ExBerian Thing

[ExBerian]

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[crackers]

Your link to the anatomy practices is broken for me unfortunately, but it's really nice! I really like the colours in the second piece but it's very busy - the creature at the left reminds me of a volcano with the black, and the red trails of the meteorites

[rtil]

try to think more about the shapes of the body parts when you're creating the poses, right now you have that sort of 'bendy straw' look going on, especially with the legs. you might want to look into some figure drawing and anatomy books, especially this one by andrew loomis. @SrsSam77 might also have some good references as hes' been on an art book binge lately

[SrsSam77]

exb if you need critique, ask on chat, if you need any figure drawing books or vids, ask on chat, I gotcha bud

[rtil]

do you want critique on this stuff or not? also sharpen your pencil, or draw bigger. the marks are dull.

[rtil]

are you drawing these from your imagination or using a reference

[rtil]

i think you need to go to square one on anatomy and construction. idk what kind of resources you have, but try to be economical with your lines and start grinding the basics. this might be a little too advanced to start, but one of my friends made this and it's very good: http://palidoozy-art.tumblr.com/post/72294456360/as-per-request-thanks-singingrabbitskull-i

not everything here is good but as a collective whole it is: http://fucktonofanatomyreferencesreborn.tumblr.com/

[Gladius]

cool zbrushin buddy boy

[crackers]

i made all of these faces when viewing this thread

[rtil]

anatomy's a bit..melty. but the two toned shading is nice