Grinachi in the winter.

Started by GRINACE, November 26, 2007 11:22 PM

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GRINACE

I just finished it today. I personally like it. His hair & tattoo color changes because of the outfit and the tempature. Tell me what you think or anything I should put in to make it better!


EDIT: I fixed the colors ok!
[attachment=369:snowfall...terclolr.swf]



rtil

the base isn't bad but the colors you use are just too saturated. if you're going to go that saturated, do it on an area of focus, or use really dark tones for shading. otherwise it's just like i'm looking at a bunch of very bright splotches of colors

KingDavid

Aww yes, I've never animated snowflakes in my life :X
Anyways, despite what RTIL said personnaly I liked the coloring of the cool colors for the out fit balanced out by the warm color of his face - rtil's suggestion may make it better though iunno - try and see which one is better
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GRINACE

Ill give it a shot. I really didn't feel like coloring the picture so I just did that for now. lol If you didn't notice. He is breathing lol.

rtil


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zomfgbie

the snow and the whole head area is pretty cool. just add a lil more defenition to the upper body, it just seems like one big lump and the arms are straight lines, the chest should overlap the left arm a lil. apart from that i think its great
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adamant

it gets staticy when you zoom in

why is this?

GRINACE

#8
Because it has a "Glow" effect on it...

Done with the new colors!


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rtil

yes it does look better. it won't go to document size because it's not embedded, just the raw SWF. the forum doesn't have an swf player. just resize the window

GRINACE


trent bortknob

i like the one better the second looks like bad gradients

mishkamash

#12
very cool

the snow is pretty good

I'd try using different patterns for the clothes, because to me the pattern is just water drops and polka dots but i dunno its still good!
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