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Title: Girlchan in Paradise Ep1
Post by: Hammi on February 21, 2009 10:13 PM
Wasim just linked me this new flash by ego, which came out today:

http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/484273 (http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/484273)

I actually thought it was funny the way its mocking the concept of anime, surprisingly. Only for a short while. The start maybe, then it got lame.
Title: Girlchan in Paradise Ep1
Post by: zomfgbie on February 21, 2009 10:26 PM
see the animation in a few scenes of the intro was great. if that was consistent it wouldve been fantastic, but then it seemed to get lazy

ok i dont know much of animes and the way ego was trying to parody their style but the lip syncing was half assed and there were just random cuts to faces. AGAIN i dont watch animes so dont quote me on that if it was intended

as for the story i chuckled a few times when they were making fun of stupidly long japanese words

i thought it was pretty good it just started annoying the crap outta me by the time they got to the old guy
Title: Girlchan in Paradise Ep1
Post by: jjjjjjjjjj on February 21, 2009 10:35 PM
didnt laugh im sorry
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Title: Girlchan in Paradise Ep1
Post by: Alta Don on February 21, 2009 10:47 PM
It was okay but it didn't make me laugh. Only giggle.  
Title: Girlchan in Paradise Ep1
Post by: psi43 on February 21, 2009 10:54 PM
wow
now I agree with everyone else I didn't laugh a single time, I didn't even smile. But it was still fucking hilarious in my opinion.
Title: Girlchan in Paradise Ep1
Post by: Kirbopher on February 21, 2009 10:54 PM
I think the point specifically was that certain "mistakes" in the animation was kept as a throwback to how rushed the production of an anime episode can be sometimes. The best stuff like this comes from people who actually have an appreciate for the stuff they're spoofing, and it shows. Loved it, can't wait for more.
Title: Girlchan in Paradise Ep1
Post by: creamcorn on February 21, 2009 10:58 PM
hey his movie didnt even need to load and it was 5.7mb and it didnt lag after playing!
normally when i skip loading and the swf is that big it lags a bit but this one didnt
how does he do that?
Title: Girlchan in Paradise Ep1
Post by: unclephil on February 21, 2009 11:07 PM
i thought it was pretty cool.\
Title: Girlchan in Paradise Ep1
Post by: rtil on February 21, 2009 11:10 PM
this would've been funny 7 years ago
Title: Girlchan in Paradise Ep1
Post by: Hammi on February 21, 2009 11:11 PM
Well i wasnt laughing either, im not saying it was straight out hilarious. But the way he imitated typical anime and the silly intro got to me. Made me smirk, believe it or not. I couldnt further care less about the jokes.
Title: Girlchan in Paradise Ep1
Post by: Alta Don on February 21, 2009 11:14 PM
Quote from: rtilthis would've been funny 7 years ago

This was actually funny to people 7 years ago.
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/68969 (http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/68969)  
Title: Girlchan in Paradise Ep1
Post by: rtil on February 21, 2009 11:19 PM
well that's kind of my point

i guess i've just seen too many anime parodies. "oh yes that cliche", "yeah they do that a lot".. i get it.
Title: Girlchan in Paradise Ep1
Post by: Gerkinman on February 21, 2009 11:22 PM
I didnt mind it, it wasnt like amazing, but i had a giggle here and there, i havent watched anime in years so i dont know what they are like these days, but thats how i remember em being.
Title: Girlchan in Paradise Ep1
Post by: psi43 on February 21, 2009 11:35 PM
had a score of 3.98 I think it's the first time one of his movies passed with a score below 4.
Title: Girlchan in Paradise Ep1
Post by: Gerkinman on February 21, 2009 11:37 PM
Quotehad a score of 3.98 I think it's the first time one of his movies passed with a score below 4.

Thats what happens when you don't have a familiar brand to carry you.
Title: Girlchan in Paradise Ep1
Post by: Alta Don on February 21, 2009 11:37 PM
Quote from: Beliefhad a score of 3.98 I think it's the first time one of his movies passed with a score below 4.

http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/477989 (http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/477989)
It's sad. I actually faved that.
Title: Girlchan in Paradise Ep1
Post by: shura on February 22, 2009 12:07 AM
i think it would have been funnier if it weren't so long. i liked the beginning, but it got old after the first 2 minutes :/
Title: Girlchan in Paradise Ep1
Post by: Michelle on February 22, 2009 01:20 AM
none of his actual jokes were ha-ha to me except when the two guys are running, but the animation itself is pretty funny
i thought the character designs were funny too
Title: Girlchan in Paradise Ep1
Post by: Flash on February 22, 2009 02:26 AM
some of the lines have good timing and some are kinda funny
most of them aren't and the voice acting is pretty bad

I didn't like it but it's definitely better than his last few submissions
Title: Girlchan in Paradise Ep1
Post by: GadZooks1357 on February 22, 2009 02:58 AM
I saw the opening and thought, "Holy shit, is ego actually going to put effort into the art?"

