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Title: Stuff Haru does
Post by: Evelynn on August 13, 2012 01:36 AM
Just got back into drawing after a 4 year break and digital art is completely new to me but I had to finally get myself to do what I knew I had missed soo much and also learn how to use paint programs and a tablet! I'll just dump whatever I complete here, but for now recently created stuff to start it off. Critiques are very welcome, anything that can help me improve, and especially Paint Tool SAI tips since I suck soo much at this new art program stuff xD anyways here we gooo  ;)
(https://thebackalleys.com/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fi46.tinypic.com%2F2aev4sg.jpg&hash=d8c79017bf9c4d3afe5836816fb74e72383d2d10)
Old drawing back from 2008 of Mizuki from Hana-Kimi
(https://thebackalleys.com/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fi49.tinypic.com%2F13yey3a.jpg&hash=293b2ba4109489242dbf4bc14034484e2665d347)
More old stuff from 2008 of Mizuki and Sano from Hana-Kimi <3
(https://thebackalleys.com/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fi48.tinypic.com%2Fw7242h.jpg&hash=526840e2b31192be5a7ccecfa5a524e21c03a212)
First horrible attempt at drawing with my new tablet, A random pic of my friends Ash and Chao
(https://thebackalleys.com/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fi48.tinypic.com%2F23r73x1.png&hash=fdca842e42bc7a8939c1d02e4e4bfc5b7d2e7ecd)
My friend ash wanted a pic of her killing Chao because that's what friends do :>
(https://thebackalleys.com/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fi50.tinypic.com%2F307t4ix.jpg&hash=579210142f2aac481faea23c2e3932fda80fc9d3)
Because FLCL will always be awesome... and getting used to using that tablet (..soo many deleted practice sketches *A*)
(https://thebackalleys.com/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fi45.tinypic.com%2F2jeab0x.png&hash=0e35c1795ac86d56936982ab2bc96e0154c1208c)
Not sure what I was hoping to get from leaving free space and then having the unused background opacity set to 0% but uh... yeah here ya go ;_;
(https://thebackalleys.com/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fi48.tinypic.com%2F20gikoh.png&hash=e1abd473e0f1d99852935931ebc13e0d8b3d8786)
Made for my friend Lance, because we both love Nagato (The Melancholy of Haruhi Suzumiya)
(https://thebackalleys.com/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fi50.tinypic.com%2Fl8mfs.png&hash=f7ccb1c2cba4bd79309151334d6cde9e140e4901) 
Aaaand just finished this about half an hour ago, took all day but I love it! Misaka from Toaru Majutsu no Index, just finished watching that a few days ago and I think I'm obsessed with her now *-*

That's it for now, I promise to draw stuff regularly, I swear! D:
Title: Re: Stuff Haru does
Post by: rtil on August 13, 2012 02:11 AM
it looks like you have a pretty solid grasp on line , vector color and shapes. it also looks like perhaps you were referencing another image for some of these drawings, and i say this because your two ash/chao pictures feel a little clumsy while the others are more solid. you can take away a lot from studying other art, but translating that confidence in drawing from your reference images to your original art can be a challenge. do you do any preliminary sketches or structural drawings before you do the final lines?
Title: Re: Stuff Haru does
Post by: Evelynn on August 13, 2012 02:23 AM
Yeah FLCL - Nagato were referenced, but for the most part they helped me learn about layers and how to properly use them. my final one of Misaka was my first without a concrete reference after a lot of practice sketches of other things and reading many line art/SAI tutorials I felt confident enough to do that last project unassisted for the most part, although I did look at some pics for general pose help. My 'rough draft' sketch of the picture is pretty messy, I don't really go for anything pretty looking yet, just the basic layout of what I want to draw, then comes the line.
Title: Re: Stuff Haru does
Post by: Kooh on August 13, 2012 06:30 AM
hnnngghhh
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Post by: SHADOWFOX2 on August 14, 2012 01:47 AM
Quote from: Mexican on August 13, 2012 06:30 AM
hnnngghhh

more pls
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Post by: ZennyPLUS on August 14, 2012 03:02 AM
Seconds please.
Title: Re: Stuff Haru does
Post by: dilly on August 16, 2012 03:09 AM
i really like your progression! as the others have said, i would like to see more of your work ^-^
Title: Re: Stuff Haru does
Post by: Evelynn on August 16, 2012 03:16 AM
I will! I'm just soo damn picky with myself and I toss a lot of drawings and half finished things because I'm not happy with it. I need to stop doing that @_@
But I promise to make something i'm happy with soon :>
Title: Re: Stuff Haru does
Post by: Evelynn on August 19, 2012 08:30 AM
(https://thebackalleys.com/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fi1164.photobucket.com%2Falbums%2Fq565%2FHaruIsOnline%2F85a6c289.png&hash=aa5eb293f5052034cd20eb8baa450b6f69e15310)
God it takes me forever to make anything, Yenova my OC that I created back when playing an MMO 5 years ago or so
Wanted to draw a Koi or something in the water but I can't draw animals for the life of me, scrapped the idea after 6 attempts or so *A*
Title: Re: Stuff Haru does
Post by: rtil on August 19, 2012 08:46 PM
i think it's good enough without the fish. i like the angle
Title: Re: Stuff Haru does
Post by: Evelynn on September 1, 2012 02:49 PM
This one's for you Allie <3
(https://thebackalleys.com/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fi.imgur.com%2FgnQ04.png&hash=ef502183ad65abe398cd90513456b71a6b7b9736)
Title: Re: Stuff Haru does
Post by: bd648 on September 1, 2012 03:19 PM
i must say that allie seems to be the coolest of cats. very nice!
Title: Re: Stuff Haru does
Post by: rtil on September 1, 2012 10:08 PM
haha i love her hoodie
Title: Re: Stuff Haru does
Post by: Greenkitten on September 3, 2012 03:51 AM
Quote from: rtil on September  1, 2012 10:08 PM
haha i love her hoodie

