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What can I improve on?
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funzop

they are kinda cute
they sort of look like the adventure time characters
id like to see some animation / colored work / some stuff you spent a couple hours or at least 25 minutes on

sba sb3002

I'm working on an animated series called FedUp, but right now it's in the planning stages. I have nothing of real quality to show you.
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rtil

the recent upsurge in paste-on noses is alarming to me

still i like the guy with the "okay" on his shirt

FG_SPace

Quote from: rtilthe recent upsurge in paste-on noses is alarming to me

still i like the guy with the "okay" on his shirt
blame it on the milburns.
campnorth is promoting serious change in the art styles of internet tweens.

you can improve on a lot of things desert, just depends on what direction your taking it.

Dailyman

What the fuck are you doing here, you fucking nigger faggot?

Tha everlastin taste testin master matters.

lenko

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your stuff looks like this 'indie' art that everyones doing at the mo

which isnt really a bad thing but yeah dont make the same mistake i did and limit yourself to one style
<emanhattan> i remember pingu ice cream
<emanhattan> it was a better time
<emanhattan> when the penguins were cold and delicious
<emanhattan> and i knew i was gonna be
<emanhattan> consequence free

Loathsome

everyone's doing this now


unclephil

they kind of remind me of

me


f0d

im not a big fan of your style but hey at least youve got one
I have more of a life writing this review at 1145 pm than you guys do making these movies. . .

nathanielmilburn

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Quote from: rtilthe recent upsurge in paste-on noses is alarming to me

still i like the guy with the "okay" on his shirt
blame it on the milburns.
campnorth is promoting serious change in the art styles of internet tweens.

you can improve on a lot of things desert, just depends on what direction your taking it.

lol we're just trying to give it some variety

but this style is a big trend now, it'd be fine if you went with it but try to add some originality to it or something to make it look like your own.

ansel

i am going to comment on one detail of your artwork and why it bothers me rather than giving any kind of in-depth critique

 

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rtil

Quote from: anseli am going to comment on one detail of your artwork and why it bothers me rather than giving any kind of in-depth critique

ansel why do you always have to be so gay

i didn't want to have to mention this but it's not just the noses it's the whole post-modern avant garde flannelgraph look that is getting really unoriginal and tired now i mean it's nice they're trying something "different" but it doesn't have to be a carbon copy of all the other work that looks like this

you might as well go for the full monty and draw random speech bubbles everywhere with irrelevant symbols in them


ansel

Quote from: rtil
Quote from: anseli am going to comment on one detail of your artwork and why it bothers me rather than giving any kind of in-depth critique

ansel why do you always have to be so gay

i didn't want to have to mention this but it's not just the noses it's the whole post-modern avant garde flannelgraph look that is getting really unoriginal and tired now i mean it's nice they're trying something "different" but it doesn't have to be a carbon copy of all the other work that looks like this

you might as well go for the full monty and draw random speech bubbles everywhere with irrelevant symbols in them

yeah that was pretty gay, sorry bro  

I agree with you about all this, though. When Campnorth was still alive, everyone's work was an odd mix of the milburn bros and lazymuffin--the same kind of LOL WACKY FACES AND WIGGLY ARMS look that this fella seems to be going for. I mean, I went for that shit for years and still do a lot of the time, but at a certain point everything just blends together and you might as well go back to realism and be praised for being different!

also, speech bubbles, arrows, and paint splatters indicate one thing: laziness

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sba sb3002


Yeti.


An art trade.


My Fallout 3 character


Long comic didn't come out the way I had hoped.


Inspired by Modest Mouse.
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The Good Ole Ant

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When Campnorth was still alive, everyone's work was an odd mix of the milburn bros and lazymuffin

not me!

edit: now that i look at this stuff, it's kinda like a mix between indie art and wind waker
foodeetin 3:35 pm
   u rich prick tho man
   fuckin ceo ass
   give me a raise
   in the future i mean
sAlaDofMetal 3:35 pm
   ill ma fccain dic in yo face
sAlaDofMetal 3:36 pm
   "ill ma fccain dic in yo face" what the fuck
foodeetin 3:36 pm
   lmao
sAlaDofMetal 3:36 pm
   ill ma's fuckin dick in your face
   ew
   a
   a
   a
foodeetin 3:36 pm
   lmfo

lenko

its cute but i'd like to see you try something other than the 'hipster indie scott pilgrim campnorth paste-on-nose indieband album art' style

the yeti pic i really like though

nice colour choices too. the comic could be delivered better!!
<emanhattan> i remember pingu ice cream
<emanhattan> it was a better time
<emanhattan> when the penguins were cold and delicious
<emanhattan> and i knew i was gonna be
<emanhattan> consequence free