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Title: Christmas scene
Post by: stevenr4 on January 14, 2009 03:28 AM

Here, i wanted to join the christmas contest,
but i am sure that i am a little late for that =(

Please tell me what you think!
and tell me how i can IMPROVE the pictures!

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1 - Daytime,
2 - Night time

Title: Christmas scene
Post by: Daveb0t on January 14, 2009 03:38 AM

The head was never huuuuuuuuman
The head is finally dead

Title: Christmas scene
Post by: stevenr4 on January 14, 2009 03:47 AM

Quote from: DavebutThe head was never huuuuuuuuman
The head is finally dead

???????????

Title: Christmas scene
Post by: ZekeySpaceyLizard on January 14, 2009 05:10 AM

i actually like the simplicity of it

your night scene looks weird though

like you just darkened the colors

try changing the lighting on everything (except whatever lightsource is behind the tree) to a more blue or purple color

Title: Christmas scene
Post by: shura on January 14, 2009 05:14 AM

not bad, but is there any way you could add more texture to the tree?

Title: Christmas scene
Post by: stevenr4 on January 14, 2009 05:53 AM

Here is my other attempt at the night scene!

I think i looks crappier =(

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Title: Christmas scene
Post by: rtil on January 14, 2009 06:27 AM

the wall is a little distracting, can you soften the texture on that?

Title: Christmas scene
Post by: shitturtle on January 14, 2009 07:01 AM

you should have softer light for the day one.

Title: Christmas scene
Post by: f0d on January 14, 2009 07:03 AM

i dont like the way the window sticks out of the wall

Title: Christmas scene
Post by: rtil on January 14, 2009 07:42 AM

i thought that was a present stuck to the wall

Title: Christmas scene
Post by: shitturtle on January 14, 2009 07:42 AM

Quote from: f0di dont like the way the window sticks out of the wall

lmao, i thought that was a present stuck to the wall.
don't ask why i didn't question it.
edit: :\

Title: Christmas scene
Post by: shura on January 14, 2009 05:46 PM

Quote from: rtili thought that was a present stuck to the wall

lmao so did i. i was so fucking confused, but i didn't want to say anything

Title: Christmas scene
Post by: psi43 on January 14, 2009 06:56 PM

why's there a present on the wall

also the second one looks better than the first one but that's a really jumpy wall. The texture of the tree doesn't look right either.

Title: Christmas scene
Post by: redmongoose on January 14, 2009 07:24 PM

I like the first night one

Title: Christmas scene
Post by: stevenr4 on January 15, 2009 05:10 AM

Quote from: Sashura
Quote from: rtili thought that was a present stuck to the wall

lmao so did i. i was so fucking confused, but i didn't want to say anything

yeah....

The walls looked blank, so i DID put a present on the wall, i did not realize that i put the collor scheme the same as most poor windows,
I will change that -.-

Title: Christmas scene
Post by: stevenr4 on January 15, 2009 05:26 AM

I am ADD, so i have trouble staying with one project,
I think i am going leave this one now,
i am happy enough with these results.

Please tell me how i can improve on future projects!

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Title: Christmas scene
Post by: mishkamash on January 15, 2009 12:44 PM

uugh that "window" is bugging the hell out of me

Title: Christmas scene
Post by: shura on January 15, 2009 05:08 PM

i love what you did with the star. it looks a lot better

Title: Christmas scene
Post by: rtil on January 15, 2009 07:01 PM

Quote from: stevenr4The walls looked blank, so i DID put a present on the wall

hahaha awesome

love the star, you should move on now though, christmas is over !

Title: Christmas scene
Post by: DrRumack on January 15, 2009 10:57 PM

i bet its hd plasma wide screen shit

thebackalleys

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