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Title: cheesecake and ecchi
Post by: Zwickel on January 7, 2009 11:55 AM
Oh gawd, made these like 2 days ago, I should make like full drawings with backgrounds and all that cool stuff
I just make sketches.........this time i kinda colored them , used markers, colerase and pencils, some basic thing..heh yeah i suck at colors

if you like, ill be uploading more stuff to my deviantart so chex it out,  zwickel.deviantart it is


now for the drawlings:

[attachment=2377:SRAZERO.jpg]


[attachment=2378:heartf.jpg]



yes
Title: cheesecake and ecchi
Post by: Hammi on January 7, 2009 01:08 PM
The breasts on the second pic are abnormally big. Like something is holding them up really tight. Her expression says it all too lmao. Very nice body anatomy though.

The last pic, her buns are sticking out too far. Unless she got a pointy bubble butt.

Other than that, these are pretty nice. I like the color work and the shading. Cool.
Title: cheesecake and ecchi
Post by: salutations on January 7, 2009 01:24 PM
the third one is cute

the second one uhh basically the same thing hammi said the boobs are weird cause its from a downward angle and they look like they're about to hop out of the picture at you. I think the long arms are cool though.
Title: cheesecake and ecchi
Post by: Philip K Dick on January 7, 2009 03:14 PM
if the girl in the first drawing had the breasts of the girl in the second drawing i MIGHT have considered complimenting you
Title: cheesecake and ecchi
Post by: rtil on January 7, 2009 04:16 PM
you have a stronger grasp of anatomy than the last time i saw some of these. good improvements
Title: cheesecake and ecchi
Post by: lenko on January 7, 2009 04:38 PM
Not to keen on the first, i think its the angular boobs. boobs are soft n squishy and seeing pointy ones kinda takes away from the whole point of cartooning da boobs

Second one is great I like the colour! But her tits make it look like she's jumping from somewhere.  A bit anti-grav. I think you were going for a different angle with this one but the boobs still seem like they're floaty

I love the last one, reminds me of Chris Sanders (he did the designs for lilo and stitch but does this 'cheesecakey' stuff that you have in this thread in his free time)
Title: cheesecake and ecchi
Post by: Zwickel on January 8, 2009 01:00 AM
Thanks guys! Yeah the third one was inspired by Chris Sanders, I'm happy you point it out

Well, I'll keep practicing,and the pointy boobs I don't know, I think I saw too much stuff from Ashley Wood.
Title: cheesecake and ecchi
Post by: Zwickel on January 19, 2009 08:53 PM
Just done with this, took me a while .   Ill try to make more sculptures.

[attachment=2456:Picture_395.jpg]

I actually like Lenko's art a lot, I'm thinking on making one of his chars, ships or those sharks as a fanart or something.
Title: cheesecake and ecchi
Post by: lenko on January 19, 2009 09:21 PM
Quote from: ZwickelStudiosJust done with this, took me a while .   Ill try to make more sculptures.


I actually like Lenko's art a lot, I'm thinking on making one of his chars, ships or those sharks as a fanart or something.

That unicorn is badass

My stuff is pretty '2D' looking so if you're seriously up for making a sculpture I'll make you a reference sheet or something! Cos that would be fukken badass  

I'd love to see a sculpture of something WPS made lmao
Title: cheesecake and ecchi
Post by: Michelle on January 19, 2009 09:24 PM
i like the first girl the best

but fuck you think you can crop down that poor unicorn horn a bit. he can't even turn his head now : (
Title: cheesecake and ecchi
Post by: mishkamash on January 19, 2009 09:44 PM
that unicorn would be pretty neat for halloween
Title: cheesecake and ecchi
Post by: emanhattan on January 19, 2009 10:18 PM
nice anatomy
Title: cheesecake and ecchi
Post by: Zwickel on January 20, 2009 05:37 AM
Thanks!

