to do my best, and write correctlly.

Lol

well matter in fact, youve spelled the phrases wrong im afraid. Its "rofl" and not "rolf". And its "lmao", not "imao".

Rofl= rolling on floor laughing
Lmao= laughing my ass off

Other phrases:

Lmfao= laughing my fucking ass off
Roflmao= rolling on floor laughing my ass off (add the F in it for "fucking")
Lollerskates= when you laugh at someone (a different elevation  from "lol")
Lawl= when laughing sarcastically (a different variant of the standard "lol")
Omg= Oh my god
Omfg= Oh my fucking god... >
Zomfg= a spiced up variant of omg
Btw= by the way
Tbh= to be honest
Wtf= what the fuck
Stfu= Shut the fuck up (who uses that now anyway?)
N00b(noob)= someone being a total idiot at something... pfft i never use that lol.

Eh, thats it for now.

Awsome!, this list is really going to be usefull...better save it
Thanks !

"lmao" is the only thing you should use though. All the others will make you seem like some weird kid.

Thanks for the note!

[Hammi]

No problem!

[trent bortknob]

yeah never say lollerskates, noob, lawl, or zomfg

the others are ok i guess

the ones i listed above are what unfunny people say in an attempt to be funny

[keepwalking]

yeah never say lollerskates, noob, lawl, or zomfg

the others are ok i guess

the ones i listed above are what unfunny people say in an attempt to be funny

Got it.  Now I realize,I think noob is used more in online games .

Thanks.

[keepwalking]

ok here goes the other one im working in.

Its the first time I add frame by frame animations.
This is only a preview so its something short

http://keepwalking07.deviantart.com/art/Xe...railer-77110367

[Halcion]

you should make your own backgrounds instead of using trace bitmap.

[Sonni]

well here it is my flash movie project XeNt

http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/423984

there is a second one, but first want to know if you like this one

Hope you enjoy

Well after watching it I want to say that it has great graphic but what's exactly the story behind it? All I see is that the man was releasing his "anger" and the rock just flying to hit the tree. You should draw your own background too because earlier I tried to do something like you did (get some photos from google, photoshop it using filter) although it may look neat I felt that I don't put enough effort in the Background. But hey, this is your first one you can keep getting better.

On a side note, don't rely on the internet phrases like everyone said, it's annoying and impractical in other websites.

[keepwalking]

well here it is my flash movie project XeNt

http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/423984

there is a second one, but first want to know if you like this one

Hope you enjoy

Well after watching it I want to say that it has great graphic but what's exactly the story behind it? All I see is that the man was releasing his "anger" and the rock just flying to hit the tree. You should draw your own background too because earlier I tried to do something like you did (get some photos from google, photoshop it using filter) although it may look neat I felt that I don't put enough effort in the Background. But hey, this is your first one you can keep getting better.

On a side note, don't rely on the internet phrases like everyone said, it's annoying and impractical in other websites.

Thanks Sonni, I apreciate your comentary.
Its been a While scince I entered the flash world, and its really hard to achive a good movie. Timing, quality, animation, voices, music, and plot...are things I try to equal in a single movie...and sometimes I fail at many ones...like timing, backgrouns, and many others ...The story behind it,...well, Its a 4 charachter story, each one with different tales, different reactions, I wanted to represent human feelings in a flash movie and this was the result, mabye I should add a better story...As you´ve mentioned, yes, my background is a google image edited in photoshop, I used it because I always rush my animations, I cant wait to post ´em...so the result is a movie with many flaws on it... Im now working on a frame by frame animation, so Im doing my best, to achive a great Flash movie...

Your side note was confusing, but If you mean reviews on newgrounds as "internet phrases", I just try to ignore them as much as I can...

Thanks for the comment....!

you should make your own backgrounds instead of using trace bitmap.

Gues I should try drawing them...