Casting Call for "The Summer Help"

[Casey Pixmintro]

Well the thing is you tried, the first step towards failure.

jk thanks

[Hnilmik]

Late late late late late...

Rebecca Kershwell
http://www.thebackalleys.com/dump/files/1306/6920Ui_Rebecca%20Kershwell_Hnilmik.mp3

Lolita Pooshawattaha (improv monologue)
http://www.thebackalleys.com/dump/files/1306/90j8C_Lolita%20Pooshawattaha_Hnilmik_extra.mp3

:/ May record something else for Lolita later~

[Casey Pixmintro]

More like my fault cuz she has like zero dialog in the episode.

[Sapphire]

Did you get any auditions for Burch?

[Casey Pixmintro]

Yeah a few but none of them are really hitting what I want, Hans is gonna do a take for it and maybe Tomamoto

[Sapphire]

Oh, sweet! <3

[sQueef]

ill be honest with you daran your script is terrible, all the criticism said about it is true and to actually pursue the creation of this lame cliche bullshit would essentially just be making another tywo which you swore off. its really not any better than tywo, maybe now you're ripping off family guy a little less. i really want to be blunt with you in hopes that you will listen. this is not a good concept. its been done before, theres nothing original about the premise or the characters. the script looks like it was written by legendary frog. theres nothing good about any of this, i suggest you write another script if you want to produce something that is legitimately funny and wont be adored by idiots.

[BluPhoenix]

should I put in a demo for burch
nah far too lazy

thanks bp7 ur a great person

I've never felt so loved before

[MarcK]

ill be honest with you daran your script is terrible, all the criticism said about it is true and to actually pursue the creation of this lame cliche bullshit would essentially just be making another tywo which you swore off. its really not any better than tywo, maybe now you're ripping off family guy a little less. i really want to be blunt with you in hopes that you will listen. this is not a good concept. its been done before, theres nothing original about the premise or the characters. the script looks like it was written by legendary frog. theres nothing good about any of this, i suggest you write another script if you want to produce something that is legitimately funny and wont be adored by idiots.

Oh snap

[Casey Pixmintro]

Sorry you didn't like it Squeef , it's still in a fetal stage and I'm still trying to improve it. I started realizing I may have jumped the gun starting the auditions so soon.

[rtil]

on the other hand having a voice you like for a character can help shape it better

[texas]

reminds me of

[slantedskarekrow]

reminds me of

yea me too, like a lot.

[Sapphire]

trolls

[MarcK]

Well the characters are somewhat similar but you can say that about a few shows I think.

[Demonous_Xodus]

I do somewhat agree that the script needs some re-working.

Some jokes can be changed around to be better, and some of your characters don't seem to speak with much emotion or human in their voice.

Have you considered getting some writers in on this?

[DrRumack]

alot of good shows use archetypes

thats pretty much all the powerpuff girls + dexter's lab were

honestly i just think you need to rework the dialogue to seem more human and less written

[MarcK]

some of your characters don't seem to speak with much emotion or human in their voice.

I can read voices from text too and burch sounds GAY

[D-Mac]

I took what MarcK noted, and ran with it.
http://www.thebackalleys.com/dump/files/561/38Bc6_DevenMack_Burch.mp3

[Sapphire]

aaaah dmac where did you come from

roflmao, i love your burch