Claudio slide scene

[Loathsome]

This is a slide scene from Claudio. Critique/feedback are appreciated but I won't change anything big cause I don't have time (deadline plus school), but it'd be good to know for the future.

Oh and, it's the same character as in my poll thread.


http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/140409/79945_slide_scene.php

[ZekeySpaceyLizard]

it looks quite good

if theres anything that seems kinda off its that even when he's far away on the stairwell, he slides at the same speed he does when he's closer to the camera and whooshes by

if he moved a bit slower at the start then sped up i think it'd look more.....'weighty'

[unclephil]

pretty cool.

you could add some more frames at the part where he comes down the staircase to go in the other direction. like the part where hes right in your face. that would make it look cooler.

[funzop]

the jump looks a little weird but yea what zeke said

[Blordow]

it sorta looks like the staircase just curls back up to the top rather than ending at the bottom

[shura]

it looks great, but yeah it looks like the staircase goes back up at the end

[tmk]

it's just a minor detail, but I'm fairly sure that with the sun positioned where it is in the center window, the shadow cast by the the rail would actually be on the opposite side.

other than that, looking sharp

[Loathsome]

Thanks for the critique!

it looks quite good

if theres anything that seems kinda off its that even when he's far away on the stairwell, he slides at the same speed he does when he's closer to the camera and whooshes by

if he moved a bit slower at the start then sped up i think it'd look more.....'weighty'

Thank you!
Easy and fast fix too, will probably be done asap.

the jump looks a little weird

Why so?

it sorta looks like the staircase just curls back up to the top rather than ending at the bottom

It sorta does a bit. The stairs looks like a "J" form so it kinda curles up a bit. But I suppose I should have edited that so it doesn't give the wrong impression for the audience.

it's just a minor detail, but I'm fairly sure that with the sun positioned where it is in the center window, the shadow cast by the the rail would actually be on the opposite side.

other than that, looking sharp

Ah yeah. The background was such a pain to do, when I was making it I was actually thinking about this matter. The reason I put the cast shadow there is because the kitchen is on the right, with lights on. I guess that if I make the light comming from there even brighter, this wouldn't be such a big error?

Also; Thanks!

[Mad Meat]

Damn Fucking Cheese ill never be good as you are....

[lenko]

he seems to shrink as he slides down, watch his size

also what zeke said

also i agree about the staircase looking like it curves