it annoys me how the graphic is flat though instead of following the contours or shape of the jumper.
Title: Re: Stuff Haru does
Post by: Allie on September 4, 2012 02:41 AM
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Title: Re: Stuff Haru does
Post by: Evelynn on September 4, 2012 10:31 AM
I'm glad it does Allie ^^
Title: Re: Stuff Haru does
Post by: SHADOWFOX2 on September 15, 2012 12:26 AM
I would buy that hoodie.
Good stuff so far
Title: Re: Stuff Haru does
Post by: dilly on September 15, 2012 03:46 AM
tba should have its own shop so we can wear dumb tba gear
Title: Re: Stuff Haru does
Post by: Evelynn on September 15, 2012 04:49 AM
Quote from: dilly on September 15, 2012 03:46 AM
tba should have its own shop so we can wear dumb tba gear
^
Title: Re: Stuff Haru does
Post by: Evelynn on October 14, 2012 04:49 PM
doodle for Reavz the princess boy <3
I need to draw more often ; _;
(https://thebackalleys.com/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fmedia.tumblr.com%2Ftumblr_mbst14gceN1rxgpup.png&hash=60233f64a7c8721525d9c873bce5d5f5b892d0cb)
Title: Re: Stuff Haru does
Post by: bd648 on October 14, 2012 05:02 PM
THIS IS CUTE AS A CAT ON SOMEONES HEAD!
Title: Re: Stuff Haru does
Post by: Evelynn on October 14, 2012 05:10 PM
Oh my ;o
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Post by: Kooh on October 15, 2012 05:31 AM
do you take requests!!!!!!!!
Title: Re: Stuff Haru does
Post by: rtil on October 15, 2012 05:37 AM
Quote from: HaruIsOnline on October 14, 2012 04:49 PM
I need to draw more often ; _;

get to it
Title: Re: Stuff Haru does
Post by: Evelynn on October 15, 2012 02:17 PM
Quote from: Kooh on October 15, 2012 05:31 AM
do you take requests!!!!!!!!
Maybe if you ask nicely /blush
Quote from: rtil on October 15, 2012 05:37 AM
get to it
(https://thebackalleys.com/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fi.imgur.com%2FX12kq.png&hash=eae33f7995d6f192e6ffe93a3815b37111f28af0)
Title: Re: Stuff Haru does
Post by: bd648 on October 15, 2012 02:25 PM
THIS IS FANTASTIC! TBA HAS AN ARMY OF UGUU!
Title: Re: Stuff Haru does
Post by: Evelynn on October 15, 2012 08:23 PM
For Kooh <3 (Queen Fairy from Kirby 64)
(https://thebackalleys.com/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fi.imgur.com%2FPwbE1.png&hash=3b06b1a2dddc2903be53d0dbd44ac50b829c49cd)
Title: Re: Stuff Haru does
Post by: bd648 on October 15, 2012 08:26 PM
that look... cute...
Title: Re: Stuff Haru does
Post by: SHADOWFOX2 on October 16, 2012 03:14 AM
Those eyes
Title: Re: Stuff Haru does
Post by: Evelynn on October 16, 2012 03:22 AM
Quote from: SHADOWFOX2 on October 16, 2012 03:14 AM
Those eyes
She gonna get you... either that or she's horny, I like that last one better.
Title: Re: Stuff Haru does
Post by: bd648 on October 16, 2012 04:01 AM
Quote from: HaruIsOnline on October 16, 2012 03:22 AM
Quote from: SHADOWFOX2 on October 16, 2012 03:14 AM
Those eyes
She gonna get you... either that or she's horny, I like that last one better.

