Some of Ma' Work

[YungJazz]

Some of ma work, the first one I think I posted in my introduction too, but there's more. Click HERE to see all my Newgrounds page with my flash movies.

A drawing of the characters for my upcoming flash, Aqueon Nights.

This was one of my VERY FIRST photoshops, so it ain't a masterpiece exactly. It's me and my two best homies.
http://fc05.deviantart.com/fs19/f/2007/281...Samuraijazz.jpg

[GRINACE]

Love yo ish bro, I wish I could do stuff like that. U use a template right? Heh my stuff is mouse drawn... I like ur style.

[SHADOWFOX2]

Hey this is pretty good

[YungJazz]

Thanks yall, and I'm a mouse artist too. lol i suk with tablets

[GRINACE]

Heh, that makes it even more impressive.

[MRat]

I like your work alot more now than I used to. I remember when I first saw it I was like PFFFT bad voice acting bad sound can't watch.

But with your latest submission I went back and rewatched it, and you have some decent moments thrown in with the stiffness. And this IS a big problem with your work I'm afraid. It's quite stiff. Your animation I mean.

I read somewhere though that you were working hard to getting good into some FBF stuff, and if you can get in there and smooth it out, maybe work out your timings a little better, I see alot of potential.


It's nice to see Anime with some actual STYLE applied to it from time to time.


EDIT: Your drawings in this thread don't even resemble anime. But alot of your work does.

[rtil]

if you animate with a mouse you are insane
i couldn't create jack with a mouse and it took me ten times longer to produce anything in it than with a tablet
perhaps you experience the same disconnect zekey did with the intuos series
if that's the case save up for a cintiq/tablet pc

[YungJazz]

I know MRat, I admit it, and I'm working on it. I'm just anal about detail, I want every frame to look nice, so by the time I'm done making an animation that looks killer in the screenshots, the movement suffers. Still all improving though heh

And the tablet's really that much better? That's what everybody says but I tried it at my boy's house and it didn't work too well for me. I started drawing with a mouse in MS paint on my Mom's work computer when I was about 5 or 6, so I'm as fast with a mouse as I am with a pencil. Maybe I am a lil' insane lol

[zomfgbie]

lol anal

i use a mouse too

[trent bortknob]

lmao

[anigen]

you're actually a pretty good animator. all i can generally say is what everyone else has said so far, just the stiff movements and such. what i would recommend is like doing all of the animation pose to pose in roughs before doing all of the detail. that way the movement doesnt have to suffer and afterwards you can go nuts with the detail

another small thing i noticed is that a lot of it was really dark. its hard to really grasp the visuals because of the lighting

but yeh these are just my opinions. keep up the good work

[zomfgbie]

guys he said anal

[Gerkinman]

And the tablet's really that much better? That's what everybody says but I tried it at my boy's house and it didn't work too well for me. I started drawing with a mouse in MS paint on my Mom's work computer when I was about 5 or 6, so I'm as fast with a mouse as I am with a pencil. Maybe I am a lil' insane lol

Sometimes people take a while to get used to using tablets, i know it took me a few weeks before i was really getting the results i wanted, whereas my gf was fine from the get go.

[KingDavid]

plz guys i dont wanna see this go into another mouse vs. tablet discussion =(

i like your work man, very ghetto

[GRINACE]

heh, ur saying it looks like it's from the slums?

[KingDavid]

No no, i mean like gangsta, phat, sickk, etc.

[rtil]

kingdavid is attempting to break racial walls and connect with his cultural counterparts

[Gerkinman]

thats a nice image macro you got thare.

[anigen]

kingdavid is attempting to break racial walls and connect with his cultural counterparts

ahaahahahaa holy shit

[Stick Man]

yeah this stuff does look like it came from the slums