Jesus and Mary Chain

Started by anigen, March 23, 2008 07:08 AM

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anigen

nah just redmongoose in the desert

try getting to sleep with this miller

for red


ZekeySpaceyLizard

If the tooth is loose or their breath smells, see a vet. One of my cats has both upper canines broken in half, so when she bites there is a tiny dent on the underside and then little circular bruises on the top. Its hilarious. Thats what she gets for chewing on bricks.

KingDavid

upper chest region needs work
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and muse isnt that great anyway
thanks ill use this comment to help myself improve

anigen

Quote from: KingDavidupper chest region needs work

okay well you could at least tell me what kind of work

sQueef

aniiiggennn did you start out with a rough drawing of your figure? It seems to me that you didn't considering the anatomy is all screwy like some Gustav Kilnt painting.

You should start out with a nice gestural pose first and then do the clean line work over that, but other than that I like your color choice and lighting effects and all that.

Oh, wretched ephemeral race ... why do you compel me to tell you what it would be most expedient for you not to hear? What is best of all is utterly beyond your reach: not to be born, not to be, to be nothing. But the second best for you is—to die soon.

KingDavid

#5
it's way to exaggerated and looks freakish. Flatten it out

The red highlights the anatomy of what you were trying to apply to get my picture across. the face is just what i would change about it
Quote from: taylor
Quote from: Sinitronit sucks ass okay

and muse isnt that great anyway
thanks ill use this comment to help myself improve

psi43

Shading on the hair is weird. Looks like he has a spiky helmet.

Besides that and the mentioned things, it's looking nice.

fish

I think it's pretty cool, I'd actually like to know how to do those smoke effects.
I could take a guess or something, but is there anyway you make them other than just adding a transparent blob by whatever should be smoking?

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Loathsome

#8
He shouldn't be blue by the lightning from whatever he's smoking. The real skin tone should appear. Because at night it's blue light and the light from the..whatever, wouldn't be blue.

If you go outside in the dark and light a candle and look into a mirror you'd see what I mean, lol.

edit: well actually if the thing is some kind of lamp with blue light then it's okay I guess (;

Quote from: KingDavidit's way to exaggerated and looks freakish. Flatten it out

The red highlights the anatomy of what you were trying to apply to get my picture across. the face is just what i would change about it

You made the neck look weird on this one though.


bcube

Quote from: KingDavidit's way to exaggerated and looks freakish. Flatten it out

The red highlights the anatomy of what you were trying to apply to get my picture across. the face is just what i would change about it

K.D's red outlines show it in his style, though I sort of see what he's trying to get across.

The only thing I can see throwing me off are the parts before his shoulders and after his neck. If you look they're thick but when the coat comes over em they thin... oh it's difficult to explain...

this is thebackalleys

Loathsome



redmongoose

youre all wrong, its a photograph
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redmongoose

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