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Title: i made a flash
Post by: Wasim the Cool on July 6, 2010 04:30 PM
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/541417 (http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/541417)
Title: i made a flash
Post by: Terry Thel Ozymandius on July 6, 2010 04:36 PM
My pc's sound not working right now but looking at it, it was ok.
Title: i made a flash
Post by: Wasim the Cool on July 6, 2010 04:40 PM
Quote from: ghostinglostmanMy pc's sound not working right now but looking at it, it was ok.

you think you hot shit motherfucker
Title: i made a flash
Post by: Terry Thel Ozymandius on July 6, 2010 04:43 PM
honest. I'm working on my sound card.
Title: i made a flash
Post by: DrRumack on July 6, 2010 04:45 PM
i thought it was lostingghostman not ghostinglostman
Title: i made a flash
Post by: shura on July 6, 2010 05:30 PM
weh
Title: i made a flash
Post by: Wasim the Cool on July 6, 2010 06:41 PM
im hlad this passed i worked very haerd on this
Title: i made a flash
Post by: emanhattan on July 6, 2010 06:51 PM
it was ok

one of the reviewers is an idiot
Title: i made a flash
Post by: funzop on July 6, 2010 10:31 PM
the video was a waste of my time, dumb, and made no sense you obviously have way too much time on your hands, and if your going to make a video make it worth at least a star and add a story to it, it's just worthless if there's no story line to it.
Title: i made a flash
Post by: Orangebeef on July 7, 2010 12:48 AM
fuck you
Title: i made a flash
Post by: funzop on July 7, 2010 02:01 AM
It has potential, i liked how you made those mobs a different color than your background and main character. what i noticed was that the characters in the angry mob (or whatever they were) actually are a lot better drawn and have more expression (not just facial expressions but also how they pose and such) than the ninja, it feels like you spend less on the main character than you did on the bacjground characters. also ofc there is the lack of story, even if its simple or short a story always makes an animation more interesting.
Title: i made a flash
Post by: Fautzo on July 7, 2010 03:14 AM
While not a great submission, I had to praise this because the animation was good. The weakest part was probably the end where you seemed to go for a more standard spam flash. The artwork is still good, particulary with how the colors seem to point out the papery quality. It would help if you had a lot better title, too. There really is a pretty big environment that had a lot of detail put into it. You are at least far ahead of people like the Kitty Krew Duck Division who make tons of spam flashes all the time.

Title: i made a flash
Post by: Wasim the Cool on July 7, 2010 10:00 AM
Quote from: nonzopIt has potential, i liked how you made those mobs a different color than your background and main character. what i noticed was that the characters in the angry mob (or whatever they were) actually are a lot better drawn and have more expression (not just facial expressions but also how they pose and such) than the ninja, it feels like you spend less on the main character than you did on the bacjground characters. also ofc there is the lack of story, even if its simple or short a story always makes an animation more interesting.

that guys right tho