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Title: Sumthin' I worked hard on
Post by: YungJazz on January 19, 2009 08:06 AM
Enjoy. My hand hurts.
(https://thebackalleys.com/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Ffc96.deviantart.com%2Ffs40%2Ff%2F2009%2F019%2Fe%2F1%2FSpiral__s_Crack_by_Yungjazz.jpg&hash=d5cd8f798c66874524db49b8eccc1193e0f0a5dd)
Title: Sumthin' I worked hard on
Post by: stevenr4 on January 19, 2009 09:31 AM
That is pretty awesome!
Title: Sumthin' I worked hard on
Post by: f0d on January 19, 2009 09:42 AM
nice job, my only complaint is her left arm is very rigid and it looks weird depth and shading wise, like a paper cutout almost

you might be able to make it look less flat by shading the legs a little more
Title: Sumthin' I worked hard on
Post by: rtil on January 19, 2009 10:23 AM
it's really flat

might look better sized down actually
Title: Sumthin' I worked hard on
Post by: mishkamash on January 19, 2009 02:10 PM
they pretty much said it
other than that, i really like it. the coloring is nice
Title: Sumthin' I worked hard on
Post by: psi43 on January 19, 2009 04:33 PM
small finger on her right hand looks weird imo

love the glossy shading on the earrings etc though!
Title: Sumthin' I worked hard on
Post by: Fuzz on January 19, 2009 08:01 PM
It took me a while to figure out how her body was twisted. I believe it was the shading's fault.
Title: Sumthin' I worked hard on
Post by: YungJazz on January 19, 2009 08:46 PM
thanks for the advice, it's my first time using this style so i'll work on it. in future pics anyway, i'm done with this one.
Title: Sumthin' I worked hard on
Post by: Michelle on January 19, 2009 09:22 PM
i like how you actually wrote something on the books
still has confusing proportions but i think it's getting better, my complaint is just her backline...or at least i think that's supposed to be her backline. might be a wrinkle in clothing idk

i lyk dis style
Title: Sumthin' I worked hard on
Post by: Daveb0t on January 19, 2009 10:22 PM
I think its got a nice and light color scheme which is soothing compared to what I usually see
Title: Sumthin' I worked hard on
Post by: MRat on January 22, 2009 11:25 AM
I find the pose really awkward and as such really detracts from the quality of the composition as a whole. I really fucking love those colours though. Use them always, and you may be my friend.
Title: Sumthin' I worked hard on
Post by: SnawsBall on January 23, 2009 04:28 AM
edit, nvm i alredy talked about my sht w/e  of sumtin akakakka nice colors