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Title: Stupid
Post by: raven on June 5, 2009 08:09 AM
Here's my past drawing/painting work, it all sucks, don't lie, but I'm looking to improve and learn.. Critiques would be nice. Don't be too harsh though pleeeasse.

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Title: Stupid
Post by: salutations on June 5, 2009 08:41 AM
oh wow i haven't seen some of these !! i really like the 4th one
Title: Stupid
Post by: Fuzz on June 5, 2009 02:54 PM
Those are pretty nice. What's the website the teacher made up? I'm a film maker with no money.

I really like the last one. The apple was very well done.
Title: Stupid
Post by: shura on June 5, 2009 05:28 PM
i fucking love the first one. the colors and shadows look really cool.
Title: Stupid
Post by: Philip K Dick on June 5, 2009 06:04 PM
yeah the first one is bodacious
Title: Stupid
Post by: rtil on June 6, 2009 02:52 AM
i like the etching of the guy with the glasses
Title: Stupid
Post by: f0d on June 6, 2009 04:33 AM
you're great with color and shading... and hands. some of it looks a little flat though so you might wanna work on depth, but that could also be your "look" like cezanne or something. the still life is interesting because the apple looks pristine, perfectly shaded, while a lot of the other stuff detracts from that realism... most awkward looking is the pen and camcorder, and the reflection of the glasses and apple