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[shura]

more things. most of you have probably already seen this stuff if you follow me on deviantart. i'll be posting a couple WIPs that aren't up there tho. also holy shit i can resize pics when i post them? gj rtil very nice. anyway as always, critique is cool.




Dear god this fucking house is causing me so much stress. finally got the underlying sketch done and now im doing the polished linework on top.

[MarcK]

more things. most of you have probably already seen this stuff if you follow me on deviantart. i'll be posting a couple WIPs that aren't up there tho. also holy shit i can resize pics when i post them? gj rtil very nice. anyway as always, critique is cool.

I'm having trouble understanding the hips on the left girl, and the right girl's white half of the skirt is a little odd for me.
These are really nice though. ^3^

[jjjjjjjjjj]

looks like shit i hate it

[Thor]

UNWARRANTED CRITICISM TIME!

the picture with the girls is good (actually they're all good) BUT you could definitely push the pose on the left gal a bit more by pushing her butt higher in the air and puffing her chest out a little more-- which should help it read as more stand-off-ish, if that's what you're going for.

also you're very good with that line weight :I

[Thor]

looks like shit i hate it

[spite]

I would say the hips on the girl on theleft look a little weird and it feels like all the colors are too vibrant
I like that lizard worm guy

sasha this

is fucking quality!  That is one rad little bug
The pose, the lines, the shading; I love it.

[rtil]

also holy shit i can resize pics when i post them? gj rtil very nice.

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[lenko]

the girl with the octopus on her head looks a little too stiff, try turning her feet/legs a lil it might loosen her up a bit. it might mainly be cos we're viewing her from dead on though

the house looks really nice though, and dont worry about taking too long with construction especially if you're doing lineart over it

[shura]

also holy shit i can resize pics when i post them? gj rtil very nice.

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yeah i realized i couldn't do it after i posted that. now when you post pictures in here i noticed that when you click on them, the little boxes appear on the corners allowing you to resize them. but when you make the actual post, the resize isn't applied

@spite: yeah im still struggling with colors. now you see why i prefer not to color stuff in lmao. glad you like the drawing of bug. i was gonna make that into an motd but then i didn't.

thanks for the crit folks, i'll make some changes and post more stuff tonight hopefully

[rtil]

that's interesting.. i didn't know about that. images don't show up for me in the editor, maybe it's because i'm using the simple one. i'll see if i can fix that feature in the new layout though.

[dilly]

personally, i like the vibrant colors. it gives the piece an interesting look to it. i think if you might shade in some areas like you did in your bug solider, it'll bring down some of that intensity people see.

[emanhattan]

I like all of them specially the first 2 girls

Their hips are a bit small BUT i still like them, specially in the girl to the left. I think it sort of generates this weird, interesting angle with the upper part of her body.

soldierbug is gr8

[shura]

thanks for the comments
i see what you are all saying about the hips. i had been experimenting with her body shape to try and make her look more angular, but i see now that it looks kinda off, so i'll change it.

i started a new drawing today and this is what i got so far

[GRINACE]

the two skin colors throw me off but good work so far. any idea on what she is sitting on? me personally i was thinking on the hood of a car.

[SHADOWFOX2]

Looks like a cliff...

[emanhattan]

Something about the girls you draw reminds me of yourself in person

[shura]

the two skin colors throw me off but good work so far. any idea on what she is sitting on? me personally i was thinking on the hood of a car.

i was going to draw her sitting on the side of a bridge, but i like the car idea. i dont draw enough cars

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[SHADOWFOX2]

Something about the girls you draw reminds me of yourself in person

This only I have never actually met her in person

[texas]

sashura your art is gorgeous please draw/post more

[Fuzz]

Did you ever finish this?