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[creamcorn]

i'm not too keen on the guns and her face seems a bit too low down.

definately needs cooler guns and i think her face is low because its supposed to seem like her head is tilted toward us. if that was the case you didnt do it well, her features arent wrapped around her head (the nose!) so you cant draw them right in this difficult position. unless yknow 3d heads and 2d facial features are your style

otherwise great job i wish you had drawn the legs

[shura]

i'm not too keen on the guns and her face seems a bit too low down.

definately needs cooler guns and i think her face is low because its supposed to seem like her head is tilted toward us. if that was the case you didnt do it well, her features arent wrapped around her head (the nose!) so you cant draw them right in this difficult position.

yea her head is tilted slightly downwards and she is looking upwards. i wish i could have drawn better guns but sadly i dont have a lot of experience drawing them so this is the best i can do for now

[Mew_User]

It's cute that's all that matters.

[shura]

hope this is better
because im tired of this drawing im puttin it out to pasture =[
http://www.thebackalleys.com/dump/files/94...Hp_wrghgjkj.png

[zhicago]

its my favorite of all your pieces

[spite]

Yeah those new guns are much better

[shura]

i was told this perspective on the bike looked weird. for the record, the bike is leaning against the parking meter there, so yes it is tilted.
i'll be uploading the drawing with the rough colors tomorrow hopefully
help

[Flash]

it looks like the motorcycle is riding on the line a bit
but when you colour it it won't look weird anymore
really good stuff

[aether]

Reminds me of those steep and narrow streets in the cities, like San Francisco or maybe a European city because the parking meter is more on the street than it is the sidewalk.

Either way, with color and a background it shouldn't look awkward. Great things are ahead ^-^

[rtil]

i think if you put the meter in the middle of where the bike is leaning it would look more convincing

[shura]

ah yes i see. i think what i need to do is put both the bike and the girl on the same level instead of having the girl on the sidewalk and the bike on the street. and yeah i'll move the meter. thank you for the feedback (:

[emanhattan]

something about her left arm feels weird, other than that I like it, the lineart and design are great

[funzop]

i want to say that the title of this threat disgusts me because it is what people would call farts when you shit yourself but in this case i will asume it is sashas arts ok good also nice art thank you have a swelld ay

[shura]

yep that is actually the joke

[zhicago]

i am always jealous of your lines

[CloudEater]

something about her left arm feels weird, other than that I like it, the lineart and design are great

I think this is because the arm line makes it seem like her shoulder is in front of her chest.

[rtil]

now i just realized she has no boobs and well i'm actually ok with this

[shura]

haha yeah. i wanted to draw a flat chested gal instead of the usual DDD-cup sized tits

[Fuzz]

I'd still hit it. Tits aren't everything.

[Hnilmik]

now i just realized she has no boobs and well i'm actually ok with this

Same goes for me~