New Comic

[Fuzz]

You did a good job with the checkering on her bandanna tho.

[Gregly]

Oh gosh, I completely forgot about this topic for two months.

Here's the ones I've done since then. I've been trying to use more pure blacks to make it more visually interesting, and I think I might be getting the hang of it.
Let me know what you think.

Plus, CVG gave me some wording advice that I haven't incorporated yet because I'm a slacker.

[Hnilmik]

I really like how natural the poses are~

[Flash]

pacing issues
whole lotta time spent depicting the characters doing nothing interesting. (most webcomics are like that i guess)
the part where the characters are at work could have been shortened to give you space to present what's actually important (in this case, the breakup and the final scene) in a more dramatic, involving way

but nice art, keep it coming

[rtil]

breaking up via text, brutal

[Gregly]

I really like how natural the poses are~

Thanks!

pacing issues
whole lotta time spent depicting the characters doing nothing interesting. (most webcomics are like that i guess)
the part where the characters are at work could have been shortened to give you space to present what's actually important (in this case, the breakup and the final scene) in a more dramatic, involving way

but nice art, keep it coming

I'm working on it!

breaking up via text, brutal

That was the idea!
Oh how do I make it so my livestream is on the livestream list here so that I can do my comic on livestream and people can watch my livestream livestream?

[rtil]

just give me the name of your livestream channel. only i can add it

[Gregly]

http://www.livestream.com/gregdraws?t=293265

[rtil]

just needed the name not the url. but it's been added, thanks

[lenko]

DAMN that girl at the party is a BITCH

[shura]

i like that the characters dont speak in perfect complete sentences
gj its looking good so far