Robot art

Started by ChaosLord, October 12, 2011 08:20 AM

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Critise on my skills. I want every last detail shot at me.
Spike.

Pants, the terrible

pretty decent. reminds me of powerpuff girls... but static. if this were animated, that would be a different story.

um, just sketch out geometric shapes before you base the product on them.

rtil, scribs (if your ever here), psi, you take over.


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ChaosLord

Quote from: Pants, the terrible on October 12, 2011 08:41 AM
pretty decent. reminds me of powerpuff girls... but static. if this were animated, that would be a different story.

um, just sketch out geometric shapes before you base the product on them.

rtil, scribs (if your ever here), psi, you take over.

Psi already told me they were pretty good
Spike.

Sinitron

don't listen to psi

you can add details and shit but the rest is pretty inconsistent and there is no flow, being incredibly static and not in a good way since your lines aren't very sturdy

it's very noticable on the top-most robot's legs since they don't make a lot of sense when compared to the shape of his body, it most certainly isn't symmetric

Philip K Dick


ChaosLord

Quote from: Sinitron on October 12, 2011 11:07 PM
don't listen to psi

you can add details and shit but the rest is pretty inconsistent and there is no flow, being incredibly static and not in a good way since your lines aren't very sturdy

it's very noticable on the top-most robot's legs since they don't make a lot of sense when compared to the shape of his body, it most certainly isn't symmetric
A very reliable critic. Btw, i drew these two years ago, so I have changed.
Spike.

Sinitron

"hi critique my art oh your critique is invalid because i made this years ago i'm BETTER now" fuck you idiot if you're going to ask for critique you could at the very least post something you care about getting critique on

Philip K Dick

Quote from: Sinitron on October 13, 2011 12:10 AM
"hi critique my art oh your critique is invalid because i made this years ago i'm BETTER now" fuck you idiot if you're going to ask for critique you could at the very least post something you care about getting critique on

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Quote from: Sinitron on October 13, 2011 12:10 AM
you could at the very least post something you care about getting critique on
i did want to see what this forum was like for critisism before i posted some stuff. like this

recently new, just tried to copy the robotic style i did, don't think i did a good job though.
Spike.

SHADOWFOX2

The head of it looks pretty good
I can't help but feel like you slacked on the body a little
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Pants, the terrible

ropesnack 2.0 there


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Sinitron

It's better, not as stiff, but as mentioned the body isn't entirely consistent and I'm not fond of the thing sticking out under the head. The head itself is fine.

Pants, the terrible

sintron's dick there


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Sinitron

no mine is hairier FUCK YOU!

Pants, the terrible

sin read you post with a sexy voice and send me the wav


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