Afterlife

Mushroomboy5 · May 9, 2010 12:11 AM

So I've been working on an animation for school since about feburary, and it's now due in just a few days. Hopefully I'll be working on it nonstop, and to help keep my motivation high I'm going to post it here for all of you to watch, and update it daily until the final when it's due!

http://www.swfcabin.com/open/1273360119

Suggestions are welcome, just remember that if it's something nitpicky I probably won't get around to fixing it until later. Keep in mind that there are a few bits that I haven't timed out yet, so if something goes too fast and you get confused just remember that it will be fixed.
Also I have no idea what to call this thing yet, so any suggestions for a title are welcome.

Hnilmik · May 9, 2010 12:18 AM

Very cute! I like what I see so far!

SHADOWFOX2 · May 10, 2010 04:47 PM

Go go go hurry up

slantedskarekrow · May 10, 2010 08:17 PM

it was very good so far, the concept is neat.

CVG · May 11, 2010 12:32 AM

I liked it a lot and I could follow along even without sound, meaning the visuals were doing a great job telling the story :] Can't wait to see the end part!

Also I liked how that guy's office in Hell had an air conditioner blowing full blast haha.

Mushroomboy5 · May 11, 2010 01:31 AM

Thanks allll

http://www.swfcabin.com/open/1273537610
More stuff.
Click the middle of the screen and you can skip to where I have the most new progress.

DrRumack · May 12, 2010 02:36 AM

awesome

i think when the guy turns into a monster and jumps out of the big containment thing, there should be a little more impact when he hits the ground. as cheesy as it sounds, i think a little camera shaking would make him seem a bit more weighty

Casey Pixmintro · May 12, 2010 03:37 AM

I'm really liking this, great job man! Can't wait to see when it's done

Mushroomboy5 · May 13, 2010 09:46 PM

It's finished!

HA HA NO. It does have an ending though. It's severely abridged and goofy, but it's an ending. Over the course of the summer I'll be putting in lighting effects, missing animation, an epilouge and prolouge, the rest of the sound, and a proper ending SO STAY TUNED.

http://www.swfcabin.com/open/1273783429

And for those of you that don't know it already, editing sound in flash suuuuuuuuuuuuuucks.

DrRumack · May 13, 2010 11:43 PM

oh explosion.gif

you've been so good to us all

shura · May 14, 2010 01:01 AM

wow mushroomboy great job on this. i think your drawing style is really cute, and i like the story a lot too. i hope it gets finished soon