The Telescope

[lenko]

Like if the blue kid actually saw different crazy things and the boy realizes they both were seeing things creatively in their own ways

wow yeah this would have worked really well actually

[BlueScarab]

You perfected that lineless art style you and a few others got going on. That is something, I guess.

[shmeckelbutt]

really cool

glad you finished it

i liked the visuals but i feel it needed more story depth to it instead of one kind finding a cool telescope and the other kid being a douchebag

[Gerkinman]

Cheers CVG

Then the kid in the process finds a friend and goes off to play with him...if anything added I would have liked it if the telescope had been more responsible for bringing them together like as if the object was not just thrown away but a vessel for them both to interact and see things differently. Like if the blue kid actually saw different crazy things and the boy realizes they both were seeing things creatively in their own ways, and thus became friends because of the telescope. But anyways yeah I liked it and it definitely shows the hard work and patience you put into each bit...the coloring and shaded gradient in all the parts must have been very time-consuming. Also heh I like that disgusting mom when she stuck her hand into her crotch and sniffed it lmao, overall a good short.

The main reason I didn't have the blue kid see something different to the first kid is that as a character he was created by a friend of mine, albeit the character has always been an adult. I guess it was set up as a buddy comedy where the first kid, or Merve as we call him is a rather loose character with some drug issues, the second kid, or Allen is a really down to earth serious type fellow. This cartoon was really like an origin story I suppose. Im currently working on the writing for some things that bring them back to the adults that my friend originally intended, its all intertwined with Gerkinman too who im working on bring back. So I can see why as a film on its own your concept would work better, but  Im hoping, when this is worked in with the other things Im working on to make a whole that it sort of sits better.

You perfected that lineless art style you and a few others got going on. That is something, I guess.

I have been doing that since 2008, I dont particularly think I have improved.

really cool

glad you finished it

i liked the visuals but i feel it needed more story depth to it instead of one kind finding a cool telescope and the other kid being a douchebag

Your summary sounds so much more realistic then an elaborate story tho.