Hey everybody, I decided to start my new series "The Summer Help" now so I need voices!
Here's the script for the first episode, entitled "Brown Bottle Flu" (http://www.thebackalleys.com/dump/files/1059/8594rK_The%20Summer%20Help-%20Brown%20Bottle%20Flu.txt), you can voice act any line from the script that you please.
Remember, if you want to voice these characters, you have to be available in the future to for subsequent episodes.
The characters left to right,
Derek Manthee:
Often fairly nervous and an awkward conversationalist, Derek is a philosophy major in school which he always gets dumped on by his parents about. He can be very idealistic and is known to get on his high-horse about certain issues. The possibility of being wrong or hypocrisy terrifies him. He's the rec center's only lifeguard and also is too busy getting all introspective to pay enough attention to what's going on around him at the pool.
Jim Woodsworth:
(Probably the same Jim from that unfinished cartoon)
Known to be a frat-boyish douche among his coworkers. He's narcissistic and has a strange infatuation with his car (A beat up, piece-of-crap Chevy Chevette hatchback). When he's not taking advantage of kids' gullibility, claiming that doing chores for him is community service, he's probably indulging in any way possible. Although, he may be a stoner douche, he's still a pretty fun guy and is a foil to Derek as much as Derek is to him.
Retired Sgt. Dirk "Burch" Burchibald:
The short, fiery, teeth-clenching supervisor with a Napoleon complex. Often any conversation with him turns into him barking at his employees as if he were a Drill Sergeant. He has an issue with eye contact, forcing all his employees to maintain it at all times while speaking to him. This can cause some issues as employees often have to resort to standing on their knees or even laying on their stomachs when being addressed by him. There's also a possibility he has OCD, just throwing that in for good measure.
Rebecca Kershwell:
When you look at her, do you think "bitch"? Yeah, she is. She hates working with kids and its pretty evident, as much as Jim likes to take advantage of them, they're basically her slaves. As much as she may be a cold-hard bitch, it's more of an outside persona as she is fairly likable to the people around her. Just don't fuck with her or else you're getting teeth-checked with those ridiculous boots she's wearing.
Lolita Pooshawattaha:
The omega hippie. With the ideals of the Hippie movement instilled in her by her parents, she's a peace-loving, drug loving, neo-hippie. She runs the art department at the rec center and has an odd fascination/obsession with beads. She hasn't worn a pair of shoes or anything resembling them since she was little and most likely has callouses thick enough to walk across hot lava. She's always very chipper and optimistic, basically the anti-Rebecca. For as much shit she may get for being a hippie, she can sling it right back though. She's half-Native American if the last name wasn't a hint.
Norm McNulty:
A pissy, large, metal-head. He has a gigantic crush on Rebecca, who is completely oblivious. He works the office at the rec center and is Burch's lackey, much to his dismay. It's obvious he's been working there too long as he often has fantasies of murdering Burch in pretty horrific ways, for as much shit he's had to deal with.
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Yeah sorry, I don't have a drawing of Norm scanned yet but he's a big fat, socially inept metalhead.
Also looking for a side character, the newspaper Reporter, he doesn't need to be the stereotypical reporter voice either.
Oh and I need several kid voices and thats it.
Yup, also the girls' jawlines aren't as pointy anymore.
i would like to audition!
ok here
Rebecca (twice)
http://www.thebackalleys.com/dump/files/71/63X7k_rebecca%20audition.mp3
Lolita (drug induced sounds and blood line)
http://www.thebackalleys.com/dump/files/71/749p4U_lolita%20audition.mp3
lolita lmao
Ooooh, I'mma upload some audition in a bit. :3
Rebecca:
http://www.thebackalleys.com/dump/files/1297/930W1u_Sapph_Rebecca%20Sampl.mp3
Lolita:
http://www.thebackalleys.com/dump/files/1297/152Lo4_Sapph_Lolita%20Sampl.mp3
If you'd like me to change anything up, lemme know.
Oh yeah, if anybody wants to voice BURCH, he basically talks with his teeth clenched together all the time.
