Well I decided to put some of my drawings all up on the B'. Tell me what you think.
First picture is this...
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"EVIL MARIO"
Yeah that's me as supreme ruler...It's not quite finished yet.
This is my hero...
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"Mr.Moose"
I just made him one day; sorry the picture's so small...cool I know...a moose with a top hat.
I'll add more stuff later.
-Mario (aka Icarus)-
your name is mario, sweet. cool hair, i like the perspective on it. you should try working it up and giving it bold outlines and color to get that propaganda-ish feeling. the moose is a little small, but he's a pretty cool cartoony doodle
Quote from: rtilyour name is mario, sweet. cool hair, i like the perspective on it. you should try working it up and giving it bold outlines and color to get that propaganda-ish feeling. the moose is a little small, but he's a pretty cool cartoony doodle
My hair doesn't look like that anymore ... but yeah most of the pictures I draw take
very little time so they end up messy.
I thought I should put this up. It's a comic strip I made in like 5 min. and it's very hard to read. It's about me and a friend finding a treasure map.
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"treasur hunt 1"
sence it's so hard to read I'll put what it says.
1st- "yeah... I rule"
2nd- "DAVID!"
3rd- WTF
4th- "Dude!" " I found a map"
5th- Mario- "It's got treasure and...stuff!"
David-" you broke through my door."
6th- "this is going to rule"
7th-" Mario-"Get dressed and meet me at the park at 3:00!"
David-"O...kay..."
8th- (at the park)" well it's 3:00...where is he?"
9th- Mario-" I told you to dress up."
David-" I didn't know that's what you meant."
10th-David-" shouldn't you be like a pirate or something? Because it's a treasure hunt?"
Mario- " yeah but ninjas are cooler"
11th- David "where are the shovels?"
Mario " Ninjas don't use shovels."
12th- David "Then where's the map?"
Mario " ninjas don't use maps."
David "Damn it Mario."
Man that was alot. Tell me what you think, and remember this was a really quick thing.
it's a little flat, but a nice quickie.
I like this comic, very funny indeed especially that little twist when the guy shows up dressed like a ninja. Great art too, I particularly like the "Evil Mario" pose and Mr. Moose looks like a real fun character design.
Thank for the comments. And now for the long awaited (not really) Treasure hunt 2!
I made this on like the last week of school(about 3 weeks after the first), and this one took a little longer then the first one but it's alot cleaner and easier to read; so tell me what you think.
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"Treasure Hunt 2"
I finally started working more on my "evil Mario" picture: cleaning it up and what not, and now all I'm going to do now is color it, but before I do tell me what you think, or what I should change.
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(Evil Mario with minions)
too many lines on the hair. save that detail for the coloring.
Ahah, simple drawings. You didn't kill them with shading and what not. Good for you.
Hey, haven't posted anything for a while, so I thought I would put up my last "Treasure Hunt" Comic.
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"Treasure Hunt 3"
to be honest, you got kind of worse.
^_^ POOP HAPPENS ^_^
Yeah, I wasn't all that proud of this one, people wanted me to make another one, so I just made one half assed one :/ just to finish it off in my half-assy way
Here's anoth comic of mine, it's just a one page, no meaning, half assed, comic that I drew. At first after I drew it I thought that it would make for a pretty good comic, but coming up with a story was...lack of a better word, hard...when I can come up with a somewhat decent story, and probably fix up the art I'll add more, oh and a name for it all the characters might be needed to...
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"Fantasy comic"
The characters hair is interesting but I don't get what's happening in the comic. Is he falling? Also the character seems to change a bit.
Quote from: LoathsomeThe characters hair is interesting but I don't get what's happening in the comic. Is he falling? Also the character seems to change a bit.
Yeah he's falling, more like sinking then falling (the first few panels he's in water) which is why his hair is like that. I know it doesn't make sence, I just kinda drew it. And about the change in drawing style, I don't know...sometimes I like to try out different faces, other times it's just me screwing up, in this case I think it was a little bit of both.
work on your line variation. for example, in the last panel, the buildings should have much thinner lines than the character, since the character is so much closer to the camera.you're flattening everything out by not having any line variation