i'll upload assignments i liked and quick sketches here.
first is cheshire cat done in samurai jack style for character design, then a drawing i did in mspaint and colored in photoshop.
i like the face, almost a blissfully surprised expression. but it's just a bit too sketchy, i like sketchy, but thats just a bit too much.
I plan on working it up. Thanks
I like them both a lot. I don't have any real problems with them and I kind of like the sketchiness of the second one. I also really like the coloring of the second one. Could you point me in the direction of a good digital painting tutorial?
dude... that 2nd picture reminds me of when I used to try and scare my sister...
great sketches though I love the Chesire cat pics
Did anyone else get turned on by that cat?
finally someone said it!
fixed up the sketch a bit in photoshop
Much much better. Love the composition too.
i feel almost jealous.
EDIT: fully jealous now
wow, thats so much better, it's looks like more effort was put into it.
new character design stuff.
this time we take an animal ( i picked one called a 'galagos'), dress it up in armor (i picked riot gear), and do a turnaround, 3 action shots and 3 faces. some with armor, some without. all work done in flash except for 4 radial blurs on top right since flash is not even capable of making them
also, anyone have suggestions for the below painting? it's pretty rough atm, workin on it a lot tonight. be glad to hear some crits
Great job on the turn arounds. Very detailed and great.
The painting below seems to being in the right direction. You pushed the colours and the darks a lot. I don't see anything really needing a fix though. The character, i don't know how she looks, but I think her face is a little too manly if you ask me. Other than that, keep it up, it looks great!!!!
too manly, eh? that's the second complaint about the face today .. well, i'll see what i can do. it is still in a rough sketch kind of phase.
and yeah, i'm all about pushing lights and darks. well, looks like i won't finish it tonight, but i will post another one tommorow and you can see what i've done with it.
ok, update. crits everyone!
i'm getting there with the sketch lines. i am starting at that arm and spreading out the work, heh
still on the right track. Awesome job! I can't wait for the finished result. Nice mood you set.
Her arm upper arm seems a little thick to me...really for me its just the arm that bothers me
Other than that and its roughness around the edges, looks great. Love the colors
really? i thought her arm might have actually been too skinny.
here's another update. let me know what you think people.
Much better. Finish that plz
tOTLY NARLY RTIL HOW FAST DID U DO THEM???~?~?~?~ on the other hand im trying to git better and did this one in 5 min. it suxxx ....Go to fast drawings to see i cant put it here it wont let me...
you're not supposed to put your work in my topic anyway, 2poc.
here is the last assignment in character design at my school: superheroes. you make yourself the hero, and a partner in you class the villian. i sort of switched it around and made myself the villian.
my character is Noise Machine. I was blinded as a child when a little girl opened up a can of shaken pop in my face, and the acid burned my eyes. in the hospital i realized i could 'see' without my eyes, and i had superior hearing which could allow me to navigate and know what is around me without my eyes. so, i left the hospital, bandages and all. i started putting sound equipment all over me, and used it to my advantage. i carry a keyboard and huge speakers can come out of my back, emitting painfully loud low and high frequencies to mess up what's around me.
one time i sneezed and a girl was walking under a construction site, and the sneeze was so loud a bunch of construction equipment fell on the girls head, including two large screws and a plug for a huge outlet. she survived, but everything she touched after that was electrocuted, and almost everything metal would cling to her. so she vowed to destroy the person that ruined her life. and that was me. she became 9 Volt, and used her new unwanted powers to learn how to manipulate metal in manners she wanted, and channel her electric energy.
little did i know the girl i had given the powers to was the girl who opened the can of soda in my eyes as a child. once we both knew who eachother were, we were both pitted eachother forever. wreckless with no regard for what is around us, we destroy and eliminate for only one target -eachother.
wicked art work but in the first side view of "9 Volt" her face looks a little protruding, like a mouse or something of that caliber. awesome battle scenes though, they look vary... epic.
yeah, i'll be fixing her side view. thanks
it's what i do.
the drawings of noise machine looked really cool except for the back view of him. Something about that looked off to me
you did a lot of great stuff on the fight scenes. the positions and coloring were great
you should turn this into another series along with freetown and all of the other cartoobns you make that way you'll never have to time tyo finish anything
ya just wahat a need anotha series!!!!!
notthin like some hard work it builds character!
Damn you rtil, your art is soo neat.
Love the chars and the pics.
Great works Rtil. I do agree with everyone else. The turn arounds for 9 volt, her side pose looks awkward. And i'm partial noise makers extremely broad shoulders. They seem to unnatural, and even painful for the character. Everything else though is pretty dead on. The lighting is pretty neat and the action shots are really stellar.
many people have complained about 9volt's side view, i'm repainting part of it today for the critique tommorow.
Makin 9-Volt hentai, brb
eyy none of that this is a charicature of a real person close to me that would be bad
anyway never gonna touch these again, updated model sheet for 9 volt and added a real bg to the 1st action shot
thats too bad, because her nose is still too big, and her chin is still to small. but if you wanna be a quitter.
Woah, the superhero/villan ones are the best ever. Noise Machine looks sweet, but the fighting pictures are the best.
You're artwork is so hardcore :]
It's inspiring. I love it. And your designs are so crazy. I really hope you finish the one with the girl smoking, it's awesome. I love these new ones also
i want to finish that painting real bad. i think i'm going to bring it into painter and see if i can do it there, because i'm having some issues getting the feel i want in photoshop. thanks , doodle
Quote from: Dagoliththats too bad, because her nose is still too big, and her chin is still to small. but if you wanna be a quitter.
haha , i like her nose! i think i'll cop out and say
it's my styleQuote from: RichChapWoah, the superhero/villan ones are the best ever. Noise Machine looks sweet, but the fighting pictures are the best.
that seems to be the consensus, and i can agree on that since they are actually full formed and dynamic
Quote from: CoolDrMoneyMakin 9-Volt hentai, brb
yeh man that would be 3h p2n3abgea XD X3 XP XA XFAD DSAdfkmas.
WHBAT THAT FUCK TAYLOR! YOU FUCKING HAVE NOTHING BETTER TO DO!?!?! WHA TA FK~!:L?
Also I was wondering with noise machine, what happens to his arms when those bandages unwrap. They just seem to vanish. Im guessing its intentional, but an explanation would be nice : (
he begins to unwravel due to the intense amount of sound waves he is emitting through himself. i mostly did it because it looks cool.
Hey rtil, please refrain yourself of stretching the boards with your uploads, thank you.
Hahahha, man, I like the turnaround a lot, the consistence...awesome.
Yeah, it looks really awesome :]
Your superhero artwork is some of your greatest work RT. I would be lying if I said it wasen't
Wow imo you should do some little short cartoon thing with the Superhero thing, it looks awesome.
this didn't really turn out the way i wanted it to , but fgjaerg4j
I love the colouring and the shading on this piece, and I love how you've done the smoke.
The thing that's been bothering me a bit about this picture is the face, and mainly the cheek on the right. You've drawn it as if it were a 3/4 view (at least, that how it appears to me) but the rest of her face looks like a frontal view, in which the cheek wouldn't be so pronounced.
@_@
>_>
i like the definition in the elbow, it makes it look more like an arm than it did before.