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Started by zomfgbie, November 7, 2007 10:46 PM

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zomfgbie

http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/409296

heres a little flash i made
check out the cool little preloader fade
dont worry
be happy

in ever flash i have some trouble
in this one you gotsa double click the play button
but dont worry
be happy =]
i am dead

<+wwchicken> once i walked into the kitchen and there was a sound
<+wwchicken> but i could only hear it when i stood on one spot in the kitchen
<+wwchicken> then i turned off the light
<+wwchicken> and it was gone
<+wwchicken> then i turned the light back on and there it was again
<+wwchicken> so i thought, its an invisible alien
<+wwchicken> but hes scared of the dark

psi43

The backgrounds are good, especially the first one. You should try to draw better characters though (I know you can but why don't you do it?)

zomfgbie

this was just short, my real submission is what im making for xmas
i am dead

<+wwchicken> once i walked into the kitchen and there was a sound
<+wwchicken> but i could only hear it when i stood on one spot in the kitchen
<+wwchicken> then i turned off the light
<+wwchicken> and it was gone
<+wwchicken> then i turned the light back on and there it was again
<+wwchicken> so i thought, its an invisible alien
<+wwchicken> but hes scared of the dark

trent bortknob


zomfgbie

im glad you liked the backgrounds, there what i spent most time on. and yeah i know the characters sucked, this is only my 3rd completed flash movie, but excuses excuses atleast i know what to work on now  
i am dead

<+wwchicken> once i walked into the kitchen and there was a sound
<+wwchicken> but i could only hear it when i stood on one spot in the kitchen
<+wwchicken> then i turned off the light
<+wwchicken> and it was gone
<+wwchicken> then i turned the light back on and there it was again
<+wwchicken> so i thought, its an invisible alien
<+wwchicken> but hes scared of the dark

adamant

congratulations you got runner up

now 5 extra people will watch your movie

zomfgbie

actually it was 9
i am dead

<+wwchicken> once i walked into the kitchen and there was a sound
<+wwchicken> but i could only hear it when i stood on one spot in the kitchen
<+wwchicken> then i turned off the light
<+wwchicken> and it was gone
<+wwchicken> then i turned the light back on and there it was again
<+wwchicken> so i thought, its an invisible alien
<+wwchicken> but hes scared of the dark

KingDavid

that's my fulp sux
Quote from: taylor
Quote from: Sinitronit sucks ass okay

and muse isnt that great anyway
thanks ill use this comment to help myself improve

adamant


Crabarms

Enjoyable.
I like it.
Some things I liked about it was the way the guy fell, the dust flew up which was done nicely.
Funny.
The music wasnt too loud.