Blu's Sh!t

Started by BluPhoenix, January 16, 2014 12:59 AM

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SrsSam77

damn son those are some nice ass clouds (I'm actually being serious)

rtil

i like the coloring on this, the perspective is much improved over the last piece as well. with shots like that that taken from a camera, you could also play with things like creating a focal point and blurring things outside of the aperture with feathered selections and gaussian blur

i could nitpick a lot over things but i'll just say two things stand out to me the most in terms of needing work - some over usage of line in places it isn't needed and the way that breast is popping out. it's a challenging angle to have them revealed but i'm not sure it could actually come forward that much with the nipple pointing forward. i think they'd be more squished  into the towel and instead you could just show a lot of cleavage with both the suspender straps unhooked. and there's just a lot of lines in places where they aren't needed. best example i think is the hand which makes it look kind of shriveled/wrinkled. you can use shading instead of lines in most places inside of shapes and contours  to suggest volume.

BluPhoenix

Quote from: SrsSam77 on May 18, 2015 09:02 AM
damn son those are some nice ass clouds (I'm actually being serious)

thanks
[spoiler=wait uh]why would i doubt you[/spoiler]

Quote from: rtil on May 18, 2015 11:14 AM
i like the coloring on this, the perspective is much improved over the last piece as well. with shots like that that taken from a camera, you could also play with things like creating a focal point and blurring things outside of the aperture with feathered selections and gaussian blur

i could nitpick a lot over things but i'll just say two things stand out to me the most in terms of needing work - some over usage of line in places it isn't needed and the way that breast is popping out. it's a challenging angle to have them revealed but i'm not sure it could actually come forward that much with the nipple pointing forward. i think they'd be more squished  into the towel and instead you could just show a lot of cleavage with both the suspender straps unhooked. and there's just a lot of lines in places where they aren't needed. best example i think is the hand which makes it look kind of shriveled/wrinkled. you can use shading instead of lines in most places inside of shapes and contours  to suggest volume.

i'm really flattered that you like the coloring on this, it was a huge pain in the ass as i have little to no experience with colors

completely agreed, there's an abundance of unneeded lines- especially with the hand. i'll try to experiment with using shading to substitute for that in the near future

and yes, i will admit that i was getting pretty lazy with that boob in the lewd and that the first thing that looked "right" is what i settled on
[12:59 AM] elm: yea honestly if you dont want to cum on elmer fudds bald head whats wrong with you
[07:49.46] <+slack> cum erupts from the dick at an alarming rate
[07:49.59] <+slack> it will blast off and slap the wall at like 40 mph

BluPhoenix

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[12:59 AM] elm: yea honestly if you dont want to cum on elmer fudds bald head whats wrong with you
[07:49.46] <+slack> cum erupts from the dick at an alarming rate
[07:49.59] <+slack> it will blast off and slap the wall at like 40 mph

rtil

#2 looks like you referenced something. it's fine if you did, but you should probably include or at least mention it

SrsSam77

Your semen is impressive

Gladius

Quote from: BluPhoenix on June 20, 2015 05:11 AM
i took michaell's advice and stayed away from doing Porn Drawings i cannot believe how arrogant i w

now you've done it
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michaell

will the humiliation ever peter out

Stu4U

Quote from: rtil on June 20, 2015 07:54 AM
#2 looks like you referenced something. it's fine if you did, but you should probably include or at least mention it

i don't mind references either but yea the pose is from me!me!me!

soup

woh detective stu is on point

"He was shown the smallness and tinsel emptiness of the little Earth gods, with their petty, human interests and connections - their hatreds, rages, loves and vanities; their craving for praise and sacrifice and their demands for faiths contrary to reason and nature."


"...it stimulates the part of the brain called "shatners-bassoon", and that's the bit of the brain that deals with...time perception..."

Jon

for one thing it looks like ur lines are gettin more confident. so ya?? keep it up



BluPhoenix

Quote from: Stu4U on June 20, 2015 06:45 PM
Quote from: rtil on June 20, 2015 07:54 AM
#2 looks like you referenced something. it's fine if you did, but you should probably include or at least mention it

i don't mind references either but yea the pose is from me!me!me!




whoa good eye


Quote from: SrsSam77 on June 20, 2015 08:27 AM
Your semen is impressive
your compliments always amuse me


Quote from: Jon on June 20, 2015 07:50 PM
for one thing it looks like ur lines are gettin more confident. so ya?? keep it up
thanks, i've been trying to cool down and put more power in single lines rather than using higher quantities of them


Quote from: michaell on June 20, 2015 06:20 PM
will the humiliation ever peter out
im sorry frend i cannot stop my hand from drawing dix and tiddies please forgive
[12:59 AM] elm: yea honestly if you dont want to cum on elmer fudds bald head whats wrong with you
[07:49.46] <+slack> cum erupts from the dick at an alarming rate
[07:49.59] <+slack> it will blast off and slap the wall at like 40 mph

rtil

Quote from: BluPhoenix on June 20, 2015 08:07 PM
thanks, i've been trying to cool down and put more power in single lines rather than using higher quantities of them


BluPhoenix

Quote from: rtil on June 21, 2015 12:07 AM
Quote from: BluPhoenix on June 20, 2015 08:07 PM
thanks, i've been trying to cool down and put more power in single lines rather than using higher quantities of them



this is a new concept to me i aint van gogh over here fock of
[12:59 AM] elm: yea honestly if you dont want to cum on elmer fudds bald head whats wrong with you
[07:49.46] <+slack> cum erupts from the dick at an alarming rate
[07:49.59] <+slack> it will blast off and slap the wall at like 40 mph

rtil

Quote from: BluPhoenix on June 21, 2015 12:40 AM
Quote from: rtil on June 21, 2015 12:07 AM
Quote from: BluPhoenix on June 20, 2015 08:07 PM
thanks, i've been trying to cool down and put more power in single lines rather than using higher quantities of them



this is a new concept to me i aint van gogh over here fock of

it was meant to be a thumbs up of encouragement   ;)

SrsSam77

the chickenscratch is dead

BluPhoenix

Quote from: rtil on June 21, 2015 03:26 AM
it was meant to be a thumbs up of encouragement   ;)

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whenever i see that gif i always assume it's sarcastic
[12:59 AM] elm: yea honestly if you dont want to cum on elmer fudds bald head whats wrong with you
[07:49.46] <+slack> cum erupts from the dick at an alarming rate
[07:49.59] <+slack> it will blast off and slap the wall at like 40 mph

rtil

i've nevr seen it used in a sarcastic context personally

chow yun fat is a very genuine man

crackers

what would your mother think

Bamyasi

The Phoenix has no mother.

He was born of flames and to the flames he shall return.

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