It's just a preview, the movements are kinda rough but I'm open to all advice for the rest of the flick. I implemented some new shit I've never used
it looked stiff and fast throughout the whole thing
yeah i'd still work on it
Is this still being drawn with a mouse or with the tablet?
Work on the motion a bit more, I'm liking the style tho
i know its rough but i feel like theres not enough movement and the imagery doesnt match the soundtrack
i couldnt make out what ate the guy at the first part so the rest of it made no real sense whatsoever
show some horrible shit when the beep comes on not just quick little blood splatters. i would say darken the color of the blood too, its not even clear that its blood the way it is
drop the shot of the feet altogether
nice anatomy and such just needs a few more drawings
the most well animated part was the very first thing. The movements need work need to be more fluid
But thats what practice is all about
i like the line colours and the animation is shapring up quite well. just add more and more detail and it'll be great, and very 'rich'
drop the dick joke, thats my only advice other than keep at it
get some more voice actors
or perhaps just a new narrator
halo font
The waist is crazy tiny in the menu thing.
New technology...
Quote from: Zekeyhalo font
yeah pretty much the worst font you could possibly choose
the narrator was really bad sorry but they made the whole cartoon's point just seem really gay
also the movements are pretty stiff
Thanks for all the advice, I doubt I'm going to look back on this first 30 seconds of what I want to make 10 minutes, but I'll try to make the movements bettuh.