Then it started and it turned out to be his typical style... which makes no sense since he reused the same graphics several times throughout the entire run of the Flash. Why not take a few moments to clean up the art since shortcuts are already being taken?
Title: Girlchan in Paradise Ep1
Post by: f0d on February 22, 2009 03:30 AM
Quote from: KirbopherThe best stuff like this comes from people who actually have an appreciate for the stuff they're spoofing, and it shows. Loved it, can't wait for more.

i couldnt disagree with you more

it always becomes worse when it gets more bogged down with inside jokes

"have an appreciate for" lmfao
Title: Girlchan in Paradise Ep1
Post by: DrRumack on February 22, 2009 04:33 AM
Quote from: J_Seeddidnt laugh im sorry
Title: Girlchan in Paradise Ep1
Post by: CoolDrMoney on February 22, 2009 07:44 AM
Well it interested me cause its the first time I saw soethin by him that wasnt "awesome"

But maybe its just his kinda comedy brew I dont like.
Title: Girlchan in Paradise Ep1
Post by: Cornmander on February 22, 2009 04:03 PM
You guys are destroying my sense of humor!

You're making me feel bad for laughing at it.
Title: Girlchan in Paradise Ep1
Post by: YungJazz on February 22, 2009 05:16 PM
I liked it, I agree it was worth a smile but not a forced laugh. I think it was pretty much making fun of shit like what I make.

I would've honestly voted it higher if he JUST submitted the opening animation with the theme song, that was the highlight of the whole thing.
Title: Girlchan in Paradise Ep1
Post by: unclephil on February 22, 2009 05:44 PM
HAHAHAHAHA.

"surprisingly bad, unfortunately"
by: b-29er
date: 12 hours ago

this wasn't a good idea for a flash. you've taken a video that either doesnt exhist or exhists in some random nerd's copied video closet and made a parody of it. the animation was ok, but there was no storyline, or no egoraptor-esque comedy. top that, the voice sounded like some extremely ill or high colege student. then, you made it so long that any comedy aspect or value in watching was lost. who the heck are these people, and why, why are their ~7 guys randomely popping up in full body paint?!?

you said it best yourself-

"Deep in the cockles of some lonely thrift store lies a classic gem so horrible only the few great collectors have ever laid eyes on it."

here's where you could improove

1. parody something more main-stream. i mean this is too rare of a movie to parody. i havent seen it-ever. it would have been better if you either did something completely original with your own charachters, scenes, and influences.

2. the voice syncing was HORRIBLE!!! you're a flash ARTIST!!! not AverageNewgrounder or some spam artist. you should be doing this well.

3. the main charachters should not look like they came out of a chinese "karaoke" club. i mean, honestly, this is a new low when a charachter looks like a hooker. there, i said it, hooker.

4. kill the redundancies. i could only STAND to watch this for 3 minutes, and i would not be surprised if half or the text contained an abnormally idiotic name for a person or mountain like shinkenbatsuhatsu...WHY AM I GETTING SO FAR OFF TOPIC! (sigh). also the stupid references to brothers or sons or whatever. not funny.

5. everything was random. so completely random. a storyline would be nice

6. the voice acting was horrible. some exerpts may help
"uuh"
"uauuh"
"uuuauah"
it sounded like you took one take for some reason on voice acting. BIG no-no when the acting kinda sucks i mean, i would have given you at least a 6 if there was some crappy piano music and pop-up subtitles like some old-time silent movie, but the audio sucked.

i honestly dont know why this is being rated so high, maybe people see the name and say "egoraptor=10 and 5 review and score". but really, this needs to be fixed.

12 hours ago
Author's Response:

Wow
Title: Girlchan in Paradise Ep1
Post by: Alta Don on February 22, 2009 05:46 PM
lmao





Wow
Title: Girlchan in Paradise Ep1
Post by: DrRumack on February 22, 2009 05:55 PM
Quote from: Mr. McCraigyou're a flash ARTIST!!! not AverageNewgrounder or some spam artist. you should be doing this well.

aheheheh
Title: Girlchan in Paradise Ep1
Post by: funzop on February 22, 2009 06:42 PM
b29er has been sending angry pms to that account for a while
Title: Girlchan in Paradise Ep1
Post by: Daveb0t on February 22, 2009 07:19 PM
I'm not going to watch it

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b-29er is a wonderful person btw, makes me miss topdog2007
Title: Girlchan in Paradise Ep1
Post by: f0d on February 22, 2009 07:28 PM
Quote from: CoolDrMoneyWell it interested me cause its the first time I saw soethin by him that wasnt "awesome"
ill give him credit there

Quote from: CoolDrMoneyBut maybe its just his kinda comedy brew I dont like.
yeah i know, his style of writing and editing.... it just makes me cringe. ill admit the first two minutes of this were ok, but were not satirical enough to be laugh out loud. then it went back to ego's old boring spiel

also cornmander we arent destroying your sense of humor, we're refining it!
Title: Girlchan in Paradise Ep1
Post by: Cornmander on February 22, 2009 08:19 PM
Quote from: f0dalso cornmander we arent destroying your sense of humor, we're refining it!


