more things. most of you have probably already seen this stuff if you follow me on deviantart. i'll be posting a couple WIPs that aren't up there tho. also holy shit i can resize pics when i post them? gj rtil very nice. anyway as always, critique is cool.
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Dear god this fucking house is causing me so much stress. finally got the underlying sketch done and now im doing the polished linework on top.
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Quote from: shuramore things. most of you have probably already seen this stuff if you follow me on deviantart. i'll be posting a couple WIPs that aren't up there tho. also holy shit i can resize pics when i post them? gj rtil very nice. anyway as always, critique is cool.
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I'm having trouble understanding the hips on the left girl, and the right girl's white half of the skirt is a little odd for me.
These are really nice though. ^3^
looks like shit i hate it
UNWARRANTED CRITICISM TIME!
the picture with the girls is good (actually they're all good) BUT you could definitely push the pose on the left gal a bit more by pushing her butt higher in the air and puffing her chest out a little more-- which should help it read as more stand-off-ish, if that's what you're going for.
also you're very good with that line weight :I
Quote from: jjjjjjjjjjlooks like shit i hate it
(https://udrive.oit.umass.edu/jgchan/jface.png)
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I would say the hips on the girl on theleft look a little weird and it feels like all the colors are too vibrant
I like that lizard worm guy
sasha this
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is fucking quality! That is one rad little bug
The pose, the lines, the shading; I love it.
Quote from: shuraalso holy shit i can resize pics when i post them? gj rtil very nice.
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the girl with the octopus on her head looks a little too stiff, try turning her feet/legs a lil it might loosen her up a bit. it might mainly be cos we're viewing her from dead on though
the house looks really nice though, and dont worry about taking too long with construction especially if you're doing lineart over it
Quote from: rtilQuote from: shuraalso holy shit i can resize pics when i post them? gj rtil very nice.
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yeah i realized i couldn't do it after i posted that. now when you post pictures in here i noticed that when you click on them, the little boxes appear on the corners allowing you to resize them. but when you make the actual post, the resize isn't applied
@spite: yeah im still struggling with colors. now you see why i prefer not to color stuff in lmao. glad you like the drawing of bug. i was gonna make that into an motd but then i didn't.
thanks for the crit folks, i'll make some changes and post more stuff tonight hopefully
that's interesting.. i didn't know about that. images don't show up for me in the editor, maybe it's because i'm using the simple one. i'll see if i can fix that feature in the new layout though.
personally, i like the vibrant colors. it gives the piece an interesting look to it. i think if you might shade in some areas like you did in your bug solider, it'll bring down some of that intensity people see.
I like all of them specially the first 2 girls
Their hips are a bit small BUT i still like them, specially in the girl to the left. I think it sort of generates this weird, interesting angle with the upper part of her body.
soldierbug is gr8
thanks for the comments
i see what you are all saying about the hips. i had been experimenting with her body shape to try and make her look more angular, but i see now that it looks kinda off, so i'll change it.
i started a new drawing today and this is what i got so far
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the two skin colors throw me off but good work so far. any idea on what she is sitting on? me personally i was thinking on the hood of a car.
Looks like a cliff...
Something about the girls you draw reminds me of yourself in person
Quote from: GRINACEthe two skin colors throw me off but good work so far. any idea on what she is sitting on? me personally i was thinking on the hood of a car.
i was going to draw her sitting on the side of a bridge, but i like the car idea. i dont draw enough cars
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Quote from: emanSomething about the girls you draw reminds me of yourself in person
This only I have never actually met her in person
sashura your art is gorgeous please draw/post more
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Did you ever finish this?
Quote from: texassashura your art is gorgeous please draw/post more
Quote from: creamcornQuote from: texassashura your art is gorgeous please draw/post more
thank you so much, it really means a lot to me. im glad it didn't remind you too much of scoot pilgram
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Did you ever finish this?
its not done yet, im still working on it but i haven't had the time to finish
here's what i got so far.
im still making changes to it. originally it was supposed to be a car stranded in the desert, but i decided to have it parked in the woods instead idk
i tried to exaggerate the car proportions a little but i think it ended up looking wonky
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that is looking great so far
That looks really nice keep it up
also what happened to my drawing?
