hey

[Philip K Dick]

out of curiosity

who would actually read a novel im writing if i posted it in segments like a serial novel

[Michelle]

what kind of novel?

i will read it lol

[Ashington]

As long as it's interesting, well written and funny. Then deffo.

[Flash]

^ doesn't need to be a comedy novel. I'd read the first chapter for sure, and if I liked it, I'd read the rest.

[Philip K Dick]

well its not a comedy novel, but it does have some dark humor interwoven in there. being the fledgling writer that i am, i will willingly admit that my style is still in development and as far as motivation goes, posting it here and getting constant feedback would definitely encourage me to finish.

ill post the first part of the first chapter (there are 6 parts) later after revising it a little

[dilly]

I'll read it. I'm a writer myself, I'd love to take a look at it

[Loathsome]

Lmao I knew it'd be something like that.

[DrRumack]

nice wrap up really profound bro

[Michelle]

i loved it

[Philip K Dick]

it picks up during the 2nd chapter

[Flash]

It's been going well so far. As for the story picking up, maybe you could try posting longer chunks over a greater period of time

[Philip K Dick]

i deleted the parts that were already on here but i will post them again when im done revising

[Michelle]

i was gonna comment the second part today but oh well

anyway i like how your writing has a lot of character

[DrRumack]

oh no i missed the second part

[Philip K Dick]

ok like

i have 27 pages done (3 chapters)

what should i do at this point

post it online asap or wait til the whole thinggs done so i can revise an edit

[Ashington]

Best revise and edit now then do whatever.

[Flash]

^this
the more you revise it before you publish it, the better
because as hard as it is to read your story for the 100th time it will be harder if you've already posted it