run cycle

Started by anigen, March 10, 2008 01:24 AM

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anigen

ok i actually did something

http://theroomunder.com/safe/runtest%5B1%5D.swf

this is the first run cycle ive ever made. it's quite awful but give me some general tips i can use to improve on the next time i do shit like this

trent bortknob

im gonna make one so that you look bad

bcube

The legs seem slightly off compared to the body...
I'm not good at animation, so I can't really give much more of a comment

this is thebackalleys

anigen

Quote from: taylorim gonna make one so that you look bad

k

Quote from: BizzareCubeThe legs seem slightly off compared to the body...

probably

trent bortknob

Quote from: anigen
Quote from: taylorim gonna make one so that you look bad

k
"k"

anigen

oh so now we're starting with the whole "if you don't type like me you're a faggot" bullshit right

rtil

contact, body goes down
mid-air, body goes up
you have it for one of the leg motions but not the other

anigen

i have nothing to say except "oh ok i'll remember that" because the whole thing was done on assumptions, i didnt even know which way the body goes at what time etc

trent bortknob

the movement in general is just really stiff

anigen


trent bortknob

here is a simple generic stick figure run that i might eventually make into a person

http://img299.imageshack.us/my.php?image=runtestek0.swf

sQueef

more in-betweens but you dont care
Oh, wretched ephemeral race ... why do you compel me to tell you what it would be most expedient for you not to hear? What is best of all is utterly beyond your reach: not to be born, not to be, to be nothing. But the second best for you is—to die soon.


Sonni

#13
I think you got it alright for the leg but the upper and mid part looks weird. Maybe change the running pose.

EDIT: I hope this helps abit:

http://www.idleworm.com/how/anm/02w/walk1.shtml
Quote from: Squeefhollywood just thought itd be cool to make goku an adult who uses uzis and drives ferraris

rtil

that animation kind of sucks but do look at the reference sheets they're providing for body movement and the contraposto in the hips and shoulders

anigen

Quote from: taylorhere is a simple generic stick figure run that i might eventually make into a person

http://img299.imageshack.us/my.php?image=runtestek0.swf

ok

Quote from: Squeefmore in-betweens but you dont care

me or taylor?

Quote from: Zekeyrun and see if your own body moves anything like that

nope it doesnt

Quote from: SonniI think you got it alright for the leg but the upper and mid part looks weird. Maybe change the running pose.

EDIT: I hope this helps abit:

http://www.idleworm.com/how/anm/02w/walk1.shtml

that's a walk cycle

Quote from: rtilthat animation kind of sucks but do look at the reference sheets they're providing for body movement and the contraposto in the hips and shoulders

i guess i'll keep trying it until i get it. what other shit do you suggest i attempt to animate

ThunderCurls

HAHA LOOK AT THAT LITTLE BASTARD RUN

hes off

rtil

#17
since you did a run a walk seems appropriate. do the key poses first, then inbetween. here are some tips to help improve your walk:
1. head is at its highest point at the passing position - when one leg is passing the other
2. head is at its lowest point at the contact position - when a foot first touches the ground
3. before a foot touches the ground the toes should be pointing up. this will help give your character balance
4. before you finish a frame ask yourself if the center of gravity lines up with the shoulers - if not, try again

psi43

Quote from: taylorhere is a simple generic stick figure run that i might eventually make into a person

http://img299.imageshack.us/my.php?image=runtestek0.swf


lmao did you actually make that? Looking pretty good.

To anigen, the body looks ok but I can't figure out what the legs are doing. You should take a look at Anipedia's walking cycle article, read it and then do the same thing with a running cycle. There's no difference, it has all of the same poses they're just drawn differently but they're there to do the same thing.

Halcion

i had a go at a silhouette walk cycle.
[attachment=933:walking.swf]
辢辔虐,辢辔虐,辢辔虐,辢辔虐,辢辔虐,辢辔虐,辢辔虐,辢辔虐,辢辔虐,辢辔虐,辢辔虐

虐號箔算,虐號箔算,虐號箔算,虐號箔算,虐號箔算,虐號箔算,虐號箔算,虐號箔算,