I really like how it looks so far~ I can't wait 'til it's done!
thanks everyone
Quote from: AshingtonThat looks really nice keep it up
also what happened to my drawing?
im still workin on it dont worry. it takes me a long time to finish stuff because im busy moving into my new apartment and idk im pretty lazy in general
your lineart is CLEAN
impecable
i know it belongs in the redo thread but i felt like bumpin my art thread
critique would be cool
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I like the one on the right. 'Looks more vibrant and interesting, and I don't just mean the colors~
lmao i can't help but notice that her eyes in the 2010 version are very dora the explorer like
i really like it though, very clean lines as always, nice texture on the hat. pretty good.
ehhhh, i really don't see a resemblance but i guess it's better than saying it looks like anime
also
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your art makes me a jealous boi
great stuff
also hey nic drawin it reminds me of zelda
i think her hat should be cyan instead of green
other than that its neat, she could use a bit of shading though just to make her pop out a bit more from the background
Quote from: vegetai think her hat should be cyan instead of green
other than that its neat, she could use a bit of shading though just to make her pop out a bit more from the background
you are definitely right about the shading. im keeping the green hat, but i added some cyan to the background so that now it's even
more visually assaulting
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Hey babe why don't you assault my visuals
i love her little pink streak in her hair also the splatters cool stuff
here are just some rough sketches. didn't feel like exaggerating anything
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also i drew a guy holy shit
You have a really good style. Those sketches are looking good, the faceless guys figure seems awkward though. His waist also seems to be drawn lower than the height you've drawn all the other characters waists...
prince: dont you EVER speak of my prominent unibrow at the royal dinners AGAIN
lmaooo
I like how you draw your character´s eyes its pretty cute
great sketches btw
thank you =)
here's a new drawing i was working on last night. if it looks familiar, its actually a redo of a drawing i did a couple months ago that i hated because it was shitty
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sexy
this is great sasha the colors are damn sexy
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You're making me jelly, I mean jealous.
yeah this is awesome all around
tbh this is like youre worst drawing so far in this thread its way too static her expression looks like shit and most fo all she looks like a fucking downright dirty dumpster slut so bro im not callin u out on this this just is some constructive constricticisms or w/e man but yeah
it reminds me of that green haired chick from ikki tousen except wiht smaller titties
like i said last night i love it just ditch the textures on the little guns
wow goddamn you've improved, some serious awesome right there! Although the guns seem a little off but apart from that this is sweet, can't wait to see my one!
Quote from: rtillike i said last night i love it just ditch the textures on the little guns
i wish i could, but the texture and color are merged on the same layer
Quote from: Geminishe looks like a fucking downright dirty dumpster slut
this is exactly what i was going for
yo im just mad trollin yo no hard feelings aihgt
it really is tho im not joking
dumpster slut or not i would totally take that out to chinese
Lovin' the colors!
Quote from: SapphireLovin' the colors!
Me too!
I looove this.
How in hell did you become this good with colors?
it seriously amuses me how much you have improved over these past months and I envy the quality of your work
good good good good
damn that looks nice
you guys are swell
Quote from: emanI looove this.
How in hell did you become this good with colors?
it seriously amuses me how much you have improved over these past months and I envy the quality of your work
good good good good
idk, i spend so much time browsing deviantart, artist blogs, and photography sites that eventually i started to learn what colors can go together. experimenting helps too. i really envy those artists who just have a natural eye for it
i'm not too keen on the guns and her face seems a bit too low down. otherwise this looks pretty good, and yeah the colour choices are nice
Quote from: vegetai'm not too keen on the guns and her face seems a bit too low down.
definately needs cooler guns and i think her face is low because its supposed to seem like her head is tilted toward us. if that was the case you didnt do it well, her features arent wrapped around her head (the nose!) so you cant draw them right in this difficult position. unless yknow 3d heads and 2d facial features are your style
otherwise great job i wish you had drawn the legs (https://thebackalleys.com/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fmsnemotions.org%2Femoticons%2Fuploads%2Fdrool.jpg&hash=e51dba7d6df486a42fee818b94589a68a2b838d2)
Quote from: creamcornQuote from: vegetai'm not too keen on the guns and her face seems a bit too low down.
definately needs cooler guns and i think her face is low because its supposed to seem like her head is tilted toward us. if that was the case you didnt do it well, her features arent wrapped around her head (the nose!) so you cant draw them right in this difficult position.
yea her head is tilted slightly downwards and she is looking upwards. i wish i could have drawn better guns but sadly i dont have a lot of experience drawing them so this is the best i can do for now
It's cute that's all that matters.
hope this is better
because im tired of this drawing im puttin it out to pasture =[
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its my favorite of all your pieces
Yeah those new guns are much better
i was told this perspective on the bike looked weird. for the record, the bike is leaning against the parking meter there, so yes it is tilted.
i'll be uploading the drawing with the rough colors tomorrow hopefully
help
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it looks like the motorcycle is riding on the line a bit
but when you colour it it won't look weird anymore
really good stuff
Reminds me of those steep and narrow streets in the cities, like San Francisco or maybe a European city because the parking meter is more on the street than it is the sidewalk.
Either way, with color and a background it shouldn't look awkward. Great things are ahead ^-^
i think if you put the meter in the middle of where the bike is leaning it would look more convincing
ah yes i see. i think what i need to do is put both the bike and the girl on the same level instead of having the girl on the sidewalk and the bike on the street. and yeah i'll move the meter. thank you for the feedback (:
something about her left arm feels weird, other than that I like it, the lineart and design are great
i want to say that the title of this threat disgusts me because it is what people would call farts when you shit yourself but in this case i will asume it is sashas arts ok good also nice art thank you have a swelld ay
yep that is actually the joke
i am always jealous of your lines
Quote from: emanhattansomething about her left arm feels weird, other than that I like it, the lineart and design are great
I think this is because the arm line makes it seem like her shoulder is in front of her chest.
