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February 16, 2009 05:45 PM Last Edit: February 16, 2009 09:24 PM by Clutch
http://www.pulseshift.com/theseus/view/cacfb3cf-beb/
http://www.pulseshift.com/theseus/view/cc81c59c-dc8/
http://www.pulseshift.com/theseus/view/65edac8e-534/
<--really similar to my old ways unfortunately.

Some of you may remember me as the douchebag that tried to defend stick animation. Well, you were all completely right. But i'm trying to put that behind me now and i've really been trying to animate actual characters (go figure). But yea, that would be fantastic if you could all tell me whats wrong with all of these.

rtil

#1
February 16, 2009 08:51 PM
that site is giving me a 500 error

if these are swf's you can post these here, or upload them on thebackalleys.com/ok/public/ and use the [ flash ] tag

zomfgbie

#2
February 16, 2009 08:52 PM
well for starters, they don't appear to exist
i am dead

<+wwchicken> once i walked into the kitchen and there was a sound
<+wwchicken> but i could only hear it when i stood on one spot in the kitchen
<+wwchicken> then i turned off the light
<+wwchicken> and it was gone
<+wwchicken> then i turned the light back on and there it was again
<+wwchicken> so i thought, its an invisible alien
<+wwchicken> but hes scared of the dark

emanhattan

#4
February 16, 2009 09:49 PM
I think they are fairly decent.
One of the arms felt a little odd in the end of the loop in the second one. even if it was on perspective.

in the third one, there is some REALLY REALY FAST timing, wich most people use in order to be plain lazy and make a lot of mistakes that arent really noticeable, I cant really judge you on that since its just the outline thing but try not to go "OMG ZO FAST" and draw less frames or crappier frames. I dont think you will.

gluck!


Michelle

#5
February 16, 2009 10:13 PM
wow lookit that

third one- when you kick i hope to god your leg doesn't actually move upward like that. i'm not big on fighting or leg action but i would think the leg would just "jut out" or at least recoil on contact.

Clutch

#6
February 16, 2009 10:25 PM
yea that kick didn't turn out very well.

rtil

#7
February 18, 2009 06:00 AM
the first and second ones are pretty solid. the 3rd one has some strange drawings and the timing is a little too fast. you're on your way though

Ying

#8
February 18, 2009 12:59 PM
in the third, when we cut to the shot when we kick, his foot is huge in comparison to the other person's head.

the second and especially the first were a joy to watch.

zomfgbie

#9
February 18, 2009 03:07 PM Last Edit: February 18, 2009 03:08 PM by FreekC
on the whole theyre pretty good, but why are you such a violent man? stick figures work well in fighting cartoons cause 12 year old kids like cartoon fighting and stick figures respectively

work on some basic action. walking, running, falling, jumping. also facial expressions

a huge improvement from your previous work though!
i am dead

<+wwchicken> once i walked into the kitchen and there was a sound
<+wwchicken> but i could only hear it when i stood on one spot in the kitchen
<+wwchicken> then i turned off the light
<+wwchicken> and it was gone
<+wwchicken> then i turned the light back on and there it was again
<+wwchicken> so i thought, its an invisible alien
<+wwchicken> but hes scared of the dark

emanhattan

#10
February 18, 2009 04:55 PM
yeah what freaksy said

It is way harder to animate normal paced actions than fast-ass like these

Zwickel

#11
February 18, 2009 07:15 PM
Oh I like #1 and 2, cool stuff

zomfgbie

#12
February 18, 2009 07:19 PM
change your name to clutchstudios
i am dead

<+wwchicken> once i walked into the kitchen and there was a sound
<+wwchicken> but i could only hear it when i stood on one spot in the kitchen
<+wwchicken> then i turned off the light
<+wwchicken> and it was gone
<+wwchicken> then i turned the light back on and there it was again
<+wwchicken> so i thought, its an invisible alien
<+wwchicken> but hes scared of the dark

mishkamash

#14
February 21, 2009 03:29 PM
Quote from: ClutchSome of you may remember me as the douchebag that tried to defend stick animation. Well, you were all completely right. But i'm trying to put that behind me now and i've really been trying to animate actual characters (go figure).



we still hate you
<lenko> i saw a hedgehog on the way home if i was drunk i would have yelled IM DOCTOR RRRRROBOTNIK and chased it 

psi43

#15
February 21, 2009 04:14 PM
^lmao
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