A little progress...

[mishkamash]

Some request from DA. Takes a bit to load...
I did a lil' progress chart like... thing to see how well it turned out.
*I already figured out the hands...*

So yea, waddaya think.

[trent bortknob]

the finished colored one is so much better than the one on paper its unbelievable

[mishkamash]

the finished colored one is so much better than the one on paper its unbelievable

I think I might have to do better with the shading, and detail the shirt a little more.

And ya, thanks.

[Miro]

the finished colored one is so much better than the one on paper its unbelievable

yes


and
how long did it take you now?

[mishkamash]

the finished colored one is so much better than the one on paper its unbelievable

yes


and
how long did it take you now?

Overall, about 2 days

[rtil]

some suggestions:
widen the shoulders

don't make the pose so symmetrical, if he's woozy/sleepy he should be tilting to the side or something, not standing completely straight. it's the "mirror syndrome", it doesn't matter what side you look at him, you could have mirrored half of him, he'd look the same. people don't look like mirror images

hands and arms are looking very strange. i understand what you're trying to do, but it's not working. keep studying anatomy

[mishkamash]

some suggestions:
widen the shoulders

don't make the pose so symmetrical, if he's woozy/sleepy he should be tilting to the side or something, not standing completely straight. it's the "mirror syndrome", it doesn't matter what side you look at him, you could have mirrored half of him, he'd look the same. people don't look like mirror images

hands and arms are looking very strange. i understand what you're trying to do, but it's not working. keep studying anatomy

Alright.
I knew he looked a bit funny like that.
In fact, I have a little critique for myself...

I was trying to make him slouch foward. And where the sketch showed his neck, I pretty much only took some of the neck right out in the coloring process... That didn't really help.
He's supposed to be fatter at the waist, even though the line on his belly showed it...
I tried the whole "Flinstone-y" type of hands, but they ended up all noodled...
And I guess I should fix his head a bit, give him more of a chin.

Pretty much what you said, Anatomy is needed.

[Necronomitr0n]

His hands look like fins or something

might want to improve on that