What if I don't want a refined sense of humor!

I want to be able to laugh at anything.
Title: Girlchan in Paradise Ep1
Post by: rtil on February 22, 2009 08:44 PM
averagenewgrounder gettin rowdy !
Title: Girlchan in Paradise Ep1
Post by: f0d on February 22, 2009 08:46 PM
too bad. the same shit over and over gets old, its bound to happen no matter what you do

there was a time when i could laugh at anything but life experience and age will eventually change that. you'll become a cynical bastard when you're our age whether you like it or not











wait a minute you're actually 15 right please tell me you're not 11, it would be kian all over again
Title: Girlchan in Paradise Ep1
Post by: Cornmander on February 22, 2009 10:15 PM
Quote from: f0dtoo bad. the same shit over and over gets old, its bound to happen no matter what you do

there was a time when i could laugh at anything but life experience and age will eventually change that. you'll become a cynical bastard when you're our age whether you like it or not











wait a minute you're actually 15 right please tell me you're not 11, it would be kian all over again

No I'm not 15. I'm 14.

Also,

"When you're our age..." How old are you?
Title: Girlchan in Paradise Ep1
Post by: Daveb0t on February 22, 2009 10:18 PM
E-age

we are dead inside
Title: Girlchan in Paradise Ep1
Post by: f0d on February 22, 2009 10:30 PM
Quote from: CornmanderNo I'm not 15. I'm 14.

Also,

"When you're our age..." How old are you?
20
Title: Girlchan in Paradise Ep1
Post by: lenko on February 22, 2009 11:57 PM
utah loves those big muscly men doesnt he

in fact does he ever draw anything else?

anyways i watched it and laughed but it REALLLLLY dragged on for the last few minutes. i think ego should have aped more things other than dialogue and plot points, cos the joke kinda got old after a while.
Title: Girlchan in Paradise Ep1
Post by: Chippychan on February 25, 2009 04:14 AM
I'm guessing I'm the only one who skipped the intro cause it was so horrible to listen to. I agree the first 2 minutes were good then it got too painful to watch, he should've cut the running time down to 2 minutes and pack all decent jokes into that time frame. Anyways, can anybody tell me what was so good about the opening?
Title: Girlchan in Paradise Ep1
Post by: zomfgbie on February 25, 2009 04:35 PM
Quote from: ChippyI'm guessing I'm the only one who skipped the intro cause it was so horrible to listen to. I agree the first 2 minutes were good then it got too painful to watch, he should've cut the running time down to 2 minutes and pack all decent jokes into that time frame. Anyways, can anybody tell me what was so good about the opening?

animation was solid
Title: Girlchan in Paradise Ep1
Post by: rtil on February 25, 2009 08:15 PM
if that animation was solid i don't ever wanna inbetween anything again
Title: Girlchan in Paradise Ep1
Post by: zomfgbie on February 25, 2009 08:32 PM
solid by general newgrouns standards

aka youd look at it and go hey that wasnt half bad
Title: Girlchan in Paradise Ep1
Post by: rtil on February 25, 2009 08:34 PM
yeah it was pretty good [size=]for the internet[/size] i guess
Title: Girlchan in Paradise Ep1
Post by: psi43 on February 25, 2009 09:36 PM
well it was made for the internet so I guess it was pretty good

or something
Title: Girlchan in Paradise Ep1
Post by: Daveb0t on February 25, 2009 09:41 PM
I'm still not going to watch it
Title: Girlchan in Paradise Ep1
Post by: f0d on February 25, 2009 11:00 PM
Quote from: HarryTheHeadI'm still not going to watch it
dont, no need
Title: Girlchan in Paradise Ep1
Post by: Lanier on February 26, 2009 05:36 AM

I'd still rather be watching something well-done. Even if its supposed to be satirical.
Title: Girlchan in Paradise Ep1
Post by: ZekeySpaceyLizard on February 27, 2009 02:06 AM
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Title: Girlchan in Paradise Ep1
Post by: anigen on February 27, 2009 03:57 AM
The character composition was awful. The jokes were like being inside a paper bag.

The animation, however, was almost as solid as J_Solidseed when hes playing brawl as Solid Snake. And that's pretty solid.