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now i just realized she has no boobs and well i'm actually ok with this
haha yeah. i wanted to draw a flat chested gal instead of the usual DDD-cup sized tits
I'd still hit it. Tits aren't everything.
Quote from: rtilnow i just realized she has no boobs and well i'm actually ok with this
Same goes for me~
DFC
elegant girls dont always have that much bubs in them anyway
uh this is pretty ridiculous
if her boobs aren't taking up at least 70 percent of the screen by the time you're finished with this I'm gonna have to de-friend you
some sort of goddess i guess. im gonna figure out what to do with her eye when i color it
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She's really pretty! Even without eyes!
flub
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lookin reeeal nice
i like the lantern's sense of light, even if its just a tiny orange sphere
simplistic yet stylish
thanks bp and hnil
I really love the color scheme in this one! A little mysterious too~
this is inoffensive to my eyes
good
aweseome color scheme
awesome even
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chub
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I don't know how to describe it, but I really like her shape, if it makes any sense.
Like, she's actually "doing something" instead of just posing, so it makes her seem more natural.
And as usual, your lines are prreeeeettyy~
i'm loving the start of this! can't wait for the colors
Sasha's an effin great art fart ill tell u that
natural pose and expression, lovely lines as always
fucking awesome
you've got a good way of doing noses
like some people doing this style just represent the nose as a dot/line which is a little too simple and others put these huge fuckin shnozzes with massive overly detailed nostrils on their characters and it looks shit (especially on girls)
this is a good balance though
Quote from: MistaBuckSasha's an effin great art fart ill tell u that
the fuck
i really like that last one though sash, i think that's my favorite thing you've ever drawn
thanks for the feedback, its really nice to hear
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i think im gonna take a break from drawing girls
I LOVE the colors!!
holy shart that looks so good
i dare you to draw something that isn't infinitely cute
I like the colors.
Awesome work
I agree with what Lenko said about the noses too.
You are very good with them
Keep it up
thanks, i've been trying lately to improve at drawing faces
also i just updated this, hope it looks better
Quote from: shurai think im gonna take a break from drawing girls
Quote from: rtilQuote from: shurai think im gonna take a break from drawing girls
:(
did you make a whole new smiley just to respond to this post
you should draw some angry, ugly niggers with shitty teeth
for variety
fuck you i don't read vanity fair
Quote from: DrRumackQuote from: rtilQuote from: shurai think im gonna take a break from drawing girls
:(
did you make a whole new smiley just to respond to this post
no, but i did add 2 new smileys
Quote from: rtilQuote from: DrRumackQuote from: rtilQuote from: shurai think im gonna take a break from drawing girls
:(
did you make a whole new smiley just to respond to this post
no, but i did add 2 new smileys
Quote from: rtilQuote from: shurai think im gonna take a break from drawing girls
:(
yeah so much for that :I
here's some stuff i've been working on that are still not finished. i thought i'd upload them anyway since i need the feedback, and its been a while
this pic has a looooooong way to go. ignore the dots on the left, thats just my color palette
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i dont know. something im still inking
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i know a lot of people have seen my panty fanart, but in case anyone hasn't, i'll put it here anyway
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i'll upload the fully colored versions and some rough sketches soon-ish
you should make more drawings!
these are really good
Quote from: cipheryou should make more drawings!
these are really good
the guitar girl is great
panty fanart is very pretty, really nice colors
wow that guitar girls changed quite a bit since i saw it before haha it looks fantastic =]
i love your colors :> can't wait to see the finished product
thanks guys :>
I LOVE the colors for guitar girl!
im trying to find things to critique because im jealous but honestly
everything looks fantastic
the colors are great the gesture is great the anatomy is very clever the lineart is goddamn impecable
how much time do you spend on one of these, say, the panty one? just curious. they all look so so effortlessly made!
thanks so much eman :>
i cant really keep track of how much time is spent on a drawing, because i dont work on it every day, and sometimes take very long breaks from it. I was drawing the panty picture while i was still in school, so sometimes i wouldnt get to look at it for days. i think it took me about a month to actually finish it
for that effortlessly clean look
Sasha from head & shoulders
i just realized my post looks like some commercial bull
unfortunately, now that school has started i will barely have any time to draw recreationally anymore, but i might be able to upload my homework assignment drawings, which are all architectural draftings. (im studying set design)
anyway here's some things that probably a few of you have seen. there's some more stuff on my tumblr if anyone cares.
sorry they dont have backgrounds. i just dont care to draw them
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did yo usubmit the bouncer one to dA? cuz i don't remember seeing that one. it's good though. you're getting bettre with color :)
thanks! i'll upload it soon, i just want to tweak it some more