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[rtil]

it's because i am spending more time on them

[cipher]

it's because i am spending more time on them

well that'll do it

[ZennyPLUS]

I come back to even better Rtil work, it is a good day indeed.

[rtil]

a little something silly in-between major projects that are taking forever. gonna clean this up a bit and put it on youtube
[swf]http://www.thebackalleys.com/dump/files/1/645I8t_free.swf[/swf]

[zwimmy]

lel

[Stu4U]

<3

[cipher]

i still think the other two seasons of FMP are better than fumoffu in just about every way possible

[rtil]

maybe but they're not funny

[cipher]

maybe but they're not funny

...yeah that's why I liked them. Moving on though, good stuff, and I bet when you finish someone somewhere will not realize it's a joke

[rtil]

honestly i didn't like any of fmp. season 1 tried too hard to be too many things and wound up being mediocre on all fronts, fumoffu was supposed to be comedy but i honestly didn't laugh all that much. i don't even remember season 3. but yeah, the youtube reactions should be fun

[cipher]

season 3 was a huge jump in quality I would say (both in art/animation and in story intensity). I wouldn't bother watching it if you didn't like the others much. Overall, it's an alright series, nothing too special, but I liked it.

[rtil]

it was way back in my early days of high school that i saw it. i think part of me not liking had to do with the fact that i marathoned it at one of my friends house in a single day and i didn't want to.

[Kött]

(Insert big rant about the fact that fumoffu clearly isn't the best shit ever it clearly has its moments and how one can become an extremely negatively biased cunt in order to prove oneself or the person who suggested an activity that it was indeed a bad idea)

Butye, good job on that animation. The main punchline is pretty nice and hits the nail on the head for many people. The puns/parodies of the titles were a bit below that level, though. ProcrastinatiON is a nice idea doesn't even work phonetically, which kinda ruins it. The Haruhi one makes sense (disregarding the word metaphor which seems a bit arbitrary) but it just feels like you didn't give it too much thought. The full metal panic one strongly reflects your opinion and might cause some controversy, but I guess that's more of a good thing.
The animation is pretty nice so far, especially of that dancing dude. I am not entirely sure why you picked him instead of stripper guy after pointing out that the latter is the cause of most of the manservice.
All in all it's pretty nice. Looking forward to see the finished product.

[rtil]

tumblr is pretty hot for nagisa too so i figured it would be funny to have him doing it

the k-on title is just a play on the format of the title, idc if it works phonetically because k-on isn't an english word

if you have a better idea for a haruhi title i'm all ears

and the fmp one is just honest - fumoffu was intended to be "the funny one" - the first season has bits of humor but it's not the primary focus

[rtil]

lmao cake eating simulator.. those are pretty accurate. in fact cake used as a lure to get girls in to clubs seems like a common theme (c3-bu comes to mind recently)

the song is actually the Free ED and i used it because i actually really liked it, and now it syncs with the music so i don't think i can replace it

[Kött]

In my opinion the Free theme suits this just perfectly!

You could use something like Groundhog Day the Anime for Haruhi or include a similar reference, since at least 1/3 of the show consisted of the very same episode. Alternatives could be something along the lines of menstrual rage instead of melancholy (but that seems a bit over-the top sexist) or simply God is Mad (Niezsche Reference).
I like Cake Eating Simulator for K-On... Unfortunately it's a show and not a game, but it's still a pretty nice idea. Cake-ON is kinda dumb (gotta make something of the ON) but the first thing that comes to my mind... the idea about procrastination is all right, but as soon as you try to pronounce it in your head something seems off... Kei means light and On is an abbreviation for Music, and it is pronounced exactly the same way you would read it in English. It's just a detail though... If you go for it, make it 'proKrastinatiON' and try to make it resemble the original logo a bit more. At least that way you have some more resemblence to the original title.
FMPF is good as it is for the aforementioned reasons... wouldn't change it.

[rtil]

late, will post on dA/tumblr later
sexy swimming

[basketweaver]

dose sparkle effects

it looks great!

[rtil]

thanks! i think the sparkles helped a lot

[rtil]

just as planned