Well, when I move to canada I can start this, will be on mid february...as I have my finger stitched it's too hard to me to sculpt, but even though, think of a sketch or drawing, or make one you'd like as a sculpture.. a model sheet would make my job easier lenko
Title: cheesecake and ecchi
Post by: Daveb0t on January 20, 2009 05:39 AM
Amfg. U r aell stupid shijts. do u think is funy???? i mean 4real. u say its 4 ''teh_lewls"' but ur like soooo stupid.gay sh&ts???ye u r. lik u hev n0O rfiends in RL. bcaus u suck dic onlin........spamin dont mak u''teh ownage'' or ''a co0l bro'' it makes u a fuckn sh*t azzhol tht would get beat up iRL if u said tht sh*t t2 yface and lik u think ur cool????no.t........wtf so gay
Title: cheesecake and ecchi
Post by: shura on January 20, 2009 05:47 AM
Quote from: DavebutAmfg. U r aell stupid shijts. do u think is funy???? i mean 4real. u say its 4 ''teh_lewls"' but ur like soooo stupid.gay sh&ts???ye u r. lik u hev n0O rfiends in RL. bcaus u suck dic onlin........spamin dont mak u''teh ownage'' or ''a co0l bro'' it makes u a fuckn sh*t azzhol tht would get beat up iRL if u said tht sh*t t2 yface and lik u think ur cool????no.t........wtf so gay

lmao, davebut you're such a retard. it amuses me


sweet unicorn btw!! i fucking love it. i think the horn is a bit long tho
Title: cheesecake and ecchi
Post by: Zwickel on January 20, 2009 06:23 AM
its penis is bigger, but the horn is quite big itself
Title: cheesecake and ecchi
Post by: Zwickel on January 20, 2009 07:02 AM
cmon, one more pic of my zombie hand!
Title: cheesecake and ecchi
Post by: Zwickel on January 20, 2009 10:19 AM
Im such a photoshop noob, followed a tutorial and made this, but it's actually helping me to get several stuff that PS has, its a nice tool.
[attachment=2462:fireballzwick.jpg]
Title: cheesecake and ecchi
Post by: ZekeySpaceyLizard on January 20, 2009 12:21 PM
i came into this thread expecting Unicron


and all I get is cheesecake and ecchi


WHAT


IS


UP


WITH



THAT?
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Title: cheesecake and ecchi
Post by: redmongoose on January 21, 2009 12:32 AM
I thought in the second pic that the chick was supposed to be lying down in which case the boobs would look like that at least in the case that she were getting fucked with enough force to make them appear that way I mean I dont kno really I'm only recalling what I've seen up close in the past
Title: cheesecake and ecchi
Post by: Zwickel on January 21, 2009 01:57 AM
Quote from: REDMONGOOSEI'm only recalling what I've seen up close in the past

haha  

dont lie to the internet
Title: cheesecake and ecchi
Post by: Hammi on January 21, 2009 02:05 AM
Cheesecake?

What?

I am confused now.

Cool unicorn sculpture though, and the fire pic looks awesome. What did you use for the stitches? Unless you really did hurt yourself.
Title: cheesecake and ecchi
Post by: redmongoose on January 21, 2009 02:48 AM
Quote from: ZwickelStudios
Quote from: REDMONGOOSEI'm only recalling what I've seen up close in the past

haha  

dont lie to the internet

speak for yourself bluesky

I mean skyfall whoops
Title: cheesecake and ecchi
Post by: Zwickel on January 21, 2009 07:21 AM
Oh, the stitches are real, I got too drunk and hit a window by accident... so fucking stupid, now it's really hard for me to draw-
Redmongoose ur musics cool.

skyfall and auracore
Title: cheesecake and ecchi
Post by: jjjjjjjjjj on January 21, 2009 11:05 PM
how did you hit it by accident?
Title: cheesecake and ecchi
Post by: Daveb0t on January 21, 2009 11:10 PM
I once accidentally sat on my own balls
Title: cheesecake and ecchi
Post by: LordZeebmork on January 21, 2009 11:37 PM
make a sculpture of goatse
Title: cheesecake and ecchi
Post by: SnawsBall on January 22, 2009 12:10 AM
Quote from: LordZeebmorkmake a sculpture of goatse
Title: cheesecake and ecchi
Post by: Zwickel on January 22, 2009 05:57 AM
I punched the window, I was too drunk lol
Title: cheesecake and ecchi
Post by: MRat on January 22, 2009 11:23 AM
too drunk lol



