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Title: Computer grapics class
Post by: slantedskarekrow on April 21, 2010 09:56 PM
I've been doing some intresting projects in my photoshop class and was wondering what i might do to improve on my work, all constructive critisism is apreiciated.

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this was my first photoshop project, it was to make a movie poster for a movie among a list of old movies, and try to make it look more modern.

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this was a small project were we had to use the statue of liberty to show america in distress, the teacher is having me put it in an art show.

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this is a project where we had to dramaticly change the size of an object, i chose to make the hand vary large, to sort of represent the hand of god or some sort of creating force.

again, any constructive feedback is much apreciated.
Title: Computer grapics class
Post by: The Frito Bandito on April 21, 2010 10:23 PM
The ring on that hand reminds me of the hand from goatse.
Title: Computer grapics class
Post by: rtil on April 21, 2010 10:47 PM
here's a tip: don't use papyrus ever again do you fucking understand me?
Title: Computer grapics class
Post by: SHADOWFOX2 on April 21, 2010 10:47 PM
Who's God married to?
Oh, and I love how you did the tornado
Also...Murphy
Title: Computer grapics class
Post by: Shida on April 21, 2010 11:00 PM
Quote from: rtilhere's a tip: don't use papyrus ever again do you fucking understand me?
Also for the same picture, I personally wouldn't have used another image for the section containing the title - it throws off where the eye should be looking (which is at the monster, I'm assuming)

I do like the tornado, but the earth in the last one looks like a shiny marble, haha (although a marble that has an earth print on it would be neat)
Title: Computer grapics class
Post by: ansel on April 21, 2010 11:02 PM
using papyrus should be an auto-flunk for any graphics assignment
Title: Computer grapics class
Post by: emanhattan on April 21, 2010 11:23 PM
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Title: Computer grapics class
Post by: slantedskarekrow on April 22, 2010 06:53 AM
Quote from: rtilhere's a tip: don't use papyrus ever again do you fucking understand me?
I had it as something else but my professor didn't like it, when scrolling through the fonts this is the one she stopped me on, although duely noted thanks.

Quote from: SHADOWFOX2Who's God married to?
Oh, and I love how you did the tornado
Also...Murphy
perhaps i should take the ring off, it seems to be an over all distraction

Quote from: Shida
Quote from: rtilhere's a tip: don't use papyrus ever again do you fucking understand me?
Also for the same picture, I personally wouldn't have used another image for the section containing the title - it throws off where the eye should be looking (which is at the monster, I'm assuming)

I do like the tornado, but the earth in the last one looks like a shiny marble, haha (although a marble that has an earth print on it would be neat)
the earth is an overlay on top of a hand holding a marble in order to make it look like that, i was gonna do it as the earth the size of a marble, but ended up making it a gigantic hand instead.