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Post by: Slick on April 14, 2007 11:57 PM

http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/372806 (http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/372806)

One of these days I should really make a movie that has a point.

Or one that is actually funny.

This picture is something I did about a week ago, but it doesn't feel finished. Any ideas on what may improve or "complete" the picture would be really helpful.

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Post by: rtil on April 15, 2007 02:42 AM

the problem of it feeling unfinished is the vector art on top of the non-vector photo. hey're not mixing together very well. vector world should stay seperate from the real one. heh

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Post by: trent bortknob on April 15, 2007 06:01 AM

i don't know about what rtil said, I liked this

the reflections on the turntable looked really nice too

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Post by: rtil on April 15, 2007 06:18 AM

i nevre said i didn't like it ya big jERK

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Post by: trent bortknob on April 15, 2007 06:26 AM

/well all ya did was complaiun mna wahat wa I supposed to think with u whinin;' all over tha oplace

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Post by: rtil on April 15, 2007 06:37 AM

cuzx he asked wy1 so i said it!!!!!!!!!

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Post by: trent bortknob on April 15, 2007 06:47 AM

fuckinn prick!!!

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Post by: rtil on April 15, 2007 10:13 AM

banned, yo!!!!!!!!!!

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Post by: Slick on April 15, 2007 02:50 PM

There's so much love in this forum <3

Thanks for critique. Do you think it would look better if I vectorised the photograph then?

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Post by: rtil on April 15, 2007 04:54 PM

it's possible, or maybe vectored over it so you could still see a little bit of the texture of the board and all that jazz. cuz i know vectoring all that would take a little time.

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Post by: trent bortknob on April 15, 2007 06:14 PM

Quote from: rtilbanned, yo!!!!!!!!!!

man WTF???!?!?

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Post by: RobjaFalu on April 15, 2007 06:56 PM

I say leave it un-vectored. I think it looks pretty good. You took the lighting down in the picture which makes the vector work pretty well. You could strengthen up the value on the character, more darks, but other than that, I think it looks fine with it in a raster photo. Nice job!

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Post by: rtil on April 15, 2007 08:30 PM

Quote from: taylor
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banned, yo!!!!!!!!!!
man WTF???!?!?

y 4 u all hate me?!?!?!?! i'm leving 4eVR!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Post by: trent bortknob on April 15, 2007 08:33 PM

ok guys im leaving FOREVER im not comin back this time and you can't change my mind either!!!!

ok I'm back now

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Post by: Slick on April 15, 2007 08:42 PM

Okay thanks guys :] I'll try strengthening the contrasts in the characters and see how that looks RobjaFalu and I'll test out what you said rtil in a few places, if it looks good then I'll do the rest but I think it might take a bit too long.

EDIT

Thought I'd just edit this than post the image in a new reply. I changed the contrast a bit and also desaturated the photo. I then used a pink gradient so the colours are more monotone. I'm not sure if it's better or worse but I'll let you guys decide.

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