Oh wow, I just realized you provided a script. Welp.
http://hlg.furfag.com/worth%20teh%20w8.mp3 (http://hlg.furfag.com/worth%20teh%20w8.mp3)
You get every voice part ever armon!
i just realized i used 2 madonna songs
Totally gonna give this a go during the day~!
Is anyone going to point out how crappy this script is? XD
Quote from: computerovIs anyone going to point out how crappy this script is? XD
who r u
a bad troll hes gone now
http://www.thebackalleys.com/dump/files/979/749Ck8_jim.mp3
http://www.thebackalleys.com/dump/files/979/493dS1_limey.mp3
Hahahaha
please cast lenko as rebecca
please cast lenko as everybody
goddamn lenko your voice
also goddammit my voice; I like kiddie roles ._. but don't have my studio mic with me so excuse the crappy quality
http://fesoes.net/wp-content/uploads/2010/05/shi_holahooplady.mp3
and from some IRC comments:
http://fesoes.net/wp-content/uploads/2010/05/shi_kiddie.mp3
my voice is excellent..... but i will not help you........
reminds me of family guy
thats a pretty huge script
how long will this toon be, if i may ask
my throat hurts so much i'm never doing that fucking rebecca voice again
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you guys are noobs at being gay.
The script is 10 pages, and it's timing out to end up being 7 or 8 minutes long. Lmao lenko
http://www.thebackalleys.com/dump/files/1053/750bS1_Derek.mp3
http://www.thebackalleys.com/dump/files/1017/801B8g_tehfunny.mp3
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Lmao bug. For some reason when you were reading the shot descriptions, it reminded me of the Professor Brothers.
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Here's a try out for Norm
http://www.thebackalleys.com/dump/files/1498/750v2M_Norm_Antfish_line%201.mp3
Here is my demo reel for Burch...
http://www.mediafire.com/?hmcnntomyea (http://www.mediafire.com/?hmcnntomyea)
Human Flesh Tastes Like Chicken..........RAAAWWWRRRR!!!!
should I put in a demo for burch
nah far too lazy
Give comments on demo reel please.
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its awful
Can you tell me why?
it sounds like a 14 year old trying really hard to sound like a hardened military man
roflmao
Quote from: BluPhoeniX7should I put in a demo for burch
nah far too lazy
thanks bp7 ur a great person
Shitty, shitty Burch. In my defense, I didn't really try very hard.
http://www.thebackalleys.com/dump/files/1521/481Jp_burch.mp3
uurrh
Well the thing is you tried, the first step towards failure.
jk thanks
Late late late late late...
Rebecca Kershwell
http://www.thebackalleys.com/dump/files/1306/6920Ui_Rebecca%20Kershwell_Hnilmik.mp3
Lolita Pooshawattaha (improv monologue)
http://www.thebackalleys.com/dump/files/1306/90j8C_Lolita%20Pooshawattaha_Hnilmik_extra.mp3
:/ May record something else for Lolita later~
More like my fault cuz she has like zero dialog in the episode.
Did you get any auditions for Burch?
Yeah a few but none of them are really hitting what I want, Hans is gonna do a take for it and maybe Tomamoto
Oh, sweet! <3
ill be honest with you daran your script is terrible, all the criticism said about it is true and to actually pursue the creation of this lame cliche bullshit would essentially just be making another tywo which you swore off. its really not any better than tywo, maybe now you're ripping off family guy a little less. i really want to be blunt with you in hopes that you will listen. this is not a good concept. its been done before, theres nothing original about the premise or the characters. the script looks like it was written by legendary frog. theres nothing good about any of this, i suggest you write another script if you want to produce something that is legitimately funny and wont be adored by idiots.
Quote from: MarcKQuote from: BluPhoeniX7should I put in a demo for burch
nah far too lazy
thanks bp7 ur a great person
I've never felt so loved before
Quote from: ¥L¬O¤@Ó¦nĵ¹îill be honest with you daran your script is terrible, all the criticism said about it is true and to actually pursue the creation of this lame cliche bullshit would essentially just be making another tywo which you swore off. its really not any better than tywo, maybe now you're ripping off family guy a little less. i really want to be blunt with you in hopes that you will listen. this is not a good concept. its been done before, theres nothing original about the premise or the characters. the script looks like it was written by legendary frog. theres nothing good about any of this, i suggest you write another script if you want to produce something that is legitimately funny and wont be adored by idiots.
