The Most Annoying Sketchbook In The World

rtil · May 31, 2012 09:42 AM

i like the muted colors. you should just fill it nicely instead of scribble on it. it probably would have only taken you about 15 more minutes

SHADOWFOX2 · May 31, 2012 12:02 PM

I agree with the above statement
This world seems kind of interesting and I'd like to see more drawings like this
Keep it eup

valiums · June 8, 2012 05:20 AM

SHADOWFOX2 · June 8, 2012 07:06 AM

boid

valiums · June 10, 2012 07:58 AM

Quote from: SHADOWFOX2 on June 8, 2012 07:06 AM
boid

That inspired this, some how:

I drew the girl in red as an afterthought, which I'm pretty sure shows in her asinine pose.

Can't seem to get the hang of soft shadows, so I tried dabbling in hard ones.

Is the color alright?

rtil · June 10, 2012 08:10 AM

i probably would have met with a more muted background color, makes everything else pop out and the left character's shiirt is too close in value to the purple

valiums · June 10, 2012 09:13 AM

?

rtil · June 10, 2012 09:15 AM

yeah that's better

SHADOWFOX2 · June 10, 2012 07:47 PM

Love me some inspirations
Really trying hard not to identify the right character as Link

valiums · June 10, 2012 08:08 PM

Quote from: SHADOWFOX2 on June 10, 2012 07:47 PM
Really trying hard not to identify the right character as Link

Hahaha, oh my god.
Maybe I should lay off the video games.

CVG · June 10, 2012 10:13 PM

That comic page doesn't seem to make any sense so far...I see a lady turning and then a monster and then a close claw near her as she is running okay...but then some dude in a hoodie and a little box with "snap" written on it ?_? Um what's going on there? I can't piece it together. Also everything is crammed into those panels so close that they all seem "boxed in" by the panels. I'd zoom back just a little more on the faces and allow more scene to be shown so that we know she's running in a place (like where IS she? in a desert? in a city? a building lab? who knows.) I'll leave the rest of my concerns when we see a more finished looking page

valiums · June 21, 2012 10:14 PM

I abandoned whatever comic attempt that was; the page is absolutely terrrrible. >_>
But I'll try solidifying another comic idea and making a better page.

I lost my tablet for about a week and half, but the instant I found it, I drew this.

And then I remembered that atmospheric perspective was a thing.
I'm at a loss as to what I should do with that great lump in the distance.

And this (mostly the somewhat firmer shapes in front), have inspired me to attempt something without lines.

But that's probably going to take a bit.

rtil · June 21, 2012 11:03 PM

any reason you're using that mustard yellow color for a majority of the colors? judging by the sky it is night time, i'd expect a cooler color dominating the scene

valiums · June 22, 2012 12:12 AM

Because I forgot about coolness and warmth.

D:<

shmeckelbutt · June 22, 2012 03:39 AM

it's all about those cool colors

nice work btw

SHADOWFOX2 · June 22, 2012 06:55 AM

Abandon no comics, this is a boom season for comics here at TBA
Finish this most recent painting I like it a lot

Sinitron · June 22, 2012 01:45 PM

fix the mustard yellow thing

mustard tastes like SHIT

then it might be cool??? when done IDK!

Gladius · June 22, 2012 01:48 PM

Quote from: Sinitron on June 22, 2012 01:45 PM
mustard tastes like SHIT

dijon is tasty go fuck your self bitch

also good drawings lovey but fix ya colors they are not eye-pleasing

valiums · July 3, 2012 07:26 AM

The oekaki was giving me trouble so I decided to doodle in Flash instead.

rtil · July 3, 2012 11:55 AM

nice animation. i like the turnaround and dash. what was going on with the oekaki?