so do i
Title: Re: Stuff Haru does
Post by: Evelynn on November 21, 2012 04:48 AM
Bd mentioned wanting a robot nagato art thingy, I present to you such thingy
(https://thebackalleys.com/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fi.imgur.com%2FpWFl1.png&hash=514da7251f49dde701ad0104e85c0b8a4fb3350d)
Title: Re: Stuff Haru does
Post by: bd648 on November 21, 2012 01:59 PM
And as such bd is in love.
Title: Re: Stuff Haru does
Post by: Evelynn on November 21, 2012 10:03 PM
Now that i'm looking at it again I was going for an inhuman look but the face is horrid and looks more alien than android, I need to burn this :/
Title: Re: Stuff Haru does
Post by: bd648 on November 21, 2012 11:02 PM
i think its cute...
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Post by: rtil on November 21, 2012 11:05 PM
i still thinks she deserves a nose ;_;
Title: Re: Stuff Haru does
Post by: Evelynn on November 22, 2012 12:14 AM
eh, what do you think bd? should she be graced with the sense of smell analyzation?
Title: Re: Stuff Haru does
Post by: bd648 on November 22, 2012 01:03 AM
mm..... maybe.... it is useful...
Title: Re: Stuff Haru does
Post by: Evelynn on November 16, 2013 11:38 AM
Views

You never lie
You never sugar coat reality
You show me what I hate
You show me that I have displeasing features
You know how to make me smile with images of progress
You know how to make me frown with doubt and anxiety
You remind me that I'm changing
You remind me that I'm not good enough
You can make my day in that little moment
You can break my confidence in a single glance
If I could stop looking at you to see myself I would
If I could just be happy with your improving comments
I hate you reflection in the mirror
I hate that you remind me everyday that i'm not a real girl
Title: Re: Stuff Haru does
Post by: Evelynn on November 26, 2013 12:05 PM
Yep...
Title: Re: Stuff Haru does
Post by: bd648 on November 26, 2013 07:58 PM
*snap snap*
Title: Re: Stuff Haru does
Post by: Evelynn on November 27, 2013 05:47 AM
what?
Title: Re: Stuff Haru does
Post by: rtil on November 27, 2013 06:54 AM
he's doing that thing you would do in like a coffee house where you start snapping your fingers if a poem is good.. not sure where they originated but i'm pretty sure that's what he's doing

i'm not much of a writer but the back and forth of it is pulling in two different directions emotionally, i suppose that is what you were going for. it's definitely not subtle, i hope no one  irl is saying those things to you but if they are they don't belong in your life.

anyway, do you still draw? i haven't seen a drawing from you in so long
Title: Re: Stuff Haru does
Post by: Evelynn on November 28, 2013 06:14 AM
Oh, I've never gone to poetry readings so I didn't know people did this, thank you bd and rtil for explaining.
That's exactly what I was going for to kind of convey the idea of the emotions fluctuating constantly, it's like a weekly thing of where someone come up to me and has something negative to say and even more often the not so subtle snickering or questioning in the background, but it's w/e the focus of this poem was specifically my own views and what's in my mind.

I honestly haven't drawn in a very long time, every time I feel like drawing I stop half way through because anatomy somehow brings up emotional stuffs.
Title: Re: Stuff Haru does
Post by: rtil on November 28, 2013 06:48 AM
maybe you could do things like environments in the meantime
Title: Re: Stuff Haru does
Post by: Evelynn on November 28, 2013 04:35 PM
That does sound like a good idea, my environments/bg art has always been pretty awful so now would be a good time to work on it I guess, although I've been having fun writing these days.
Title: Re: Stuff Haru does
Post by: Bamyasi on December 2, 2013 09:06 AM
I'm not a writer either, and even less of a poet, but I'd recommend studying rhyme and meter if you have any interest in poetry beyond emotional self-assuagement. Based on content, the American Confessional school might be worth reading, if you haven't already.

But yeah I liked the twist at the end. Twists are important. I can't remember what they're called in this context.
Title: Re: Stuff Haru does
Post by: Evelynn on December 3, 2013 08:50 AM
If I plan on taking it past just writing every so often the random thoughts I have I will.
and I have no clue what it's called either, at first I was going to make it more apparent in the title but then I was like, well I guess I could make a reader unsure as to what/whom i'm talking about then reveal it at the end... sure i'll go with that.
Title: Re: Stuff Haru does
Post by: Bamyasi on December 3, 2013 11:58 AM
Well I admire your willingness to improve. Feel free to send me stuff if you ever want a philistine's perspective. Or I guess you could just post it here.
Title: Re: Stuff Haru does
Post by: Evelynn on December 3, 2013 09:29 PM
Thank you ^-^
I'll be sure to post my stuff when I don't think it's a pile of shit ahaha
Title: Re: Stuff Haru does
Post by: crackers on December 3, 2013 10:11 PM
I don't really have much to offer in the way of criticism or improvement, which is probably what you'd like from me! However what I would like to say now that I'd love to see more of your work, be it artistic or written. I enjoy a bit of writing myself, and I always feel the best way to improve is to read as much varied content as possible.

AKA post yours so I can read it muahaha

Quote from: we3dk1ll3r420 on December  2, 2013 09:06 AM
But yeah I liked the twist at the end. Twists are important. I can't remember what they're called in this context.

I believe it is just a 'plot twist', or peripety, but don't quote me on that.
Title: Re: Stuff Haru does
Post by: bramblepuss on December 5, 2013 01:12 AM
this stuff is awesome  :O
Title: Re: Stuff Haru does
Post by: Evelynn on December 8, 2013 11:56 AM
If I write anything worth mentioning or finally start drawing again i'll be sure to post it Thievin'

and thank you bramble ^^