Oh snap
Sorry you didn't like it Squeef , it's still in a fetal stage and I'm still trying to improve it. I started realizing I may have jumped the gun starting the auditions so soon.
on the other hand having a voice you like for a character can help shape it better
reminds me of
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yea me too, like a lot.
trolls
Well the characters are somewhat similar but you can say that about a few shows I think.
I do somewhat agree that the script needs some re-working.
Some jokes can be changed around to be better, and some of your characters don't seem to speak with much emotion or human in their voice.
Have you considered getting some writers in on this?
alot of good shows use archetypes
thats pretty much all the powerpuff girls + dexter's lab were
honestly i just think you need to rework the dialogue to seem more human and less written
Quote from: Demonous_Xodussome of your characters don't seem to speak with much emotion or human in their voice.
I can read voices from text too and burch sounds GAY
I took what MarcK noted, and ran with it.
http://www.thebackalleys.com/dump/files/561/38Bc6_DevenMack_Burch.mp3
aaaah dmac where did you come from
roflmao, i love your burch
D-Mac is awesome! :] He single-handedly voiced BOTH characters in my Chibi Eyes cartoon, and I still love it. ^_^
http://tinyurl.com/22lz3mw (http://tinyurl.com/22lz3mw)
Quote from: CVGD-Mac is awesome! :] He single-handedly voiced BOTH characters in my Chibi Eyes cartoon, and I still love it. ^_^
http://tinyurl.com/22lz3mw (http://tinyurl.com/22lz3mw)
lmao, i remember watching that
voice actors hunt in packs
Lmao great job D
Quote from: rollinvoice actors hunt in packs
Yep.
http://www.thebackalleys.com/dump/files/10...0REVISE%201.pdf (http://www.thebackalleys.com/dump/files/1059/683Ud9_THE%20SUMMER%20HELP-Brown%20Bottle%20Flu%20REVISE%201.pdf)
Here's one out of what could be many many revisions more on the script. This one, I dicked around with a bunch of the dialogue and tried to improve it.
I honestly think D-Mac's got me beat, but I'm finishing the rest of everything before noon tomorrow
cool cool cool cool cool COOL
one thing that sort of bothers me is that Lolita's character seems to be very one dimensional, it's like "i do drugs, that defines me", that's the main thing that bothered me, i could go over the script piece by piece and say what i liked and disliked if you want, but it's not like I'm an expert or anything.
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I kind of think it's a bit early to be typecasting characters this early, there's only one episode written so far and she was only a supporting character in it. Just sayin
Are you still missing any parts/characters/etc?
Yeah I'm still not 100% on Derek, Jim and Burch, I've gotten a few tracks for each one of them but I don't feel ready to make a choice on all of them yet.
Hey everybody I'm finally getting proactive about this thing so here's what I've decided so far.
Sapphire - Rebecca
Hnilmik - Lolita
I'm still waiting on a few male parts and asked a few to try different roles but there ya have it for the female characters. Dilly I want you to voice the little kids :>
Alright have a nice day and a pleasant tomorrow
ok!
::hi5's Dilly and Sapphy~::
whoop-whoop
castring calf for the fluffler bluff
I've been trying at this for weeks now, and this experience has taught me a lotta things
One of which, is that this headset is not meant for yelling
http://www.thebackalleys.com/dump/files/525/614Z9x_Ix%20Burch.mp3
I'm not satisfied with it but I've taken long enough and this is like the 1,000th take
I vote for D-Mac
Don't be so hard on yourself, sounds great Thanks for goin through so much shit to do it.
Also, I totally forgot, I made a revision like a month ago and never put it up here. Here it is (http://www.thebackalleys.com/dump/files/1059/683Ud9_THE%20SUMMER%20HELP-Brown%20Bottle%20Flu%20REVISE%201.pdf)