I really love the second drawing. She looks surprised by her tits, which makes it work I think.
Title: cheesecake and ecchi
Post by: Zwickel on January 24, 2009 08:43 AM
I think it takes a lifetime to make something that is photomanipulation and glowing in PS look more organic than plasticy. Just trying some shit I've seen on tutorials. I regected photoshop as it was too hard for me im a lazy shit, but some tutorials, and a bit of imagination and thinking on the appproach on stuff using the tools kinda makes it. Here I managed to expand the line of motion, even if the hand and the light below breaks that a bit. This is like my 3rd shot at PS, i'm quite happy with it but still looks as crappy amateur "I did this in 10 mins with a youtube tutorial" stuff, nut nah, took me like an hour 10 mins which is too much, but we all gotta start from somewhere and keep progressing. Made this after seeing MaMIND's flash glowy thing.[attachment=2468:eMOTIONbyZwickel.jpg]
Title: cheesecake and ecchi
Post by: rtil on January 24, 2009 06:49 PM
i wouldn't say it takes a lifetime, more like a few years mastering a couple of lesser-known tricks
Title: cheesecake and ecchi
Post by: Zwickel on January 25, 2009 02:07 AM
Quote from: rtili wouldn't say it takes a lifetime, more like a few years mastering a couple of lesser-known tricks

Well, if you want to share some of those you can tall them to your old friend.
Title: cheesecake and ecchi
Post by: rtil on January 25, 2009 05:40 PM
i'm not really interested in photo manipulation, but i do have a lot of painting "tricks". it's mostly a matter of building a library of custom brushes that suit your painting style
Title: cheesecake and ecchi
Post by: texas on January 25, 2009 07:53 PM
how do you make custom brushes  
Title: cheesecake and ecchi
Post by: Fuzz on January 25, 2009 08:11 PM
Quote from: hickoryhow do you make custom brushes  
Adobe Illustrator
Title: cheesecake and ecchi
Post by: Flash on January 25, 2009 11:43 PM
apologies in advance for the long, long comment :b

I like the direction of effects, the "flow" of the piece, so to say. It's nice that you didn't try to spread the effects too much, two different directions is actually sort of the limit if you want your pic to look really nice, imo.

The effects themselves are pretty simple, but that's how it starts, of course. I'd recommend messing around with the smudge tool on the pic you used, as a way of setting up a "background" under an unaltered copy of the pic; filters like Ripple or Liquify can help, if not abused. After that, it's up to you - following rtil's suggestion of making custom brushes and using them, trying to make a few vexels with the pen tool, using the Displace filter, idk, that's for you to decide! You can do many different things.

What bothered me most about this piece, though, was that the effects were too bright, and the whole image was white/purple. A bit of contrast and color variety can do wonders. A good way of adding different, well-looking colors to a pic is getting a 0% hardness, 15-25% flow, big round brush. Then you choose a bright color and color the image in a separate layer (put the layer in "Lighten" or maybe "Screen"). It's the way I used to do it and it worked well; just a suggestion, though.

Another important part of it is treatment. You know the p&b circle at the bottom of the "Layer" window? Brightness/contrast, hue/saturation, gradient map, selective color, photo filter... These are all important. Then, you can always press ctrl+a to copy and paste the whole image on a single new layer, allowing you to use filters like sharpen, diffusion, blur etc.

I didn't like how the guy looks, you could have weakened the color of his face using the Sponge tool, and lessen the blur.

But it's really good for your 3rd piece.
Title: cheesecake and ecchi
Post by: Zwickel on January 27, 2009 02:53 AM
Now that's what I wanted, thanks for the review man.. yeah I'm really new at this but will take all of that in consideration. True, it's too purple, some hue changes would've helped.
Title: cheesecake and ecchi
Post by: billy on February 1, 2009 08:43 PM
Quote from: lenkabiscaboobs are soft n squishy
Title: cheesecake and ecchi
Post by: Zwickel on February 3, 2009 06:07 AM
Quote from: Billy
Quote from: lenkabiscaboobs are soft n squishy

some are hard and rigid