DUEL SHOCK

[unicomics]

lately i have been working on a huge project with a coleague called Duel shock that will be going in the cannes film fest to sell a great idea but we need your support check my coleague's myspace at

www.myspace.com/tigersharkfilms

the video is called duel shock recce footage there is also conseopt art

http://vids.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseacti...eoid=1738976350

so spread the word DUEL SHOCK and tell them about this project

uni

[rtil]

any reason why you're calling it duel shock instead of dual shock?

footage looks interesting but there was way too much text, it's like reading subtitles without anyone talking. i think it went way too slow for a trailer/teaser, some of the art needs a lot of work, too. it lost my attention rather quickly, you should try and pack all that information into a shorter period of time, with less text so the viewer can acutally watch what is going on without having to constantly read scrolling text.

i liked how there were no people for a long time, that was interesting.

[RobjaFalu]

Very awkward piece. I assumed it was a treatment instead of a trailer or test footage. Treatments should only have storyboards, and make them visible, otherwise, you get a confusing set.

another note I have is grammer. Not sure if english is your first or second or even fifth language, but the grammer in the footage was almost unbearable to read. If you need a translator, I could be of assistance, but thats something that is needed if you are to showcase this to a professional audience.

rtil has great points too, the scrolling text, neat effect, not working with the piece. Come up with something else or have someone speak it out.

[Dagolith]

there defiantly should have been a narrator, but i like the "drawing's of an area overtop the picture" thing, but try to make the area match the drawings a little more, they seemed to look alike, but not enough. but the narrator is really a must.

[unicomics]

dont worry this is only a test trailer the will be a proper trailer soon