The Ghoul and the Girl

MRat · January 21, 2008 10:59 PM

http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/421278

It has alot of flaws. I needs to be cleaner and such, but I really quite enjoyed this all the same. It was simple and stylish. I like narration alot to.'

Anyway, your thoughts? And let's not turn this into some thread where we argue about the author, even though I'm sure Psi and Anigen and Taylor will all come out here and somehow in their heads concoct some insane way to assume I'm trying to do something stupid with this.

Comment on the flash, and thats it, otherwise this thread will be pointless. If you don't care about analyzing the work of authors, don't bother posting. This is intended to be a way to break down something and learn from the mistakes and good points of another artists work.

Ok, now that the preface is out of the way, *insert unfunny joke*

adamant · January 23, 2008 03:01 AM

it looks like its animated below 24 fps

that's all i wanna say

MRat · January 23, 2008 03:18 AM

Quote from: unconditionallyguarANTeedit looks like its animated below 24 fps

that's all i wanna say

Yeah it does. Which is a problem for it.

Crabarms · January 23, 2008 03:19 AM

Its not bad.

The dragon had a few layers, I think it could of looked better without the lines where it was going to be hit with the
sword.

Also the pupils kinda just floated and appeared not attached to the body.

Halcion · February 28, 2008 03:21 AM

very choppy

sQueef · February 28, 2008 04:32 AM

The Ghoul and The Girl 99 luftbaloons. Little boy blue and the man with a spoon. Said he's comin' home though I don't know when... Your mom started layin' down like that... I thought she was just taking a nap. Now I'm on MTV...

I like the accent

trent bortknob · February 28, 2008 11:39 PM

miranda that ghost just isnt holy anymore